| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] |
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Reviewed By: mipku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 04:19 EST
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I think my heart breaks a little everytime Rukia's does. That's how focused I become to your story!!! I cannot wait till the next chapter!!
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Title: YESSSS!
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 03:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for giving me hope! god that was worth waiting, I mean I knew something was wrong. doesn't it hurt to write those scenes with Orihime. I believe I would throw out or something even if I tried and typed them, but being a writer means you have to try extremes when necessary and I have absolute faith in you and your brilliant writing which proves my point with every passing chapter=) yes we want Kaien and yes we want him in college!!! God that would be awsome, she needs a break a REAL break from Ichigo and his depressive nature with his maybe "unintended" abuse. I cant wait till Sunday...I mark down the days to my calendar and wake triumphantly in the morning! cheers and cookies for you!!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 23:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I'm glad to hear that Kaien will be in this story. I hope he will take some of Rukia's misery away and make her strong so she can say no to Ichigo. Ohh, I do not like him in this story at all! That's how convincing your story writing is! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more it's really really good!!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is an amazing story. The whole concept is original and depressing. Really good job showing us the situation totally from Rukia's point of view and to see and even feel her torment. I'm equally impressed that you've been able to show Ichigo's indifference to the whole situation, or what appears to Rukia as indifference. I get the feeling there is some miscommunication going on. I'd also like to take a moment to say how impressed I am by the overall quality of all of your stories (and being only in high school no less!). If you ever feel like I would totally endorse the idea of pursuing a career in writing, you've got the talent.
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm waiting for Kaien...may be he's from France ;D
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 16:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it! Thank you for making Ichigo disgusted with Orihime. He wiped away her kiss meaning that he is probably not sleeping with Orihime. After reading some Ichigo scenes I am starting to feel sorry for him. I want to read more from his side and get to know what is happening to him really.
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Reviewed By: mipku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 20:26 EST
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I have to say that I absolutely LOVE all your stories!! and this one is no exception! I think you just know how to present the story to keep the reader interested!! Kudos
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 14:48 EST
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damn! im actually hurting for rukia. and yeah, the ichigo you have portrayed in the first two chaps is the worst jerk ever. but it only made me want to know and read more. i got to leave it to you girl. the story, plot, is just so uniquely original that i can't help but love it. there is something there, a twist in the story or , well, i don't exactly know but i think there is a reason for everything. i just have to wait and see till you reveal it to us.
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 23:53 EST
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i dont wanna punch Ichigo anymore. i wanna DECAPITATE him!!! ARGH!!!...anyways, i smell somethin cookin. i hope its good.^-^
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Title: now Im really depressed...
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 16:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy, ı mean this was going to happen...I knew a chapter like that would come and throw me off my feet, but I feel so sad...ı really feel depressed, and you know I have the tendency to get worked up by fanfics. I would really love to hear Ichigo's thoughts about this too. I might end up hating him(in this story of course), he is so...so...cold hearted. I would really like to see Rukia getting stronger and say no to him, she really needs to be that. I know there is something that you are planning but I cant help but wonder, I mean for a few minutes I just thought he might be replacing his mother with Orihime. you know she has long hair and a cheery personality(its all realted with me, Freud and Oidipus complex) and now I have to wait till next wednesday=/
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 07:55 EST
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... I mean I'm MAD at Ichigo... not made. Hehe! @_@
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 07:53 EST
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...I don't know what to say about this chapter. I'm a bit shocked; Ichigo is a super creep. What hits home on me with this story is that this actually happens. What makes us want and need poeple that are unavailable, I'm not sure. But it's true and it happens!! This chapter gave us a better understanding on why he still visits Rukia; but I strongly feel that Rukia (who is protrayed a much stronger character) needs to stand up for herself and stop letting Ichigo use her!! Ugh! I feel so angry now... but for a story to draw out this kind of emotion means it's damn good, and even though I'm feeling 50/50 on the entirety of the story due to Ichigo's behavior; I will continue to read on. Good work hon, don't take my rant personally. I'm just so made at Ichigo!!! @_@
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 01:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this alot, great writing as always. I am alittle bit sad that Ichigo is being such a dunce and poor Rukia, I hope this all turns around some how. Ps Love the butler's name!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 23:34 EST
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Good chapter, a little background in this one. Nice to see Hisana in it!!:) I'm still trying to figure out what's going to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter!!:)
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