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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 02:41 EDT
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WOW!!! Thanks...It has been a privilage to read your stories. They are brilliant and moving. None of your stories are the same but all are brilliant and I am so glad are sharing them with us. Now...about the chapter, I really enjoyed it. No Orihime character was not to OOC...not for this story. I mean her insecurities are what makes her what she is...it is my opinion that she is in love with Ichigo because she has given him a 'Hero Complex'. She is lonely and she needs someone to be her hero. She is not REALLY in love with him...love requires trust and believing in the one you love no matter what and in the Manga she hasn't got either in Ichigo. If she did she would have never believed the Espada and went with him. In your story, I don't know if it is the same, but it seems to me that she is clinging to Ichigo because she is lonely. She is trying desperately to cling onto a notion of what she seems to think love is...If she wasn't so dingy, she would see that Ichigo didn't want to be with her and he wanted to be with Rukia...Or maybe she does and she his clinging to him out of spite towards Rukia. I have no clue, but that is what is so wonderful with this and all of your stories...you continuously have us guessing and that is wonderful. Please keep up the wonderful work. And I can't help but pray the to Bleach Gods that you will let Ichigo dump Orihime now and go be with Rukia. Thank you for another fabulous update. I look foward to the next. :)
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Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 23:15 EDT
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I wanted to write a longer review, but I'm sleepy/ *yawn* Anyway, from the last few chapters it seems that finally we're having some progress. I can't wait to know the reason behind Orihime's supposed OOC ness and I would also like to know why the hell Ichigo actually chose her as his girlfriend. I mean, he doesn't even like her, and why would he need a girlfriend? He had Rukia to give him support/sex when he needed it, and the whole point of having a girlfriend is finding someone one is attracted to, and it sure wasn't Orihime. Then why? *kicks Ichigo*
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 21:41 EDT
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I'm glad Karin is smart enough to realize some things!:) It was nice to see Isshin too!! I wonder if he'll help knock some sense into his son! Good chapter and can't wait till the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 16:45 EDT
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well at least now we know what Ichigo wants=/ all that emotional pressure on Rukia is depressing, really depressing and it hurts to read. I just share the same feelings with Karin,lol. anyway...
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW..... thanx. all ur fic's have beenn awesome!!! and i'll keep reveiwing for all the the ones that i can!! well great chap!!! I REALLY LIKED IT!! SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENESE NEXT!!! U ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My flea, hehe... The meat is finally coming!! I've gotten tired of chewin' on bones.... Still luv ya, though.
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh what is going to happen!!!! He was so close to kissing her. He needs to dump Inoue and apologize profusely down on his knees (if she kicks him in the shins a couple times it wouldn't hurt).
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 13:03 EDT
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Eeek, Ichigo almost kissed her!! I know why you didn't make him do it, but man I wanted him to!!:) He has a lot to think about and sort out! I can't wait until he does figure it out though!!:) Good chapter and really can't wait till the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 00:25 EDT
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Are you making him crazy like this on purpose. Rukia just confessed she loved him and he almost kissed her. Why did he stop? Is he that afraid to let his heart open up again....wait...I just realized something. He's afraid if he loves Rukia she'll leave him just like his mother did...he's not as strong as Rukia is. That is why he is with Orihime...Orihime is too stupid to leave him...she looks for his permission to do anything...the whiney little twit. The way you write Orihime makes me dislike her even more. PLEASE let them break up soon. Even if it is to allow Ichigo time alone to figure out what it is he wants. It's time for him to go off by himself and figure out some realizations of his own. Or you could let Rukia beat the crap out of her...that would be fun. But I know you won't let that happen (it would be fun though. she would kick Orihime's collective arse. HEHEHEHE) Anwyay, Beautiful Chapter, very well written, I love how you let Rukia's character develop from weak to strong. She is finally finding some peace in her life. Now it's Ichigo's turn. I don't know what you have planned, But I have confidence you will work it out in the end. GREAT JOB!!! GREAT WORK!!! And congrats on picking out your college. AGAIN GREAT JOB!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! wat a chap!!! i really liked it!! this is getting so exciting!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVED IT!!!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 17:54 EST
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You know, I hapened to have this strange and sudden feeling of wanting to beat both Ichigo and Rukia up. Ichigo for being the abuser and Rukia for letting it hapen and continued for TWO YEARS! I want to smack them both. While many seem happy that Rukia is waking up and shuting the door on Ichigo, I am angry at how long it took her to wake up. I feel like beating her up along with Ichigo for taking advantage of her weakness and knowing what he was doing. I am really starting to wonder how you will redeem Ichigo and Rukia after their gross mistakes. There is so much shit between them that is hard for me to see them embarking on a relationship after the abuse he inflicted on her. Having them mend their relationship is going to take a heck of a lot of work because if Rukia makes it easy for Ichigo to be forgiven I will be really angry at her. I have also noted that she has a lot of resentment towards him and that he can't yet asked for forgiveness properly and instead acusseds her of kissing Kaien. They have a very sick relationship and I don't know how they are going to work out their problems. It makes me curious enough as to keep reading but I am still very unsettled because of his sexual abuse towards her. I wonder how you will resolved their problems.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 15:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!!! it's going really well!! so UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE AND FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENESE!!! U ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: smilie09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 02:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, Tituba! My name is Sarah. I beta for one of your readers Jazzjackrabbit, I'm not sure what she goes by here, but I call her BB =]. She told me one day to read one of your stories that she enjoyed so much, and I've fallen in love with your style of writing! You keep our IchiRuki fantasies going! I don't usually leave comments, but your story is so fascinating, I just had to say something. I admire your story telling skills, and am impressed with your grammar. A lot of people here don't really put much importance in the grammar of the narrative, but I think it's very important. Anyways, I'm addicted to your works, love your Rukia, and your plots! I love Rukia, honestly, I like her more than Ichigo. I think she's extremely complex, and you take that complexity, and make her such a fantastic character in this story, so human, so dynamic. Everything you made her feel in this story, even though I can't personally relate, was so realistic, something you could actually feel as you read. Anyways, I'm rambling and am speaking too much. I loved it, I thought it was smart how in the first chapter you showed us a horrific scene of these happenings, and it was enough. I liked how you narrated most of it. Anyways, great fic, continue writing, can't wait for the next installment! I am sooo sorry for the essay, lol.
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 21:28 EST
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Wow..great chapter! I'm glad that she told him that she doesn't just want half of him anymore. I hope he dumps Orihime and soon!!!!! Can't wait to see what will happen next!!:)
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Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 13:05 EST
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:D Thanks for the comment! *Happy dance* The name originally comes from a idea involving deer and lightning. And a good dose of weirdness of course^_~ Yes, another fantastic chapter! And she closed the door right on him! *cheering on Rukia* Now the remaining question is, will he finally pull himself together and confess. But hey, being direct can't really be said to be a strong point of his^_^ Looking forward to the next installment (as always).
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