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| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 08:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Titbua, the way you capture emotion with Rukia and Ichigo is quite compelling. You have evolved, and your writing style is so awesome... I just don't know what else to say. This was a super chpater; so well written and intense with how Rukia spoke and how Ichigo reacts, compelling. I hope he makes his mind up and stick with Rukia; otherwise he's just selling himself short being with Orihime. BTW... the other day I was riding home from work and I heard a song on the radio that made me think of yoru story, called 'One Last Time' by Trey Songz... if you haven't heard it, you should. The similarities of that song with your story was wonderfully creepy. Should I use creepy? Maybe compelling. Yeah. Compelling. @_@ Laters.
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 05:23 EST
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that was how it was suppose to be=) as always I bow down before your writing skills...But dont make this thing easy on Ichigo because he has to know that no feeling should be taken for granted and used. The thing that truly bugs me is that why Ichigo is still with Orihime or why did he, from the beginign, choose to be with her? she had no help or understanding towards Ichigo, she is just a bubbly girl who likes to show Ichigo like a prize while Rukia is the one who carries the burden. and also we still have no idea how deep his relationshipwith Orihime *sighs*. Its a good thing that she came to resolve regarding Ichigo and she follows that(since she shut the door to his face for the very first time). Ichigo is actually conscious about hisway of acting, like hwy he went to the station and stuff, but he just seems not ready to voice it. he needs to make peace with hismelf at some level to face her and apologize. and to make peace he has to clear his wrongs first, starting with one red-head bimbo(sometimes she can act like a real one, though its very rare on the series), Inoue Orihime. I will be waiting for the next chapter and ı guess I need to stock more cookies because I will definitely finish the ones that I have until Tuesday due to excess eating to keep myself busy=D
| Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 04:54 EST
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luck!!!
| Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 02:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I generally don't go for AU fics but the way you've written this was so wonderful that I've been completely sucked into your story. So much so that I check this space every 5 days because that's when you update. I do hope you update sooner :-) I love the way you've written Rukia. As for Ichigo... I hope there's some groveling in store for him! Keep writing, you're brilliant!
| Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and long awaited chapter. I am so happy things with Rukia and Ichigo are starting to move in a good direction. How will they act at school? When will he finally dump Inoue? I am glad she closed the door, DONT MAKE IT EASY FOR HIM! Wonderful read as usual!
| Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 17:15 EST
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PERFECTION!!!Something told me it was Ichigo. He needed this interaction with Rukia. He had to finally know he cared for her. She finally admitted that she wanted all of him and not half. Now the proverbial ball is in his court. He has to come to some harsh realizations. He didn't like Kaien kissing Rukia...he wanted to kiss Rukia and does he really want to be with Orihime? I don't know what to expect from Chapter to Chapter so I'm just going to wait with baited breath and pray on bended knee that this story will have your usual happy Ichigo/Rukia ending. After what they have been through they both deserve to be happy together...Rukia deserves to have the love of her life and Ichigo...who has allowed the darkness in his life to blind him to the person he truly loved and loved him back...deserves to be with Rukia. Amazing Chapter...It was Truly and Amazing Chapter. Oh and good luck with the sister...I have two and yeah...I feel your pain. Lamaze breathing helps...and I've found the Rukia fake kindess helps too. HEHEHE. AGAIN....GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 11:16 EST
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harsh reality of life and the cruel side of men....I was expecting something like that due to your warning, I have to admit, and I guess its Ichigo who was waiting for her, or it might be Byakuya I dont know=/. From now on I can only wonder what might happen. their relationship is too screwed for their own good. the trauma is too much, especially for Rukia. I mean how is Ichigo going to make it up to her? he can't, because usually in such relationships, people tend to condition themselves to some certain things. for example, in chapter from Ichigo's POV he said that he was the one who reached his orgasm rather(and more occasionally) than her. so this will have a consequence for her, in these cituations, females tend to condition themselves (subconsciously) not to take any pleasure and after sometimes it becomes real for them, that they wont feel stimulated(or aroused) by the actions of that person. so the action itself won't mean anything to them, or ratter they won't be able to enjoy it like other women or it takes more time for them to enjoy. I don't know how they are going to solve that problem, because in Rukia's condition this action was a sacrifice for Ichigo's health and mental stability. so she felt obliged to give it to him(because she loved him so much) in order to protect him, and her selflessness was taken for granted and she was subjected to an emotional abuse. Its rather complicated but that's the simplest way that I can explain, to sum up I have to trust your abilities one more time because I highly doubt that you will just make them reconcile and have sex and end every problem that they have...I don't know, it seems to me that its going somewhere more complicated and fantastic to read=) cookies to you!
| Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 04:47 EST
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whats with the beath thing. i cant relate...
| Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 22:15 EST
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well, honestly, i really didn't expect thngs to go that way. i mean, with the whole kaienmiyako thing. no, i am not disappointed, nor am i angry and flabbergasted with the turn of events. just surprised. i was thinking along the lines of kaien being rukias friend, support, or somethng along those lines, while ichigo is still being his own stupid self. i wasn't expecting for kaien to hurt her too. see, rukia feels betrayed by what ichigo did to her, she shared a part of her life to the next person whom she trusts, which happens to be kaien. but to be betrayed by the least person yu expect, the person whom you thought could give you even just a glimmer of affection or understanding, that has got to hurt, a whole lot. now i am kinda asking as to why rukia has to suffer yet again.i know there has to be a reason. so anyway, once again i just sit patiently and wait till you give us the next chapter, know the answer to my querries and know who that person rukia saw in the train station.
| Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 15:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually amazingly enough this that didn't make me too emotionally agrevated. The winner in that category would be chapter where Inoue turns out to be Ichigo's girlfriend. That one made me see red, and that's just one of the times where I would have like to have an Ichigo voodoo doll. After this chapter a Kaien one would be good too;) *cough* Now, let's turn away from my small bouts of weirdness, and focus on YOU! Cause, dang, you're one hell of a writer! Your fics are believeable and refreshingly original, and I've yet to be dissapointed^_^ Both thumbs up!
| Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 11:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I think the Kaien part was perfect. Why did her heart stop I must know!!??!?!
| Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 11:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alas, Kaien and Rukia where never meant to be. It is cannon. It's Ichiruki that has a future but to tell you the truth I don't see how she can forgive him after all the shit that whent on between them. But they are both at fault Rukia is victimising herself too much. She needs to see her faults in order to forgive Ichigo. Because she could have had him all for herself but she didn't. Rukia has just as much fualt in all this mess as Ichigo, I want to see more on his side than herse because we have gotten a lot from her and not much from Ichigo.
| Title: Nice Forwarning
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 10:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice forwarning, did little help with the stray tears, but... alas, we aren't ment to love Kaien in every story. And that hurts, it really hurts. I'll be fine though, it was awesome.
| Reviewed By: mipku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 03:38 EST
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I think this chapter (12) really showed how Rukia grew stronger...and I'm so happy and glad that finally she's growing stronger but yet understand the things that are going on...:]
| Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 23:36 EST
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I really love this story. I wasn't too happy after reading the first few chapters. I felt really bad for Rukia and really mad at how Ichigo is treating her without any explanation on his actions at all. But now that you have given some insights on Ichigo's thoughts, I'm glad to say that I don't despised him that much anymore. The situation with Kaien was interesting and I'm glad Rukia left him. She doesn't need to be used anymore. She needs to be love. I'm looking forward to your next update. I'm guessing Ichigo was the cause of Rukia's surprised reaction when she got off the bus.
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