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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that they got back to their own time... kagome is taking it quite hard to being away from inuyasha... wonder how inuyasha is doing... kirara is just so cute... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Mikogirl13 On: February 09, 2008 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is like...WOW! You have to write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fairygirl13 On: February 09, 2008 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on write more please!Please I'm dieing to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 14:02 CST
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Second reading, and still I laughed and smiled, but again, Kagome's confusion and pain came through clearly. Hopefully her family will help with that. It was a busy time, on 'the other side' and she's probably still in shock. Hard to go from spending day and night with someone in that circumstance, relying on them for your food and safety, and then to return to the 'real world' and separation. She'll be back with IY soon enough, though (right? right?) and the adventure/frustration/ aggrivation can begin again!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well Kagome breaking down as soon as she walks in is not going to settle her mother's fears or anxiety. I am glad that they got back alright but I am sure that there will be questions to be answered as to how they ended up popping out of no where if anyone recognized Inuyasha. And of course Kikyo got away again. She is such a pest.
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Title: Dangerously in Love
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two months that is a long time to not hear from someone. I feel for Kagome though, you can tell Inuyasha and Kagome both have something for eachother, she can't even stand being away from him for two days! I think it cute, she's so head over heels for him. Well can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even if its 2 days... i nearly had myself in tears.... god lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 06:52 CST
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two days, she's only going to be gone for two days!! yeah, i know, new love... it's a killer. get all sappy and stuff. . . i am trying to stay up for at least 24 hours so i can get my days and nights straightened out and i'm a bit loopy so please excuse my not making sense and rambling. i enjoyed that chapter and i am always impressed with how you keep cranking them out... good stuff and so quickly. . . i must get up and move before i veg out in this chair. ~ =) ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooo they got back home?? should have left Kikyo back with Naraku >.< lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 01:43 CST
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impressive fighting skills all, is kagome going to start glowing pink and shooting purifying arrows (hama no ya) that can purify any youkai that come too close? . . all we need is a baby kitsune and the gang's complete! . . . cool, they injured naraku! ~ a pleasure as always, ginny
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chappie, If I was Kagome i would've kicked kikyo right outta Inuyasha's arms or somthing. Could have left her there with Naraku....
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 17:30 CST
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Hmmmm, first real run in with Naraku. They didn't do to badly. Back to the future, eh? Or at least Tokyo. If it's true that N has most of the formula, then it may be wise to return home and regroup. Although I'm sure that the trouble hasn't left them, by a long shot!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so they finally met up with naraku but had to leave just as fast... and inuyasha brought kikyo back with them... what drama will occur... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Roxie, you did it again. Bravo! Great job! But damn, Inuyasha has to be so damn gallant and pick up Kikyo to take her through the portal. *giggle* I loved how Kagome is showing so much strength. Go Kagome!!!! Terrific job. But where's the hentai? LOL (just kidding)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice intro to one of my favorite characters, Kirara. So typical of Kikyo to think that she has Inuyasha wrapped around her finger when he starts to prefer Kagome. Can Kikyo sense the portals too like Kagome can or is Kagome the only one that can? Can't wait to find out the answer to that and the other questions I have and am sure I am going to have before this ends. Keep up the good work. The only problem I had with this chapter was the first letter or symbol of each line was cut off. I could tell what was going on by context but you might want to find out why before more gets cut.
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