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| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: O.O
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 13:30 EST
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I have no idea what to think anymore.
| Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 12:43 EST
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Well, that definitely gives me an insight into Ichigo's mindset, I'm glad you did this chapter, I think it works well having it at this point rather than sooner, as not only have you built sympathy for Rukia but also provided suspense and mystery regarding the reasoning behind Ichigo's treatment of Rukia. Although I am glad Ichigo is going after Rukia, I wonder if he deserves her, after all he's put her through, completely breaking her spirit, using her in the most hurtful way, can any future be possible between them. There seems to be too much pain, hurt and how can Rukia trust him again. I really don't know how he is going to be able to make it up to her. Orihime's character irks me, I think a point of view is needed (you don't have to do a whole chapter) but I am wondering why the others in the group are even friends with her, she doesn't seem to have any redeeming characteristics, in the anime she had her ditsy side but she was also warm hearted, fun and caring. Nonetheless, I still kind of feel sorry for your Orihime as it seems Ichigo used her too (I don't yet understand why he is with her)I am wondering if there is more to Orihime, like maybe she is putting on a facade, a mask, she is acting for some reason, I just don't know why. How did her and Ichigo come to be, Did he console her after the death of her brother? She seems so desperate to cling on to Ichigo, to make him hers, I wonder why.
| Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 05:06 EST
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fics getting exciting. bout time the jerk realize his mistakes! watif Kaien has a long time crush on our beloved Rukia...>=3
| Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had stopped reviewing. This fic scare me in the begining but I am begining to see some light. Hahahah! Keep it up I want to see Ichigo kneeling down and asking Rukia for forgiveness. Also the last chapter was scary because Rukia fell in denial. She is as much at fault as Ichigo because she let the situation continued when she could have made things right simply by beein firm with him. I believe in tough love.
| Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm shaking.... It is a writer's job to keep the reader in a state of utter suspense? You do too well of a job!!! It makes me both love and hate you. Mmhh, I wonder if that's what Rukia feels. Anyway is it gonna get hot when Ichigo meets Kaien? It has to, please let it!!!!!! And will the following chapters be in split POV's?
| Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 01:59 EST
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twisted. ichigo is so twisted. hmm. but hey, finally, a glimpse on ichigo's thoughts. what ichigo is going through and has been going through can be called post traumatic stress disorder. sometime things so traumatizing affects a persons whole individual, makes him become a shell of what he was before. and makes them think in a twisted way. their sense of reality and perception is shattered, and the only few pieces that remain are kept together by fear. fear of the same thing happeneing again. so in the end, they either distance themselves from the persons that they care about the most. or purposefully hurt them, steeling himslef from further trauma. anyway, enough of the lecture. gosh, took him long wnough to realize that he needed to be with rukia. well at least he himself is aware of the awful things that he had put rukia through. he just has to find her, feel alittle ofthe hurt and jealousythe she felt before, and ask for her forgiveness. ^_~ i really do wish it was that easy. i am so excited about the next chapter. i do hope he finds rukia. again, i bow down to your exceptional writing skills. the emotions, anger hate, worry, confusion, sadness, anxiety, is all there. so tangible and real. you can really make a person feel so much with just words.
| Reviewed By: Amy_corE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 23:31 EST
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Ohhh! Amazing chapter! Now I feel kinda...pity for Ichigo. But I still don't understand why he chose Inoue as his girfriend if he is so possessive about Rukia O_O HIS Rukia. I can't wait for their meeting. It's time for Ichigo to suffer. Of course he has already suffered a lot. But he is EVIL. Maybe Hichigo kinda got control over him... xD I'm looking forward to some jealousy scenes :D
| Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 23:23 EST
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Woot!! Finally we get a glimpse of Ichigo's thoughts. Looks like he still is a wreck over his mother's death, eh? I think when he first started his "thing" with Rukia he only wanted a distraction from his nightmares, but in time he started liking it for his own pleasure. In a way, it makes him a even bigger dick,actually. But what pisses me off is the fact he made someone like Orihime his girlfriend where he did not even kiss Rukia once for his fear of commitment. That is so hypocritical. Why the exception in this case? >_< In the end, he is toying with both Rukia's and Orihime's hearts. Shame on you, Strawberry! One last thing I wanted to tell you a few chaps ago. You kinda went OOC with Orihime when she LAUGHED right after hearing that Rukia's sister had died. Orihime would never do that, as hyper and jolly as she is, she is also one of the most kind hearted characters in Bleach. I know this is an AU, but you should still keep the characters IC.
| Reviewed By: Lady Jynjr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 20:36 EST
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YES, ICHIGO. You finally see things clearly! I think it'll take a while for him to be completely redeemed though, in both her eyes and in his own.
| Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was waiting for this moment! I am so glad Ichigo is going after her! I am sure she will for give him (hopefully) but not without beating the living hell out of him. I hope it all turns out ok, I am sooo excited now!
| Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 16:29 EST
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Finally, some action with our favourite kurosaki. Will he find her, hope she will scream at him, and cry and tell him to go away. (sorry if I'm pushy :P, I just want it to be like this). Oh right and I wanted to ask, will there be renji in this story, or not?
| Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 16:06 EST
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Ichigo is such a selfish son of a gun! He finally realizes that what he is doing is wrong! It only took Rukia to fall apart for him to get his head pulled out of his ass! When he does get to Hiroshima, can you have Kaien kick his little strawberry ass?? ARGH!
| Title: finally...
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:38 EST
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I guess I can die in peace now=) Now I know what Ichigo was thinking and its pretty close to one of my theories. I have a friend who lost her grandparents in the earthquake and she strongly believes that having a good relationship with the ones you love brings bad luck for them, so she keeps treating them like a crap. that can simply be a part of the post traumatic syndrome, also in Ichigo's condition. but its good for him to realize that he has been harming Rukia in more than one ways, and he might lose her in the end. I highly doubt that Kaien will try something fishy but I guess his protective instincts might kick, (or he might start to get interested in Rukia) and he might cause Ichigo alot of trouble. I don't know, I cant see that much into the story since we are not given any insight on Kaien. But thanks for the Ichigo POV, I guess it was high time. actually it might be better if you mix Rukia's POV and Ichigo's on a certain level because sometimes the story loses its dynamics...But all in all I trust in your true ability in story telling, so I guess I'm just ranting right now, without a reason perhaps, but I also know sometimes these rants help the writers to decide on some major turning points=)At least its like that for me *grabs a cookie and stuffs into her mouth, then reaches and gives the cookie jar to Tituba* now we can cheer!...and flash Orihime down the toilet. We really don't need her POV and I highly doubt that you are dying to write it=D
| Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:20 EST
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Yeah, he's going after her!!!:) I'm glad he's finally starting to realize some things. I hope he's able to fix it and make things the way they are supposed to be!!!:)
| Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:08 EST
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Sorry...I flubbed in a sentence...What I meant to say was you can't lose someone if you are not in love with them. Sorry about that...
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