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| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 22:22 CST
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I'm glad Rukia told Kaien off!! Now she needs to yell at Ichigo and hope he will apologize to her and make things better!!:) I'm guessing that either Ichigo or Byakuya is at the train station waiting for her. Anyways, can't wait till the next chapter!!:) Good job!!:)
| Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 20:35 CST
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I'm afraid to review...I really didn't mean to step on anyone's toes with any of my reviews. I read your stories because they are your original stories and you manipulate the characters extremely well. If this story wasn't brilliant to begin with you would have people giving you their different opinions of it. I love a story that causes controversey...they stimulate the mind and make the reader think with all the parts of their brain. You have that unique ability that not too many writers have of bring that quality out in your readers. This story it a prime example. So if I stepped on anyone's toes with my reviews or made them mad then I extend my apologies. I would like to clarify that I do indeed love this story and my personal opinions in my reviews are how that particular chapter make me feel at the time. Like this chapter for instance...You have shown empowerment...Rukia is now become her own person, standing up for what she wants now. You have shown her progression from broken to empowered and that is great. I don't know if that was your intention...but you did an amazing job. I have no idea who you are going to have waiting at the train station for her...it could be anyone, it could be Ichigo, Haji, Byakuya, Renji, Orihime, Ishida...anyone. At this point it is all merely a guess, we, your readers, would like it to be Ichigo ready to apologize for being so horrible to her. It could be Kaien, I personally hope not (again my opinion), but this is your story and it will play out how you see fit. I must say you have a thick skin and you take every review you get in stride and still put out your very best piece of work every time. So please keep that thick skin, because you will need it if you decide to become a professional writer. The world it a harsh one and not everyone will be a nice as the reviewers you have now. Again amazing work and keep up it up.
| Reviewed By: krymson258 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 19:20 CST
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Thank you so much for the Kaien Bashing I'm so tired of seeing Kaien cheat on his Wife/Girlfriend, and I look forword to Rukia and Ichigo finally talking, you should have Ichigo let Rukia take her frustration out on him as a way to getting forgivness.
| Reviewed By: Lady Jynjr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 08:32 CST
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Uh-oh. Things are going to get even more rough for our two lovebirds...and by lovebirds, I mean Ichigo and Rukia. Poor Ichigo, finally coming to his senses only to see her being kissed by another guy. That should wake him up.
| Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 23:34 CST
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Noooo...I hope Ichigo doesn't just give up!!! He needs to go back. You rise so many feelings in this story!! Can't wait till the next chapter!!
| Reviewed By: Amy_corE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 12:57 CST
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FINALLY!!! I thought I would die while waiting for your update! Hot chapter, it is xD Darn it, I really want Rukia to choose Kaien over Ichigo for...a not very long time xD And...wait, wait, wait, wait! Ichigo'd seen them kissing?! Hehe xD Serves him right! xD I can't believe Rukia after being kissed by GOD-handsome-Kaien thought about Ichigo! O_O Ichigo DID kiss Inoue in front of her! Of course it hurt both of them, Ichigo and Rukia. But now I really would like to see Rukia go for Kaien (just to make Berry-tan 'a bit' jealaous, nothing else xD I miss Rukia's bitchy side a lot xD). Ohhh...now I gonna drool again and wait for update... xD
| Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the way this was written, I think it was perfect and allows Rukia to really know what her own feelings are. Somehow you made me feel just like Rukia did, at first it was a sweet kiss but when she started feeling bad about it I did too. The only one she should be kissing now is Ichigo, I cant wait until he gets there.
| Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 04:31 CST
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(the formula...right. i was thinking of that too. wasnt sure about the renji thing youre talking about though...)anyways nice drama...
| Title: the formula
Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, for one, think that this is one heckuva a chapter, and I am not disappointed in the slightest. the story is just taking its natural course, and going through all its phases. you see, isabella, there shouldn't be anything to worry about. Ichiga an Rukia will end up together. they always do, and they always will. because, if there is one thing that I learned from all of tituba's past fics, and I have read every single word of them, its this: there's a formula. the norm is that rukia is somehow devastated by a life one life crisis, to another, then Ichigo swoops in, seducts her, loves her, protects her, and lives happily ever after. the end. so if I am correct, Kaien will soon die, leaving rukia even more emotionally distraught then she already is, and then ichigo will come, and they, through a miraculous series of events, will realize how much in love with eachother they truly are. but first, they will play some cat and mouse, because tituba doesn't just end a story that easily. I predict that either rukia will reject Ichigo, or Ichigo saw Rukia and Kaien kissing, and runs away. And renji could show up and try to seduce rukia at any moment. that seems to happen from time to time. so, after everything is said and done, Ichigo and Rukia will live happily ever after. that's why its called ichiruki. right, tituba? right? please? *sweats nervously* But what if this one is different?! this could disrupt the very balance of the universe if they dont end up together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: rukia's harem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 00:31 CST
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O.O comfort with tongue? eWw that just so gross! why not just a feather like kiss? and I was expected Kaien to be able to at least ,as a understanding,considerate man as he is,enlighten her mind,help her short our her fellings and resolve some heart troubles.
