| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 09:16 EDT
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I love your story it is very wonderful I would like an update to when you finish a chapter, crunyon41230@yahoo.com I enjoy this very much and hope to see more
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Reviewed By: MLMonty On: July 27, 2008 05:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hope your writers block gives way soon. I'm looking forward to more when it does.
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Reviewed By: Garret On: July 18, 2008 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uppdating soon? Its a very good story you got here, but it seems like we all will have to wait for it to continue for now. lol Kagome got dog blood and Hojo is in the funny farm, well that should keep him out of the way for Sessy and Kagome. Hm seems like Rin is remembering Koga from before she was killed, if she tells Sassy about what happend its gona be one wolf less in the world soon.
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Reviewed By: Sango-san On: June 23, 2008 13:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totaly know what you mean! ^_^ Take all the time you need. I highly recomend taking a trip to your local library or art museum. I often find that the best inspiration comes from something as simple as a picture in a book or a beautiful painting. One of my best inspirations came from an Edger Alan Poe poem. Tell Tale Heart. Good luck and I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Larxene Makoto Rozheinkruze On: June 16, 2008 02:29 EDT
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Hey hun you evergonna update this? I wanna see the rest!!!
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Title: critique
Reviewed By: dishy On: May 31, 2008 11:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this story was well thought out (as far as I could read). However as someone who is aware of Japanese history and the character's personalities I couldn't make it past chapter 13. This saddens me because it seemed like this story has a really good plot but the absolute disregard to Japanese historical lifestyle and the characters quick changes in personality lost it for me. Anyway, I really do like your writing style and I think the story is very good for those who don't have the pet peeves of a Japanese student. I just thought I'd give my honest opinion since I wanted to read more but couldn't. Best of luck with the rest of the story and future endeavors.
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 03:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have two questions. The first, of course, is when are you going to update? The second is when are they going to return to the past so they can be re-united with the pups? To you, the writer, it may be only days they've been in the future, but with all the stuff taking place in her time and sometimes long intervals between updates, to the reader it seems like a long time. I miss the interaction between her and the pups. That is a sweet and important part of the story. Maybe it's just me, but I feel like I'm beginning to lose sight of the original plot of the story.
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Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: soulfire17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! It's a wonderful read and I can't wait for the next update. Oh yeah good luck with the new routine as well.
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Reviewed By: lady fluffy On: May 10, 2008 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This, in my opinion, is very well written like the Syndrome which i am also reading. it has taken me almost 2 week to get to this point in the story, and threw the whole thing i have either been rolling in laughter specially at the pranks on Koga, i love the guy but he does need to lean a lesson, or i have squealing in anticipation for to be able to read the next chapter. Understanding why you are taking a break, i have done the same thing and reading your stuff has helped me get back into writing, i will be happily and anxiously awaiting the next chapter to find out what happens to all the happy characters. Till your return, Wench
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 10:01 EDT
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I love the story, and can't wait for you to update!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: shaliny14 On: April 30, 2008 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SORRY forgot to post that^^
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: shaliny14 On: April 30, 2008 16:46 EDT
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ummmm where do i start...ok you have made so many awesome fic i loved them all iave read them all and i wish i could write somethingeven remotly awesome to any of your storys but i love reading them just the same your an awesome writer and i hope you never stop its really a gift
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Title: ZOMG
Reviewed By: Szira^.^Face On: April 29, 2008 09:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG! I have been reading like ALL your stories when I really should have been doing my homework, infact it's 6:02 AM and it's due in about 6 hrs and it's not even half done, my point being... I'M SO ADDICTED TO YOUR STORIES! omg. like srsly, I LOVE sessh/kaggy fics and yours are amazing, i can't WAIT for more, of this one and The Syndrome, and What Your Eyes Did to Me. omg you get like millions of less than threes!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 22:27 EDT
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i love both of ur stories u take ur time in both! keep up the amazing work and i'll keep up reading ;) kk
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I LOVE your story. I stumbled across it while screening some stories for the IYFG awards, and was instantly hooked. I've spent the better part of the last week or two reading every chapter during my free time between boyfriend, class and work. It is such an amazing story, and I cannot wait until you have the inspiration to write more to it. I'll definitely look into your other stories, especially The Syndrome as you seem to be really happy about that one. I'd love to be added to any of your update lists, but especially for She Who the Procephy Foretold. My email is ktshabatie @ gmail . com (spaced in case it doesn't want to show it.) I hope that everything works out in your life right now and that you have enough time and your muse comes back to dedicate to this story again!
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