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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshomaru... It's such a shame that they have to suffer in silence for so long. At least Sesshomaru has material proof in his attraction to Kagome (if she doesn't believe him once he admits the length of time he's been in love with her). With any hope, that'll be very soon. Well, congrats on another great chapter. *gives you a cookie* I'm looking forward to the next chapter where we'll hopefully see the end of the skit trip and be back in the present next chapter for some Sess-Kag relationship progression. ^^
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that's so sweet! I hope Sesshoumaru can show her that he was the one who bought the barrettes. Does she know that they're real? I love this story so much, I can't wait for my favorite part next time: the present day chapters! :]
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 13:47 EDT
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This chapter is angst at its best. LOVED IT!!!! Update when you can!!
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Reviewed By: PhoenixFalling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 12:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, this chapter just blew me away. I can't wait for more. You are so good. :)
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so agree w/the InuSesshou...he's in for one long ride. Great story! I was absolutely thrilled when the guys agreeded to help InuSesshou out. Oh *sighs* they danced and he revealed himself to her. Yay! Here's to getting to sleep with a big fluffy not to mention soft puppy! ^_^
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: May 02, 2008 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't explain how much your story seems to reach me. It pulls at my heart and I'm glued to the screen when I read it. I wait patiently everyday to see if you've been able to update. I'd seriously wait a whole year if I had to, to finish this story. It's really wonderful. I scored you 10 in style because your story flows nicely in and out of the present and the past. Youre spelling and grammar got 10, because unlike some stories I've never had to pause to reread something that was an error. Your story is highly original and makes me smile. As for enjoying it, I couldn't love it more. I wait patiently for human Sess to catch up with InuSess and I feel the tension right along with the characters. I'm giving you an overall 10 because a story should draw you in and make you a part of it in some way. Your story has done that for me. I can't wait for more. Thank you for your story. Patiently Waiting, puppypal27
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter. Hope to see another update soon.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 07:16 EDT
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omfg that was sssssooooo sad! update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww that was so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyy another chapter! I hope Sesshoumaru can make Kagome realize that it wasn't really a dream, that he really does have feelings for her. I love this story so much, I hope you can update it again soon!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 02:18 EDT
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so cute, kagome got to sleep with seshy puppy. now she has to realize that it wasnt a dream.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Sesshoumaru went through some serious butt kicking boot camp. It kind of reminds me of some of the Maury episodes...you know the ones where the teenage girls with attitudes end up going to boot camp or jail for a day. Heh, I'd probably start blubbering like they do...but I'm over with my teenage years so I think I'm in the clear. Anyways *sorry for babbling* great chapter even though Sesshoumaru's mother was a spiteful, money grubbing, drama queen leech. Keep up the excellent work ^_^
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I just finished reading the whole story so far and I love it! I've not read very many stories where Sesshoumaru is portrayed this way, as not being the total "in control of everything" figure like in most stories. I'm desperately waiting on more updates with this and SWTPF, as they are both amazingggg stories!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 22:31 EDT
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Hah, the end of this chapter is hillarious... bootcamp, that's rich...keep up the good work. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 12:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ *sigh* Ya have to hurry and write another chapter!!!
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