| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I had high expectations for this chapter and I was not disappointed! I am so happy with everyones reactions! I can't wait until Sesshoumaru figures out what his eldest son knows! I can just imagine Sesshoumaru pestering Kagome though the link about who she was looking at! The only reason I don't feel bad about laughing about the monk getting beaten up is because we all know he likes it. I can't wait to see what plans you have or Rin. I get the feeling that this will not be the last of the akward situations caused by the link to each others minds that Sesshoumaru and Kagome have. I have always kind of liked Kagura even though she isn't really a good character... I hope she plays an interesting role in the story... it looks like she will too **giggles** I don't know who could make them but if the eve do make Jaken squeeze toys, I would need to buy about a hundred of them to handle my stress and amusement. Well, I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 15, 2007 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 28 and I must say that you out did yourself on this one. Ohh this story is getting really good. Kaede is a smart miko cause she figured it out already while it should be obvious to the group. Oh and I think Sesshomaru might get jealous later cause he will be wondering who Kagome is going to fall in love with. At least one of his sons figured it out. I hope Kagura doesn't get caught for what she is doing. I wonder what Naraku is planningn to do now. The insight on Kagome's dad was good to I would have never thought of that. This just keeps getting better and better. I just can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if Kagome and Sesshomaru are going to get there talk with out anyone around. Ohhh so many questions and to far to go to get the answers. Won't find out to later chapters huh!!! Just wanted to say that this was a really good chapter had me on the edge of my set and when I got to the end I was like no way I have to read more, more.LOL Hope to see a new chapter soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 21:08 EDT
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oh wow how sad I wouldnt know what to do with myself if I had children and never got to see them grow up and have to wait to see if I would even get to meet them again
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 15, 2007 20:16 EDT
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aww this chapter was incredibly sweet! I just love the romance action going on secretly.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 16:04 EDT
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Nyeh! I promise I'm not a cop. lol. I'm a fifteen-turing-sixteen year old and I have spare time, which I choose to spend online. Is Naraku going to kidnap Kags? Agh! I can't wait for more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-babs_sexy_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 23:46 EDT
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YAAAA EVEYONE IS MAKING UP YAAAA!!!! Great Chapter, now that Kagomes back things can start getting really juicy, LOL jk, anyway, love the story and i cant wait till tomarrow!!! Tottles.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Kagome is back and Inuyasha finally got some proper blood flow to his brain. Sesshoumaru's back must be rather enlightening. Perhaps he should sit in Goshinboku AND stare at Sesshoumaru's back... maybe it would permanently repair the constriction of blood flow to his brain... **sigh** I know I am always saying how smart Inuyasha is supposed to be, but in this fic, he really seems to have a hard time thinking through his emotions... I'm just relived to see that he finally gets it is all. He also understands Kagome quite well, but we have already seen that in this story. I guess his strange approach to this whole situation can be related to how he was messed up by Kikyou. Enough about Inuyasha. Ok, one more thing, I had an extended giggle fit when i read the line "...the big bastard and his herd of little bastards were camping out by the well...". I just thought you would like to know that! Also, from chapter 26, I love the shopping seen and I totally agree. There are some modern conveniences that cannot be parted with. I am so glad that everyone is sitting down and the things are going to get out in the open. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! I don't know when I will get to review, because I foresee life getting in the way... I think I could use a Jaken bug-eye stress squeeze toy this week. Someone should make those... really.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 14, 2007 18:00 EDT
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I thought it was quite the funny mental picture as well. I do say I loved this chapter. And finally were at the point where kagome spills and hopefully they get on the hunt to find her daddy!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Good chapter! You should post another one today..*wink wink nudge nudge*
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Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well you already know how much I love your fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I love the fact that you can think of each chapter in just a day!!!! no easy task in my eyes!!!!!!!!!!! and yet you come out with amazing chapter after amazing chapter...wow!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 14, 2007 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting so good. Sorry about the late updates, exams.:( I just read the chapter you posted and I have to say that Inuyasha is to jealous. He of figured it out by now but unlike his friends he is kind of slow to get it.LOL. Sesshomaru being sad that was such a cute part. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Its just keeps getting better and better. Ohhh, I wonder what will happen next. I think Kagome's mom knows more then she is letting on about everything. Since she already told Kagome some things. I think she is still keeping Kagome in the dark about other things. That's good you did that cause it makes for good suspence. I like this story very much and hope that you continue to write it and maybe another. Though I do wonder what Kouga is going to do since he doesn't get the message and there still is Naraku left out there. Ohhh so much suspence in just one story. Getting to good.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 13, 2007 23:14 EDT
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that is true. Mommies make everything alright and better. It's just that mommy way..lol And holy moly Kagome bought A LOT!! geez i can see fluffy now loaded to the ground like an SUV and kagome saying MUSH like hes a sled dog...hahaha!! fluffy and his pups are sled doggies!! wee..whoops..i better run fluffy may want to kill me for that statement oO
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inuyasha he is soooo clueless it seems ....... I'm about 6 and half months along actualy and this is baby three and last my oldest is four too she loves inuyasha she like to run around the house playing songo and my youngest who is two like to run around saying she is shippo (or ippo as she calls him) the funny thing is she has the shocking red hair for it too lol
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Reviewed By: Inu-babs_sexy_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 21:55 EDT
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AWWWWWWWW!!!! She got something for everyone, how cute, sesshy should give her a big huge when she gives it to him, and she needs to sit inu for what he said to the boys, ooo do i feel sorry for him if she hears him say that in front of her, anywho love the story and i cant wait till tomarrow YAY
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 13:27 EDT
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Definitely. You are my numero uno drug dealer. lol. What a weird conversation. Anywho. Loving the story, can't wait for more!
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