| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Addict91 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2011 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please,please,please,please!! Continue writing chapters for this f***ing amazing fic!! I love the story andd the flashbacks are intriguing! Keep up the good writing!! |
Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: MotherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 17:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!(?can you have a relationship with a story? lol)I'll be waiting for the next chapter, No matter how long it takes. As good of an Author you are its worth it, cause I know when you do update the wait will be worth it! Thank you for a great story! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: January 15, 2011 16:23 EST
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ok this is the part where I beg beg beg for more :) I am so happy to see an update from you and I am really glad to see the relationships in his family being given a shot at healing :) |
Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 17:13 EDT
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Great update.! I can't wait to read more.! Update soooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :]
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2010 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Feel bad for Sess, but hey when your a stalker recognition can be a bad thing >.
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2010 22:22 EDT
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Yay!!!! An Update!!!!! I did a little happy dance in my chair when I opened my email. I had to reread 8 to remind myself what that one was about but I'm sure everyone did that. Great chapter and will eagerly and patiently await more, don't push yourself too hard. I hope the baby isn't tiring you out too much, those little things can be a handful sometimes lol.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoublue On: July 24, 2010 17:04 EDT
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Wow I really love this story! The characters are awesome, the flashbacks are cool, and the cliff hangers just keep me wanting to read more and more! Thank you for writing this story! :)
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Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: July 08, 2010 20:27 EDT
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YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! amazing chapter keep up the great work!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 03:54 EDT
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When I got the email saying there was an update in this story, I literally, popped up out of my chair, jumped up and down clapping my hands and saying "Oh My God Yay!"... Literally... You make me happy.
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 16:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!! I literally bounced up and down in my seat when I got the notification that this had a new chapter. Another awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: Puzzled_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2010 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have immensely enjoyed reading this fanfic and personally believe it to be amongst one of the best Inuyasha fanfics I have ever read!!! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE continue writing!!!!!! I must know how it ends!!!!!!
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Title: THE SYNDROME
Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI IM STILL READING YOUR STORY BUT I WANNA SAY WOW IT'S MIND BLOWING I LOVE IT. I KNOW YOU WORKED REALLY HARD ON IT THE PLOT CHARACTERS AND STORY ARE ALL OUTSTANDING. THE FLASH BACKS ARE COOL >>>YOUR A VERY TALENTED GREAT WRITER LOL THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING
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Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found that part with Sesshoumaru incredibly sad. He's scoring these notes looking for any and all trace of her and when he does...I mean, he's done something so heart-felt for her, and Kagome carelessly writes a couple of jokes with her friends, not knowing the impact she has on him. I understand that she wasn't doing it to be malicious, but I have to wonder if she'll ever realize and truly understand the impact she (unknowingly) had on him. I just thought the picture you painted of Sesshoumaru in this scene was so poignant, so heartbreakingly sad. I appreciate the slow-build up, however, of their current romance, and I appreciate the struggle that Kagome is facing as she tries to make the right decision for all parties involved. I think the story is much more dynamic because she doesn't simply fall into Sesshoumaru's arms and accept the mate bond and accept him. They both have suffered past hurts at the hand of the other (whether they know it or not), and I think that the balance of flash-backs and the present scenes really help to establish both their growing relationship, and eachother. I love how all the characters are developed (Sesshoumaru especially), and think you've done a great job portraying honest friendship (between Kagome and her boys), and developing realistic, believable love between two seemingly different people(Sesshoumaru and Kagome obviously). I think this is a great story, and look forward to reading more whenever you have a chance to update.
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2010 00:44 EDT
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I hate catching up to the author lol. but really really love this story. :) thank you, oh and I personally love the flash backs
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2010 13:37 EDT
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OH MY GOD!!!!!! IM SO GLAD YOUR BACK!!!!!!
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