| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait to read more about Sessy's visit to Kagome's time. Poor Hojo. Poor Koga, when they return. I can't wait to read more! This is the first time I've reviewed a fic, I'm hooked. Moon Goddess.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 16:06 EST
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Yeah! This chapter was so good! I really can't wair until the next chapter comes out! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 16:05 EST
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OMG only 5 reviews? If I didn't review, it was because I didn't feel like signing in... BUT I still loved every moment of it. I'm glad that you put up your facebook and everything so we can all keep in touch. I can't wait to see what Sesshy does to Hojo! I always figured Hojo to be the annoyingly thoughtful fool...
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your name on myspace showed up on my friends list. my myspace name is milleniumstaff, my photo is the girl in the red car. anyway i'll comtact u myspace. greta chapter hes in the future cool. got some questions; does he meets kagomes friends? does he meet hojo? does kagome gets to take him to the supermarket or any 'human' places like she does with inuyasha? does he notice inuyasha's scent in her room/house? are there any lemons while they r in the 07? im just wondering well any herat chapt cant wait for the next one love syoze
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a challenge? I like that. I would be delighted if I fail to meet it though because I like twists in a story as long as they do not depart from logic... within the universe of the story of course... It was a good chapter. I look forward to seeing how Keade works with the kids, what Inuyasha is getting ready to attack and how Sesshoumaru fares in the future. I hope you put up the next chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 20:39 EST
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Yay for subjugation spells!!!! Never thought I would say that! I've been watching the old episodes on veoh.com, and it's so funny in the beginning! Good luck getting the decorations all put up! Have a great holiday! I can't send you and Destiny a card this year, seeming as I am in mexico right now, and you had to send the mail extra early this year due to the huge rains and hurricanes they had earlier this year. boo. any way, fabulous story! thanks for updating so regularly!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 04, 2007 19:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story gets better with every chapter a read. Are you a professional writer? It seems like it. I was beginning to wonder when we'd get to find out the word Kagome picked for Sesshoumaru. Down boy is great. Thinking about how Sesshoumaru can be, I believe having him drop to his knees is perfect. But two commands? Did not see that coming. I also loved it a few chapters back when Inuyasha got his gift of control. Now, when does Sess get his gift of his arm back? Keep up the good work, update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read about Sesshoumaru in the modern era.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 17:27 EST
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AH!!! How could you! A cliffie!!! NO!!!! I want to know what happends next! I MUST know!!!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 15:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I have been wondering what side effects Sesshoumaru's hair would have on the spell. Interesting that more than one word or phrase will subjugate him. I guess that makes since because it's like the necklace is two in one... It woulds really suck if the same command for Inuyasha ends up working for both of them antecedently now that there seems to be extra subjugation words tied to that spell... Perhaps the change in the spell that allowed for the phrase to be used has just as much to do with the extra word thing as the hair in the necklace... Now, if she could subjugate both brothers simultaneously on purpose... that could be useful... as long as releasing them was simple. Kagome should consider altering Inuyasha's spell so that she can release him if he needs it... but they should probably not play around with that too much when a battle might be brewing... I'll have to check out that story you mentioned. I am glad you found it. Oh. and I didn't expect Miroku's confession to Sango to go that way... Go Miroku!!!
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 02:12 EST
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do you have to ask? GIVE US SOME SAN/MIR LEMONS!!!!
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Reviewed By: redroseonblacksatin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 06:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome i look forward to every chapter
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I know what story you are talking about. I think it was called "Cross Dressing Mess" But I think the paring on that one is Inu/Kag... I read some of the story, but I got into other ones and I forgot to bookmark or favorite it, so i am not sure. Anyway, on to the story... I think I know what you are going to do about the Subjugation word!!! I think you are going to change Inu's word to a phrase like "Inuyasha, sit" and that way... his life will be easier... and Kagome can still use a dog command for Sesshoumaru. I know you didn't think you could slip that one by me! I just wish I had thought of it before... I really liked this chapter and I would comment on all of the great little things here and there, but I am on a borrowed computer, so, just know that I really liked it!
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Reviewed By: Mika-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 17:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you're on Chapter 52, and the real journey hasn't even started yet. You're such a cool writer, one the best stories I have ever read. You always keep me on edge with the way you write. You are soo cool. Can't wait for next chapter. Mika-sama
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 16:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock! plz update soon! T.B.A
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: November 29, 2007 22:35 EST
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I'm glad you're feeling better. I'm actually currently out of work and my husband is having to work overtime. My last job was stressful because I got sick at the beginning of the year and they wouldn't accept the doctor's note (against their policy). Since absences never go away and sick time doesn't excuse them, I was working with high stress because I couldn't even be late ever. He told me I could quit and I made provisions for a few weeks before I did, thinking I'd have a job by now, but I don't and it's been over a month. :( Wish me luck. Thank you for cheering me up with your story.
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