| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 02:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated! This was such a wonderful chapter I don't even have the words to praise it appropriately... but that's probably because I'm dead tired and can't think of the words. I spent the entire day cleaning and moving furniture... not fun. Reading one of the best new chapters in my favorite fanfic by my favorite author was a great way to relax after that long day!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 00:09 EDT
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My two cents: I definitely agree with snowbirdyoukai. Kagome has no reason to be so upset with the boys. I'd love to have friends who would take their time and money to help me relocate (be it in a new apartment or their own home). While they shouldn't have hidden it from her, why they did so is obvious. The way she reacted makes her seem ungrateful.
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY some headway! Mou, I thought we'd never get to this part. This was, by far, the best chapter. Hazzah for Jakotsu-Kagome convos. And I want to thank you for not making Jakotsu some overly flamboyant character (though I wish some of his original anti-fem ways were still present. --a crazy Jak is the best kind! ^o^-- Maybe round the other girls?). *gives you a cookie* Well, in any case... Great chapter. A lot of explanations were given and a lot of questions were brought up. Hopefully, you'll address some of them as well as keep with this line of events for a few chapters. As informative as the flashbacks are, I definitely prefer the chapters that take place in the present. So... Til next time~ *wavies* JA MATA! ^o^ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see that you updated! Awesome as usual!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 20:24 EDT
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so cute, by the way what type of half demon are bank and jan
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:36 EDT
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poor kagome, thinking it was a dream. i wish sesshomaru would of told her that it wasn't although i guess he is still afraid that she will reject him. i hope she doesn't stay angty with the boys for to long, they were only watching out for her. update again soon. i want to know kagome's reaction to the surprise that the boys were working on for her.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The wait was well worth it. I really wish Kagome didn't think she dreaming. :fans herself: What a steamy dream it was... Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: barely breathing On: July 19, 2008 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next update...
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories!! The ending is sad, omg they belong together can they get 2 minutes please! Inc and Bank need girlfriends so Kags can get some space and Miroku needs. . . help, but anyway sessh and Kagome need to get together like NOW. and as cute as Kagome thinks he is as a dog he needs his body back so he can continue what they started there! I wish sessh lucks we winning her heart and I hope be can do it soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww I love the Sessy Vampire chapters...
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 17:14 EDT
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its sad that seeshomaru couldn't be honest with kagome that night. and i would kill inuyasha for killing the mood that was happening between sess and kagome. update soon.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...it's so sad. Well, maybe he can make up for it now, in present time, I mean. I hope we get a new chapter really soon. This is so original, I love it!
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 13:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story so much! You're such an amazing writer, and I hope you can update it again really soon!!
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Reviewed By: yasha _luver602 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 02:30 EDT
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AAHHHH!!! OMG your story is amazing! way too cute! i went to dallas this weekend...had no internet and i was dying to read the rest of this...so when i got home i literally went straight the comp to read some of it...hehe...please please post another few chapters! :D
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Reviewed By: mrskouga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg!!!!! plz update im dying i need to know what happens!
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