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Title: update please!
Reviewed By: sugar piss On: July 03, 2008 19:04 EDT
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good story plese update please! the name sugar piss came from a joke b/c I HATE BEING CALLED SWEET PEA!
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is Kagome so angry? That's not fair of her to be like that. She should be grateful that she has friends like them to want to do something for her. She gets angry too easy and sometimes for the wrong reason. I think she needs an attitude adjustment. I am glad she was calm, for the most part, while she thought everything over during class. I hope she doesn't go storming in on her high horse, upsetting the guys for wanting to do something nice for her.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 04:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit storm indeed! Too bad the guys didn't think to cover THAT particular base. Good job on Sesshoumaru spilling to keep his own ass out of hot water. lol It will probably help some, but I doubt he will be held blameless seeing as he kept the secret. Oh well, she can't possible be entirely unreasonable about it, because they were trying to be nice. Especially after she sees that swing. *smirk* I bet Sesshoumaru will really appreciate the swing. Kagome will never be able to explain it to anyone without blushing once it's put to use. This was a great chapter. Congratulations, by the way, on getting so many reviews. That's so awesome. This is an awesome story, so I'm not surprised that it has a ton of reviews! I can't wait to read about Vampire Sess again!
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I love this story! It just keeps getting better and better! "How could I not be attached to someone as perfect as you?" That was the best line in the whole chapter!! :] I know you're really busy with real life drama, but I'm definitely waiting with bated breath until you update again! (Although, I much prefer the current chapters to the past ones. :D)
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Seems like if he gets his way she won't need her own room and if he doesn't… well then she can have his." this line caught me so off guard that i actually fell out of my chair laughing! I just love your work, keep going!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 16:59 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter. I am absolutely in love with your story. So touching and so very well developed. Great development of everyone. Anxiously awaiting for more!
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Reviewed By: just me On: June 05, 2008 22:12 EDT
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it's so good to see that you are feeling better! i really enjoyed the insight this chapter gave. it seems that if he wouldn't have been so stubborn and she would have been paying attention, they could've already been together. leave it to a boy to put his pride over his feelings. i love this story and i'm sure i've said it before, but you are a very talented writer. you have a way of catching the reader's attention and keeping it. bravo to you.
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Title: Aggravated
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I've been slowly getting aggravated with Kagome. She's been so good at getting beyond the defensive attitudes of the others to figure out their true selves. What went wrong with her doing the same with Sesshoumaru? It seems she stopped at his outward facade and never really dug deep beyond the surface. Instead of stopping and asking herself why he had the attitude that he did, she merely let her anger rule her thoughts. She wasn't that way with the others when she first met them and they put up a defensive front. Also, knowing Inuyasha's dislike for his brother, she should have known not to take everything he said to not be without prejudice. She let him help her to look at Sesshoumaru with judgemental eyes. She needs to sit down and take a long hard look at the full picture. Yes, much of the blame is on Sesshoumaru but she can take credit for some. Another thing, that singing. If I had to be around her as much as they are, it would definitely get on my nerves. An occasional tune from someone is normal, but around her, I'd have to wear earplugs.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 14:06 EDT
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i love this story! in the next chapter can we have inuyasha's parents talking about what's going on with sess?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly know how to hit the highs and the lows.....
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyy you updated! This chapter was so bitter sweet. It's really too bad Kagome didn't remember his revelation to her. Maybe he can give that to her in a dream sequence so that she'll stop being so angry at him for that? Keep up the AMAZING work, this is one of my favorite stories out there! Oh and PS - Congratulations on placing in the IYFG Best Comedy! You totally deserve it! :]
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Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Sesshomaru! He needs to quit being so stoic and open up to Kagome. I feel sorry for the guy with the way things turned out.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 15:20 EDT
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i hope you are feeling better. poor sess, no matter what he does, he gets the short end of the stick. please update soon. the story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: just me On: May 28, 2008 22:25 EDT
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i hope you're feeling better. if it wouldn't gum up the works, i'd send you some chicken noodle soup via email...but i doubt even high-speed internet is capable of such feats.
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, I'm so sorry that you're sick. Don't worry about updating until you feel better again! Your health is so much more important than the story. That was an absolutely wonderful chapter though! I sure wish I could write like that when I'm sick...most of mine come out gibberish! Anyways, I hope you feel better soon!
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