| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] |
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Title: Way to go!
Reviewed By: calypso_689 On: November 02, 2010 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy smoke! We knew you could write, and write well at that, but this story is simply incredible.The plot is well developed and the language is good. The grimness we encounter in the beginning is balanced out nicely by the warmth and sweetness we feel as the story ends. Trust me, if I could, i would give you 20 of 10 in the overall rating. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: malea.anne On: May 18, 2010 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hullo! i thought that fic was fantastic. it was definitely a tear-jerker. although i wanted ichigo to suffer more. maybe i'm just mean. i wanted rukia to take a stand - to say no. i also wanted her to leave ichigo, period just so he can feel what he put her through. but i understand this fic was more of rukia's POV. and i get that ichigo apologized alot. maybe i'm just being vindictive. i truly enjoyed this fic. thank you.
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Reviewed By: darklori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite. I have a thing for heartache. (I'm not Emo, I swear!) Angst through and through. Loved it, read it over and over, even dreamt of it once. Rukia seems so broken, yet it's so like her to still stand by Ichigo no matter what, still managing to forgive him with nothing more than a kiss. Damn, I wish Ichigo worked harder to win her back, just to even things up. I absolutely hate Ichi here, there are times during the fic when I'll suddenly mutter, 'damn bastard'. I probably scared a couple of people in Starbucks.
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Title: 10
Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad i passed by this fic when it's already finished because i think i'm gonna get frustrated with all the waiting :D love this fic. i just hope no guy is as dense, in love that is, as your fictional ichigo.
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Reviewed By: burdened soul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi Tituba, I ignord my exam, and came here at your advice. you never fail to dissapoint your rdeaers with original plots and ideas. I was angry at first to have Ichigo mistreat Rukia like that (a feminist is talking), but lets face it, you were being realistic in portraying her emotions. I salute you ^^ and yes, reality sucks (obsessed with realism) yaaaaay! I love the way you portrayed Orihime. god knows how much I hate her. I just wanna go there and slap her a couple of times. I'll continue reading for now ^^ I'll be back god willing with another review
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 00:37 CDT
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ah...another great story...It makes me want to have that type of love in the future..but i have to find my ichigo first XD gonna move onto another one of your stories now...but keep it up since uare an amazing writer and i cant wait to read any of your new work that u may come up with...thanks for the great story
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories so much. It's WAY past the time I need to be asleep and I don't really care. This was a brillant piece of work. ^__^ It truly is wonderful, just like all of your other stories. You're doing a wonderful job!!!=] Keep up the great great GREAT work!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are probably the best author i know! this story was just beautiful!!! it was so heart felt and wonderful!!! I LOVED READING EVERY CHAPTER!!! BUT ALL GREAT THINGS HAVE TO COME TO AN END SOMETIMES, EVEN THIS!!! anyway, you are such an AMAZING writer!!! i'v loved all of you're fic's and this one especialy!!!! well it was AWESOME!!! PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE GREAT STORYS!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT STORY YOU'LL COME UP WITH NEXT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, tituba, you have done it once again. I love the way you use your clearly creatively elite writing skills in this one. it was awesome, but....it somehow left me unfulfilled. the ending wasn't as good as Murder My Heart, and the storyline wasn't as good as Tale of a Pheonix. it was great, don't get me wrong, but it just isn't as good as some of your past works. My favorite fic of yours will most likely always be ONS and More. that was one of the best stories I've read on any site, and the firt ichiruki lemon that I found. One thing that I DID enjoy was that Kaien didn't die. I was anticipating that, but it never happened. kinda gave the story a classic "and they all lived happily ever after" fell. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 03:10 CDT
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ive got a strange feeling that im reading an eva fic...i dunno. feels like it(maybe im just reading too much eva fics). anyways its a great story, an awesome one. ^-^
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 11:23 CDT
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@_@ Why didn't you write full on pr0nz for the end? I wanted full on pronz! I like the epilogu. You acutally capture and held my attention with this fic. I hope you write another one soon!
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Title: Well Done :)
Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 13:52 CDT
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Congratulations on finishing this wonderful story. I love how you held back on the sex in the last chapter (because we all know you're freaking awesome with hot sex scenes). The sweetness in the last chapter really balances the grimness and heaviness of the beginning of the story. I love your work. I hope you keep writing wonderful Ichigo / Rukia fics. Looking forward to the next story from you.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo well done. The ending might be a little sugary but it helps balance out the gloom in the beginning. Brilliantly executed and very well written. Can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. End in love. (Sigh) As it should....
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 03:27 CDT
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Beautiful Story...I, too, hate to see it end. I now see why you took the story in the direction you did...it had a much deeper meaning at the very end. And what a Beautiful ending you wrote. I especially loved the final words...because they were loved. It was perfect. And when you are ready to post another story, I'll be here ready to read it and will love it just like your others. Brilliant Job.
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