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| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!! I am so glad he finally realized his feelings and used his head alittle. Inoue's reaction was so blech! I am glad Ichigo is rid of her. I hope he makes it to the park and Rukia gets the kiss she has been waiting for. She deserves it!!!!!!! Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 23:26 EDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!*fangirl twirl* That was SO AWESOME!!!!! I am so glad you turned Orihime's character in this story to vapid and shallow so Ichigo could tell your off...and nicely at that. My faith is restored in him. That was such an awesome update. I am sure it was what a lot of readers have been waiting anxiously for...now he is on his way to Rukia. He finally made up his mind. BRAVO...this story has been a roller coaster ride well worth standing in line again for...you know the one...it is the one you want to ride over and over and over again. Now I understand why you said the angst was there for a reason...it had it's purpose. GREAT JOB!!!!!YAY!!!!!
| Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's running out on the bat to get to his true love. AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! I might get all weepy.... Awesome chapter, though, I'm kinda sad we're coming to an end.
| Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 13:39 EDT
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I have to admit, I was waiting for Ichigo and Inoue to break up... So first of all, thanks for finally doing that. However, I kind of felt that Ichigo was a little unfair to Inoue, maybe even cruel. And I don't think Inoue deserved that from Ichigo (from Rukia, for sure, but not from Ichigo). After all, it was Ichigo who "took advantage" of Inoue's infatuation with him. He was the one who asked her out. It wasn't like she manipulated him to be with her... So I'm hoping that the next chapter would offer more explanation for Ichigo's behaviour towards Inoue... Otherwise, he just seems like some kind of asshole (to both Rukia and Inoue). That said, do you have any idea how much I look forward to the chapters of this story? I check a few times a day, hoping to find more chapters (or even new stories) from you. I am totally loving it. I hope you update sooner! Keep writing, you're brill!
| Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! He DUMPED her! You know, I was very surprised at Orhimine's comments. She is cold and shallow... I was shocked at what she said. It made dummping Ichigo very easy, you know? Well go Ichigo go!!! Get to Rukia's and steal her heart, I only hope she will be forgiving after all he's done. You did a great job on this chapter, very detailed and just what I needed on this very drab Friday...I've worked so much this week that's I'm exhausted!!! @_@
| Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 08:53 EDT
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hell yeah! I guess we needed to see his side of the past two weeks=) and I'm really glad that he came to such conclusion. he is pretty conscious about how he has to act towards her form now on. how he has to wait for her to want him no matter how much he wanted her. and somehow deep down in my obsessive psychoanalytic mind I know that Orihime is IC from now on. because though its pointed in a humorous way in the manga, she really has a perceptive side. So she would understand that eventually and I'm not surprised that she was sensing it since the beginning, that's woman intuition. and Ichigo's reason to date with her was also very logical and real under this circumstances. Orihime being normal could only make him pretend that he was normal. but his relationship with Rukia has never been normal, neither their understanding level, nor their communication. To get away from a certain situation you might chose such extremes and I think you are good at reflecting that. I have one question: are we coming to an end? are you going to end it or are you going to write how they are going to fix their relationship? cheers!
| Reviewed By: Amy_corE [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 04:31 EDT
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TIME TO DUMP! LOL xD It's a wonderful chapter! You know, Tituba, your story reminds me of an actual manga xD Ichigo always takes his time to realize something. And...here he is. Finally dumping his not-a-firfriend and letting his emotions spring free. YAY, Ichi! *claps* No, seriously, it's just like him. Ichigo is naturally slow. He is pretty IC, I want to say xD Inoue hasn't got that influence which Rukia gave her in manga. So, I guess, Inoue is IC, too)) I can't wait for the next chapter^^
| Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O.......O.O.........O.O..........O.O........O.O I never though Orihime could sound like a bitch...but she did....O.O Actually Ichigo should have gotten a big slap! Asshole! Dumping Orihime on prom night, someone shoot him! I like the part where he said he felt sick and wanted to trw up. I think I smiled and cheered for him to ruin his tux.XD Yeah, I know!
| Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was AWESOME!!!! he finally broke up with Orihime and now he's going to find Rukia YAY!!!! i can't wait to see what happenes next!!! this is getting really exciting!!! so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT!!! I LOVED IT!!!
| Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 22:27 EDT
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Yay...finally, he realized he loves Rukia!!!:) Why do I have a feeling Orihime might do something else though?! Maybe it's just me. Can't wait till he can talk to Rukia!!:)
| Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 22:07 EDT
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FINALLY! Ichigo pulled the stick up from his ass! Orihime seems like such a bitch...she did all those things knowing that Rukia will hate it! Thank you for finally breaking them up! :)
| Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 20:16 EDT
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Hi! I'm very busy since last month until now I'm free. I haven't watch bleach 159-164 until yesterday I finish all include manga. I have to handle a project that related lots of number and I can't read properly in alphabets. My boss also makes us to stay late at the office so I don't have any time to read your story. This week I want to recover all the things that I missed. What I missed the most is your story. Wow! so great and I afraid that all my reviews not great as your story. Right now I'm wondering, where is my chibi guy (Toushiro) in this story. May be I have a problem with my eyesight, coz sometimes I tend to see numbers.
| Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! That is really cool, thankyou! Your writing is literally breathtaking, so I always need to say so, and this chapter makes me so happy. I was stuck in an airport all of yesterday so this definitly cheers me up. I am so glad Rukia went to the soccer game, Karin, Yuzu and Isshin are her family. Good for Rukia pushing Inoue away!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Translation
Reviewed By: Tidoo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 04:31 EDT
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Hello !! Just so you know, I really like your story, but to make it perfect I have to correct you with your French sentences. French is a very twisted language, so you can't write it right easily... Most of peolple won't mind, I'm sure, but as I'm French, I do ^^ So, your sentences become : "Ne vous inquiétez pas, très chère" "Je ne m'inquiétais pas, c'est vrai." "Your French est vraiment bon, ma chère." And by the way, if you use some sweet words like dear, and you still mean a kind of respect (the use of vous instead of tu) you say 'ma chère' or 'très chère', not 'ma puce', too familiar. And thoses expression are mostly use in a very familiar way, or to mock someone, in a gentle way. It's not as used as my dear in English, it's most like sweetheart or darling. But in this context, you can use it. Anyway, I hope I wasn't too boring with my lesson ^^ and your story is really good !
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 04:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know its getting harder and harder to give you quality reviews because everyone else beats me to the punch. Part of the reason I haven't reviewed lately since all I'd be saying is "OMG U ROX!!1! RITE MOAR!11!" Heh, I remember when you were excited someone gave you an indepth review, now it seems you get like 3 or 4 for every chapter. So yeah, great job and *ahem* write more. ^^;;;;
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