| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Title: what arm?
Reviewed By: mgmt On: August 13, 2011 16:02 EDT
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i am very confused in this chapter didnt you give sesshomaru back his arm? because now he does not have one |
Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 11:37 EDT
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WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! This fanfic is really goood and I love it!!! I know you're takinqq a break, but I hope you update soon.!
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Reviewed By: arigato-chan On: September 06, 2010 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason i scored the author 9/10 on the two things is because I've been waiting for the author to finish the story for 2 years now. please hurry and finish
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 22:33 EDT
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Please don't forget about this story, I haven't seen an update in a while.
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous story, really enjoying it. Very sad to have noticed a two year gap from updates.. I understand changing lives.. hope maybe you finished it on some other site
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Title: When
Reviewed By: silence11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2010 23:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I was just wondering when you were going to update this story. i really like this one and would love to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: Tomoe Ichirou On: February 15, 2010 05:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm can't really say what make your work so good because I don't really figure what makes a story fascinating and addictive; I just know that your definitely does. But I can't help but notice insignificants cultural errors, so I'll niptick about it. Maybe it'll help make your next work even more flawless, maybe I'm just being an annoyance... Here it is: You make Sesshoumaru write with a quill and a bottle of ink. That's a western writing implement. They used (and still use for artistic calligraphy and painting) brush of warous width depending on the size of caracters to be writen, and solid ink that's rubbed over a special smoothly polished black stone with a little water to abrase the solid ink into fine particles that get suspended ino the water. Preparing enough ink to write actually takes up more time than writing does. But a brush will make much more beautiful writing than a pointball pen... It's all about the variation of width of the lines drawn. So the modern implement for a traditional looking writing is a sort of pen with a reserve of liquid ink in it's entire body and a brush at the tip. The body of the pen is a little supple so you can press to get more ink down to the brush if it dries up, and it can be opened to refill out of a large bottle of liquid black ink. Kagome would have bought a few of those in various width and some large bottles of ink to refill.
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Reviewed By: Greengrl32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 16:33 EST
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I absolutely love this story!!! I can't wait until you write more... if you write more. I noticed that you haven't written in a while and I understand that if you don't continue the story but I really hope that you do continue it!!!
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Title: Curious
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suppose, like all the others, I'm just curious to see if you are planning to finish this - it has been one hell of an entertaining read. I totally adore the pranks on Kouga, he always did annoy me, and the whole Hojo thing as well - he was just as annoying as Kouga. Please, let me know if you do inted to finish... definitely worthy of being favorited! Amber
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 17:26 EDT
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I love this story! It is without a doubt one of my ultimate favorites. I've read it through many times, patiently waiting for the next update. i'm sure you're getting tired of these, but it has been more then a year since you've update...are you continuing the story? and anytime soon? try not to keep your fans waiting much longer!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedFury On: August 28, 2009 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A-MAZE-ING one of the best sesskags I have ever read. if you would please email me when you post the next chapter that would be wonderful. my email address is kaleigh_macinnis@hotmail.com thank you.
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Reviewed By: aislin94 On: June 09, 2009 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue this story, it's really good, and I want to know how it continues!
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Title: NaturesPhoenix
Reviewed By: NaturesPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 22:59 EDT
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I love this story! This is the fourth time I've read it through. I'm curious though, after more than a year, are you going to be updating anytime soon or are you discontinuing it? I know many people who are just waiting for the next update. So if you could let us know it would be very much appreciated.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 14:30 EDT
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CMK2CMM......why I know that you said it would be awhile until you would update again but its been over a year....I had a hard time remembering what the title of the story was so I could leave a comment and ask....ya I understand its not easy but you did say you would continue....It's just so sad this story is like aways on my mind even when I'm reading other one's....I really really really really want you to continue, I want to see this through please, I feel like something is just left unsaid in my head...sigh* probably don't make sence but still....please update.....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Natures_Phoenix On: February 21, 2009 17:49 EST
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I love this story. I read all 79 chapters in 5 days! Please continue soon. I really want to know why souta's eyes turned blue, is Kagome turning into a dog demon miko? Why did kagome's mom act like she knew what the ring was? What is Rin in all this? AAAAAAARRRRRRHHHHHH! I NEED TO KNOW! Love this fic by the way!
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