| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] |
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 05:40 EST
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aw, running away...
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 20:46 EST
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This was a much better chapter...She did good by not letting Ichigo inside. He needs to reflect and feel bad about what he has done. What he needs to do is go after her and comfort her. He doesn't need to be with Orihime anymore. Rukia needs him. One Question...Who was the one who went through Rukia's belongings and read the letter from her brother? Uryuu or Ichigo? Orihime has her nose shoved up Ichigo's *** to do something so friend-like. I really hope you start changing Ichigo's character soon. Please update soon. I hope things get better from here on. I look forward to seeing the Ichigo/Rukia love story begin.
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:41 EST
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Is Toushiro going to be Ukitake family?
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:25 EST
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Good for you Rukia! Ichigo has some nerve showing up at her window even after she slapped him! I'm glad she grew her backbone and didn't open the window. I guess a little escape from it all will be good for her. Thanks for update, and by the way, I'm watching the superbowl AND reading/reviewing your fic! Talk about mulitifunctional! :D
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 18:21 EST
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the excitment is building! im so glad your wrote rukia to be so strong! i was so happy to read that she was able to finally deny ichigo! now i am anticipating your new chapter becuase i want to know how kaien will play in this story. i hope kaien can help rukia through her painful lost of hisana! update soon PLEASE!
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Title: HOORAY!
Reviewed By: rukia's harem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 09:50 EST
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OWESOME chapter!Though I prefer her just slap him to dead >_
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 06:46 EST
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go! go! rukia...^-^ didnt expect 60+ rev
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Title: Why Do You Do This To ME!!
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 06:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories but this one is out to kill me! It makes my heart ache and eyes tear up. Why is Ichigo such a bastard!?! Please hurry with the 'love and happiness' part of the story, because I fear the next time I'll review will be from a hospital bed.
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Title: NO freaking way!
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 08:55 EST
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I jumped off my chair and screamed "no she didn't do that!!!" and I was like, holly crap you go girl! But now I have no idea whats going to happen...I mean ı loathed Ichigo more than ever in this chapter because just I was mourning for Hisana he just appeared and said "I nee you tonight" and I was saying "good and I need you to crawl up and die, how is that you s** of a b***"...oh my god that was definitely a fabulous chapter and you deserve every kudos that you can get. Jeez let me get over the initial shock=/ Its so sad, I mean my heart is breaking into gazillion pieces and its I don't know it feels bad and its just that you write so freaking good that I actually feel it when I'm reading which makes it harder to bear. but I just know that I will be spending my time on a good piece when this is done and I started to read it again from the beginning...I cant even say cheers but I can give you cookies...
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Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 01:36 EST
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This chapter was quite refreshing. I'm glad to see that Rukia finally showed some backbone and gave Ichigo what he truly deserved. I love that scene where she kissed him and then afterwards gave him a hard slap in the face. His character needed that. He's been such a bastard to Rukia. In fact, Rukia should have kick him in the family jewels, lol!
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Reviewed By: cola1012003 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
about time rukia started acting like rukia! i love the story and love how it's written but i agree with some of your other reviewers, it's time we get ichigo's side of things cause the boy just wouldn't be this cruel to Rukia. can't wait for the next chappie.
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Title: Woah!
Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely magnificent. My heart dropped when I read the letter and began speeding like there was no tomorrow when she kissed him in the rain. I can't wait (literally) for the next one!!!!!!!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 00:42 EST
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oh. my. GOD. i cannot believe how fantastic you are at writing. this story hits hard. i'm begging you, please update soon. the wait for a next chapter is literally unbearable. i relate to this story so much that i can just sit down and read your story over and over again and come to terms with my own emotions. my god, thank you so, SO much.
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Title: He had it coming!
Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha!!! Ichigo so had that coming, being such a total jerk for so long. Poor Rukia, as if being stuck in an almost-relationship with no love (at least not from Ichigo ) wasn't bad enough, now her dear sister is also dead. :( *cries for Hisana* Well, can't say I didn't see that coming. Anyway, I apologise for not reviewing for a while, but I've been busy and the last three chapters were a bit...tiring. The story was becoming a little dragging with the focus only on Rukia's misery. But it seems you have redeemed yourself. I am very much looking forward to what is going to happen in the next chapter, specially Orihime's reaction to Rukia's sudden outburst. And I can't wait to know what really goes on inside Ichigo's fucked up mind. :D Update soon!! And DON'T TEASE. *growls*
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
she shouldn't have kissed him! she should've slapped him instead! im still waiting for when kaien will come into the story!
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