| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:42 EDT
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hahaha, barks bites and drools! very clever!
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Reviewed By: just me On: May 20, 2008 23:22 EDT
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i love this story. it really does get better and better every chapter. don't worry about not updating. you need to get well. i can't wait to see what happens next, and how kagome goes about getting sesshy to prove himself. do you think he'll be getting his real form back anytime soon?
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Reviewed By: NoOneSpecial [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore the syndrome, and frankly my favorite parts happen to be the past chapters. It is wonderful to see how she touched each and everyone of them. It gives the story depth and all the people who tell you otherwise should be slapped upside the head with a large object like tetseiga. Ignore them, they can't tell a great story when they see it.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: May 20, 2008 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Rolling over the floor laughing!!!! I love the end. The 'mary/lamb' rewording was hilarious.! great start to my morning... coffee and the syndrome! great job. I almost snorted coffee because of that last little tid bit of the chapter! HAHa! keep it coming Sunset Miko Christina! Woohoo.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Take all the time you need to rest and get better. We care more about your health than getting a new chapter.
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Title: Oh Dear
Reviewed By: bwlj On: May 20, 2008 08:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you get to feeling better and getting more sleep. After all, health is one of the most important things. Continue when you can, is what I say. I love the story, but take your time, get healthy and teach your kid the value of nap time.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the song was great!!!
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Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: May 20, 2008 02:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been writing for awhile. School has been killing me and also I am taking a summer class to get more credits. Though I have been taking the time to read the story everytime a new chapter comes up. Like I use to say this story keeps getting better and better. It is getting so interesting. Everything is falling in to place and I hope that Sesshomaru can get everything to work out. I really want to see what else the syndrome does in helping Sessho. Well anyways this is a great story and please continue to write. I hope you do get better and get alot of rest. Maybe try to get someone to watch your daughter for a day to get the proper rest cause you don't want to get even sicker. I really hope you feel better and everything gets better. One time my sister was sick so we just watched my niece for her so that she could get better. Just try not to over work yourself too much. Hope you get better really soon.
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Title: Lizzie Welling
Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've recently found your fic, and absolutely adore it. The unique plot is very entertaining, and I like how each chapter jumps back to the past to develop the characters. I especially love your characterization of Kagome--she's so sassy! I love how she's making it hard for Sesshomaru. Keep up the good work, and feel better!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 00:41 EDT
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I'm sorry that you're sick. updates aren't as important as your health so dont update sleep, drink lot's of juice and sleep some more (well as much as possible with a 5 year old)
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy another chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when Sesshoumaru follows her to school. :] I hope that you get better soon! It's probably best to have lots of bed rest while you're like this - phenomena can kill people if they're not careful! :[
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 21:20 EDT
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omfg please update soon i wonder what fluffy-sama (aka sessy) went to go do!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
giggle* ~sessh- my bit is much worse than my bark. ~tba- and i bet if u were there they wouldnt have lived. ~sessh- they'd be in the ER ~tba- smirk* ~sessh- wat? ~ba-giggle* ~sessh-wat? ~tba-leaves room laughing* ~sessh-damn those stupid boys and their stupid poem. i cant even get tba to talk. update soon while i try to regain wats left of my dignity. bye. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so cute. I can't wait for them to get together and for Kagome to find out exactly what Sesshoumaru was thinking everytime he seemed aloof. Good job and good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 03:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was right he is going to his room to "jack it off." Sesshomaru could probably throw him quite far...
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