| Reviewed By: krymson258 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 23:37 CST
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Not bad! nice drama, you got Ichigo realizing his mistake and Rukia still wanting him. I hope that the kiss is as far as you go with the KaienRukia stuff.
| Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 21:53 CST
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I had no idea you would allow yourself to fall for such a cliche'...It has been done to death. It should really disappoints me... However...It doesn't because I happen to agree with jazzjackrabbit...The kiss between Kaien and Rukia had to be done. She did need to know what a real kiss felt like. She needs to feel loved...but in the end it shouldn't be with Kaien. Ichigo needs to make some life changes. It is obvious he misses Rukia or he would have never went to see her. He needs to sit down and talk to her and she needs to tell him how she feels about him. Then he needs to go back and make some realizations. Let Rukia tell him she loves him and that it hurts to see him with Orihime and not her. She needs to yell at him, get it out and leave him sitting. He, then, needs to return home and have a heart to heart with a friend, his father or someone with some sense and realize he needs to be with Rukia and not Orihime. Orihime's side needs not explanation...it doesn't belong. NO ORIHIME POV. Ichigo and Rukia should be making their way to each other not drifting further apart. Please, let them end together and not apart. That is all I'm begging of you...yes I'm begging on bended knees...PLEASE *cries hysterically* bring them together. Give this extremely angsty story to a much needed happy ending. Your writing was brilliant as usual. Keep up the wonderful work. It is a complimpent when you make your readers disagree with your writing and evoke such powerful feelings towards the characters you create. You push the rules of creativity to a whole different level and that is great, but even the best writer knows when to give their readers what they want...that's what makes them successful...and that is what will make you successful because you have that quality in your writing. With that said...I hope I sucked up enough for a happy ending *grins ear to ear*. No really I meant every word I said...you are an extrodinary writer, even if this story isn't going the way people want it. I'll just have to say silent prayers to Kami that you will give it a happy ending.
| Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 21:46 CST
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kaien is just so sweet here. somehow, the body contact, the sweet kisses that has been missing in rukia's life, he somewhat gave her a feel of it. a gesture of being wanted and appreciated. i think tha is what his kiss meant.he was comforting her in a way that he thought he could. i honestly still want it to be ichiruki in the end, no other pairing would do. but i think that rukia needs whatever consolation she can get. of course, rukia being rukia would still and still does want ichigo in every sense of the word, but at least kaien would be there when needed. and about the possibility of ichigo seeing that kiss, well, i am kinda having mixed feeling about it. a part of me wants to say, 'ha! see that! take that you *******!' but then again, maybe it'll ea a real eyeopener for ichigo too, to see kaien kissing her and rukia returning the kiss.anyway, the five day update really sucks. if i could have a daily update of this story, it would really be great. but then again, that is just the fanatic reader in ma talking, coz i also know that you wouldn't do that. so, just update. a little more kaienxrukia wouldn't hurt. but then again, i am also looking forward to ichigo and rukia's little reunion,. and what would kaien do if he ever sees ichigo.
| Reviewed By: miaow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 21:24 CST
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is Ichigo really there? if it is,i hope that Ichigo wouldn't give up just like that....
| Title: oh yeah...
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 13:18 CST
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it was something that has to be done, has to be felt and said. she should know the feel of a real kiss, she should be awakened somehow and even if she thinks that she is not, she certainly is. This caused her to "awaken" in so many senses if you ask me...andI think Kaien was sweet in a sense, and I don't think that he was taking advantage of her, that would be so OOC because Kaien is a caring, helpful, role model kind of person and he has a kind heart, so I cant think of seeing him as someone who would take advantage of Rukia under those circumstances=/ I also hope it was not Ichigo who saw them kissing, because that would be to cliche for your perfect imagination(even though sometimes we need cliches, its obvious that we chose to read people like you for their brilliant and creative writing style) so I guess next chapter we will be seeing Ichigo's arrival(to be honest I wasn't expecting to see it in this chapter, I knew that you were going to write more about RukiaXKaien side of the story) Although the 5 day schedule is too long for me-and I know for all of us- I guess its useless to tell you to make it a 3 day schedule, because since you started like that, you wont change it=/ anyway, it was a good chapter, both for us and for Rukia, though I know some readers will not agree with me upon the subject. cookies!~rabbit~
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