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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the song was great!!!
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Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: May 20, 2008 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been writing for awhile. School has been killing me and also I am taking a summer class to get more credits. Though I have been taking the time to read the story everytime a new chapter comes up. Like I use to say this story keeps getting better and better. It is getting so interesting. Everything is falling in to place and I hope that Sesshomaru can get everything to work out. I really want to see what else the syndrome does in helping Sessho. Well anyways this is a great story and please continue to write. I hope you do get better and get alot of rest. Maybe try to get someone to watch your daughter for a day to get the proper rest cause you don't want to get even sicker. I really hope you feel better and everything gets better. One time my sister was sick so we just watched my niece for her so that she could get better. Just try not to over work yourself too much. Hope you get better really soon.
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Title: Lizzie Welling
Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've recently found your fic, and absolutely adore it. The unique plot is very entertaining, and I like how each chapter jumps back to the past to develop the characters. I especially love your characterization of Kagome--she's so sassy! I love how she's making it hard for Sesshomaru. Keep up the good work, and feel better!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:41 EDT
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I'm sorry that you're sick. updates aren't as important as your health so dont update sleep, drink lot's of juice and sleep some more (well as much as possible with a 5 year old)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy another chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when Sesshoumaru follows her to school. :] I hope that you get better soon! It's probably best to have lots of bed rest while you're like this - phenomena can kill people if they're not careful! :[
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 21:20 EDT
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omfg please update soon i wonder what fluffy-sama (aka sessy) went to go do!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
giggle* ~sessh- my bit is much worse than my bark. ~tba- and i bet if u were there they wouldnt have lived. ~sessh- they'd be in the ER ~tba- smirk* ~sessh- wat? ~ba-giggle* ~sessh-wat? ~tba-leaves room laughing* ~sessh-damn those stupid boys and their stupid poem. i cant even get tba to talk. update soon while i try to regain wats left of my dignity. bye. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so cute. I can't wait for them to get together and for Kagome to find out exactly what Sesshoumaru was thinking everytime he seemed aloof. Good job and good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 03:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was right he is going to his room to "jack it off." Sesshomaru could probably throw him quite far...
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This story just keeps getting better n better. that last paragraph actually made me cry. poor sessy!!! awwww i would give u a 20/10 if i could. i seriously cant wait for the next chapter!!! gosh... its sooo good!!!!!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story just gets better with every chapter...I sure wish that you would update sooner, but it's cool. I'll be checking my email everyday to find out when you update:D
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 23:02 EDT
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Again, I love this story! I especially love how Sesshomaru keeps doing things anonymously! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshomaru... It's such a shame that they have to suffer in silence for so long. At least Sesshomaru has material proof in his attraction to Kagome (if she doesn't believe him once he admits the length of time he's been in love with her). With any hope, that'll be very soon. Well, congrats on another great chapter. *gives you a cookie* I'm looking forward to the next chapter where we'll hopefully see the end of the skit trip and be back in the present next chapter for some Sess-Kag relationship progression. ^^
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that's so sweet! I hope Sesshoumaru can show her that he was the one who bought the barrettes. Does she know that they're real? I love this story so much, I can't wait for my favorite part next time: the present day chapters! :]
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 13:47 EDT
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This chapter is angst at its best. LOVED IT!!!! Update when you can!!
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