| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2013 15:12 EDT
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Squee! That was too cute! Sesshoumaru is really trying hard. I hope it goes well with the date. It looks like I might have missed a couple of chapters. The previous one was hawt! I'm going to have to go back and do some re-reading to find out what I've missed. Thanks for posting! |
Title: True art!
Reviewed By: KagomesDarkHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2013 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me on the grip of madness trying to figure out whst will happen next, most storys have easy predictability on what will happen but not this story. Yes you did make it a little confusing with flash back chapters but overall it did not hinder my reading enjoyment. This story is a work of art as are meany of your other works, I can not wait tell you post the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: nan de mo (getting too lazy to type it out lol) chibi otoko On: June 04, 2013 17:46 EDT
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YES!!!! I have been lacking a good bit oh sexy deliciousness! |
Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2013 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was EPIC! :D You are gonna do her thank-you call to Jak, right? That's gonna be so cute! I just LOVE this fic! I'm loving your updates to smaller and newer series both... *grins* But I'm REALLY looking forward to more on this! |
Title: amazing.
Reviewed By: Kittynicole21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2013 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am truly amazed. I have been reading fan fiction since I was a preteen and this story is better than almost any I have bought in a book store. The way you cast the characters and how it just flows together is astounding. I didn't have an account but I made one just to review this. Honestly you brightened my week |
Title: Thank You So Much!!
Reviewed By: Addict91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2012 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy that you are continuing on with this fic. It is one of my favourites!! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2012 15:51 EST
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Yeesh! DRAMA! Lies, even little ones always find their way to be sooo big. |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2012 23:28 EST
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Oh wow! Yay! Very sexy chapter. And, oh man. With Kagome's friends, who needs enemies? Urgh! I just want to thump someone! LOL I sure hope this doesn't present a roadblock. Thank you for posting. You've been doing quite a bit of writing. Hope you're feeling well. ^_^ Thanks for updating! |
Title: Thanks for the continuation!
Reviewed By: Addict91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2012 09:17 EDT
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I know you've been busy, but thanks for sticking with this story because it has a great plot line! |
Reviewed By: tiger252 On: May 23, 2012 03:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far! Can't wait for more chapters!!!! Please upload new chapters ASAP!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: May 22, 2012 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you say we will hate you by the end of the next chapter, but I dont see how thats possible :) as long as you continue on with the story who could be upset with some drama :D by the way loved the chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2012 23:42 EDT
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Oh wow! I think I missed a chapter or two. Very steamy stuff! I'm glad Sesshoumaru has come to know the truth. It's so sad that all of them were hurt like that and now have to try to fix things and make them right. Aw, I wanted to cry when Inu told Kagome what he'd been planning the day of the cafeteria event. As serious as the situation is, I finding it a bit hard to believe that Sesshoumaru and Kagome have put off the mating. I wonder if there's anyone that could advise Sesshoumaru on anything absolutely necessary. Izayoi? Heheheh. She has the right experience and it could be cute. I'm glad to see an update and hope that means you are doing well. Take care and I look forward to your next update. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2012 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, Sunset! Being away due to kids and real life has NOT impaired your abilities! Awesome chapter, and epic line by Bank at the end! Looking forward to your next chapter! |
Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2012 23:09 EDT
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I love this story! I hope you continue it soon, I want to read more!! |
Title: THANK YOU!!
Reviewed By: Addict91 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2012 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and am so happy that you continued writing this one! :) Wishing you many creative thoughts in the future!! |
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