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Reviewed By: just me On: June 05, 2008 22:12 EDT
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it's so good to see that you are feeling better! i really enjoyed the insight this chapter gave. it seems that if he wouldn't have been so stubborn and she would have been paying attention, they could've already been together. leave it to a boy to put his pride over his feelings. i love this story and i'm sure i've said it before, but you are a very talented writer. you have a way of catching the reader's attention and keeping it. bravo to you.
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Title: Aggravated
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I've been slowly getting aggravated with Kagome. She's been so good at getting beyond the defensive attitudes of the others to figure out their true selves. What went wrong with her doing the same with Sesshoumaru? It seems she stopped at his outward facade and never really dug deep beyond the surface. Instead of stopping and asking herself why he had the attitude that he did, she merely let her anger rule her thoughts. She wasn't that way with the others when she first met them and they put up a defensive front. Also, knowing Inuyasha's dislike for his brother, she should have known not to take everything he said to not be without prejudice. She let him help her to look at Sesshoumaru with judgemental eyes. She needs to sit down and take a long hard look at the full picture. Yes, much of the blame is on Sesshoumaru but she can take credit for some. Another thing, that singing. If I had to be around her as much as they are, it would definitely get on my nerves. An occasional tune from someone is normal, but around her, I'd have to wear earplugs.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 14:06 EDT
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i love this story! in the next chapter can we have inuyasha's parents talking about what's going on with sess?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly know how to hit the highs and the lows.....
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyy you updated! This chapter was so bitter sweet. It's really too bad Kagome didn't remember his revelation to her. Maybe he can give that to her in a dream sequence so that she'll stop being so angry at him for that? Keep up the AMAZING work, this is one of my favorite stories out there! Oh and PS - Congratulations on placing in the IYFG Best Comedy! You totally deserve it! :]
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Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Sesshomaru! He needs to quit being so stoic and open up to Kagome. I feel sorry for the guy with the way things turned out.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 15:20 EDT
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i hope you are feeling better. poor sess, no matter what he does, he gets the short end of the stick. please update soon. the story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: just me On: May 28, 2008 22:25 EDT
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i hope you're feeling better. if it wouldn't gum up the works, i'd send you some chicken noodle soup via email...but i doubt even high-speed internet is capable of such feats.
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, I'm so sorry that you're sick. Don't worry about updating until you feel better again! Your health is so much more important than the story. That was an absolutely wonderful chapter though! I sure wish I could write like that when I'm sick...most of mine come out gibberish! Anyways, I hope you feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:42 EDT
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hahaha, barks bites and drools! very clever!
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Reviewed By: just me On: May 20, 2008 23:22 EDT
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i love this story. it really does get better and better every chapter. don't worry about not updating. you need to get well. i can't wait to see what happens next, and how kagome goes about getting sesshy to prove himself. do you think he'll be getting his real form back anytime soon?
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Reviewed By: NoOneSpecial [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore the syndrome, and frankly my favorite parts happen to be the past chapters. It is wonderful to see how she touched each and everyone of them. It gives the story depth and all the people who tell you otherwise should be slapped upside the head with a large object like tetseiga. Ignore them, they can't tell a great story when they see it.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 20, 2008 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Rolling over the floor laughing!!!! I love the end. The 'mary/lamb' rewording was hilarious.! great start to my morning... coffee and the syndrome! great job. I almost snorted coffee because of that last little tid bit of the chapter! HAHa! keep it coming Sunset Miko Christina! Woohoo.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Take all the time you need to rest and get better. We care more about your health than getting a new chapter.
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Title: Oh Dear
Reviewed By: bwlj On: May 20, 2008 08:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you get to feeling better and getting more sleep. After all, health is one of the most important things. Continue when you can, is what I say. I love the story, but take your time, get healthy and teach your kid the value of nap time.
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