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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 19:52 EDT
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All I have to say about this last part of the chapter is: FINALLY! Great job, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Thanks for the double chapters! I really, really liked the last one.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: October 21, 2007 17:44 EDT
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Two chapters in one day! :) (>'o')> 2
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this just gets better and better each time.....and 2 updates in one day ohh hoow you spoil us.....how long do you thinkk your going to make it?......keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that your day at least started out better! I am also glad that you liked my comment. I wrote that sentence down right after I read that paragraph. There was only one way to describe it, so I wanted to get it down. I throughly enjoyed this chapter! Kagura was on her way... so she had to show up sometime right? ...And what really old guy (who happens to have the body of a god and I don't mean Buddha) not react in such a way to a young and very healthy woman in a string bikini when he has never seen or heard of such a thing? Add that to the fact that she is undoubtedly "pure" and she is in no way looking embarrassed by her attire. Frankly I'm surprised he didn't fall over in a dead faint, but nearly drowning was close enough. That would have been an amusing cause of death for the great Sesshoumaru!... Oh yeah, this chapter... Once my mind goes off on a tangent there really is no graceful way of pulling it back. I really found that eating my burrito was made difficult when my jaw would go slack in reaction to Sesshoumaru's comments. He's such a dirty old dog. Those pups have got to be the best kids in the world... but I am fully aware that they are there are no such children anywhere... so sad... If they were like that I wouldn't mind having seven of them... I am looking forward to seeing Inuyasha as a beta male. He really kind of sucks as an alpha because he's so damned moody. He can't help it though... I can't wait until the night of the new mood.... hehehehe... ok 'nuff of that. Your chapter has my brain dancing all around trying to avoid hentai land... can't wait till tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 20, 2007 16:24 EDT
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Oh cranky woman syndrome! I get a lot accomplished during that stage of moods. Surprisingly i haven't killed anyone to get things done..yet. And this chapter was wonderful! i had tears of mirth falling down my face with kagome telling sesh to drop his pants!. Oh and i think you'd like this song. Check it out its got a good beat and maybe will help your mood ^^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9ZQuEd3Q6c
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 19, 2007 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope everything goes ok with you. Hope you get through everything that you are going through. I see that didn't hinder you in the least about the chapter. I loved it. That scene with Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, and Kagome was so cute. I should have known that they would have dirty thoughts about Kagome. The scene where Sesshoumaru and Kagome was just so sweet. You got me by surprise when both of them started to talk about Sesshoumaru's arm.I would have never thought of that. I liked it though. At least Sesshoumaru knows that Kagome is not disgusted by him. I do wonder though if he will ever get his arm back. Ohh I just can't wait to see what happens when Kagome has to clean the wound on Sesshoumaru's leg. I know that you will make that real good. Hope to see another chapter soon cause this was just so good. I hope that everything goes good for you.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: October 19, 2007 18:58 EDT
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"Thank Kami for Jaken naked. Wait, no, I didn't just think that." Holy FN Hell! That's the funniest quote ever.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 19, 2007 18:29 EDT
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I hope your night is better then your day. Its never to good to be in a pouty sad or off rocker mood. I know i was today as well and i kinda ate basically everything in the house. So essentially i feel like a fat hippo but what can i do? Abosuletly nothing now. I know it wasn't good to eat all that food but i did...But i do say this chapter was incredibly lovey dovie. And it made my day! So thank you for posting. And the next chapters title sounds hilarious! i can't wait to see what will happen in it.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 17:16 EDT
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I'm sorry you had a bad day today. =( It was a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had the experience of laughing my ass off while shuddering in disgust and feeling slightly nauseated. I'm sure that you know what part of the chapter I am talking about… I don't know if I want a Jaken squeezie toy anymore… I loved the whole chapter. It was really a great read and I am glad that Inuyasha didn't have as much fun as Sesshoumaru... that would have been uncomfortable. I so adore those hip stripes... Inuyasha's ears are extremely cute, but those stripes can be described as nothing less than sexy and that may not be strong enough of a word. I hope the rest of your day goes better and that tomorrow is great. Nothing can ruin a day quite like spilling somethign on a keyboard... I liked the explanation of mokomoko. It makes sense. You definitely have me looking forward to the next chapter! See you tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I'm sorry you're having a bad day. Good chapter, I really enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 18, 2007 19:13 EDT
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Amazing! I love it. I can't wait to see what will occur next!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really didn't know what to expect for the battle seen. I think it was perfect. Every part of it was perfect. I didn't really think that Kagome was going to walk away like that, but it couldn't have bee any other way. The scene where the kids went and fetched her was really sweet. I'm betting that the next chapter will be quite interesting. There it seems that there is a lot of potential in the next chapter, but I have the feeling that there is only one way things could turn out from where it was left and I really have no idea what it is. I can hardly wait to find out! Ahh, I don't know what is going to happen because I don't know what anyone is thinking except Kagome! Well, I can think of some things that they might be thinking, like Sesshoumaru's reaction to Kagome's bathing suit... I will be so happy when you pos the next chapter! I can't wait to kind out what will happen... and if Kagura will crash the party...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: October 18, 2007 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 31 and I must say that it was a very good fight. I would have thought that the mokomoko was Sesshoumaru's tail but that can work to. I wonder how it moves on its own. Maybe because if Sesshoumaru's power. Ohhh I wouldn't have thought of Kagome walking off when they were hurt. Though that did come to a surprise to me but I liked it. At least the pups went out and looked for her. You can tell that they really care about her and want her as a mom. I hope Kagome can see that. Jaken needs to get over himself, thinking that Sesshoumaru is under a spell. I hope that Kagura reaches them in time before Naraku finds out. Though I don't like her all that much, she just wants to be free. I wonder what would happen while they are at the springs. I'm thinking that it would take awhile before Sesshoumaru and Kagome find out they like or love each other. I just can't wait. From the looks of things it would seem like it would be a Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, and Kagome thing. I hope that it is a Sesshoumaru and Kagome thing. Just that just likes Inu as a brother or friend. Anyways, I can't wait for the bath scene cause I want to know how they would react. Ohh just getting to good. I know that you will make the next chapter even better. I can't wait. When I had saw that you had seen you wrote a chapter very early I was like I can't wait to get home and see what you written next. Hope to see the next chapter soon. I know that it will be good.
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