| "The Syndrome" Reviews/Comments [ 354 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 14:27 EDT
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yay! finally they're getting things worked out.and poor yasha's not even gonna have a clue.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 03:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
big lols!!1 fantastic chapter!!!! The sleepy girl in question snorted a laugh into her coffee, barely escaping getting it all down the front of her, and shot Bank a glare. "I wouldn't go that far," she said before giving his arm a halfhearted smack. "And my coffee is not sludge!" "Sure, Babe. Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it the girl who's supposed to be all excited about going to every single store trying on dresses while the guy drags his feet and complains?" Kagome laughed. "That's an easy one. Jak is the bitch in our relationship." Her deadpan delivery had both brothers gasping for breath, everyone in the car lucky they'd been stopped at a red light at the moment. "I know, I know," Bankotsu nodded, turning the car towards their intended destination. He pulled up alongside the curb and got out to open Kagome's door before she could blink. "You do have everything? Didn't forget your wallet?" he asked as Jak climbed out of the back. "I've got it. I am the older brother here. You always seem to forget that," Jak said, faking annoyance. "And you seem to forget that I'm the responsible brother, and the one usually responsible for the precious package I'm entrusting you with today." Jak stood at attention and mockingly saluted Bankotsu. "I've got it under control, Sir! The package will be returned safely as promised, Sir."
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 00:49 EDT
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Yayy! You updated! I love this story so very much and I hope you can finish this and SWTPF!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 22:45 EDT
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Thank you thank you thank you thank you... You don't know how happy I am that you updated... When I commented last night, I didn't expect an update on this story for alteast another month. So you can just imagine my delight when there is an update waiting for me after a long day at work. Fantastic chapter, the flashback chapters really arn't my favorite, honestly, but they are important, and very well written so kudos all around! And because I'm so happy that you actually did update, I won't pester you to do so again... Soon...
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 07:20 EDT
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I gave up on this story once before... But I found it again and its just as amazinf as i remember... So I'll favorite it once more and hope that it doesn't take years to finish...
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Title: Monk Meets Miko Ch. 12
Reviewed By: flower28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so entertaining! I'm very curious to see what happens with Sesshoumaru as well, it's torture to not skim ahead. Kudos! After reading your last chapter, though, I would like to point something out, if you don't mind. It is my experience that children the age of 10 are not as socially advanced as your 10 year old Kagome and Bankotsu. All the 10 year olds I know are clumsy, silly, and just not mature enough for the interactions you have them displaying. These 10 year old children were interacting and thinking more along the lines of an early teenager. Maybe their culture has them more advanced? Anyway, I really like your story. :)
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Reviewed By: melony922 On: May 10, 2009 22:39 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Comedy and Lemon for the first quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the rest of the nominations, seconding, and voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com. Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
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Reviewed By: LordoftheWest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 07:29 EDT
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im so glad your back. i hope everything turns out good at your house and everyone gets better. i cant wait till the next chapter comes out(even if it takes another 6 months ;}).
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Reviewed By: Ladyfluffy On: April 29, 2009 11:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Jumps for joy* these last 2 chapters have been great, its so much fun watching sesshoumaru suffer...but...*Gasps falls to floor clutching chest* i think i just had a heart attack from that last cliffy......uhoh how much trouble is he in, now that kags is finding out he was listening in on the convo she had with jak.....cant wait for the next chp to come love and peace ladyfluffy
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Reviewed By: taz_bam On: April 20, 2009 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you fanfic and I don't usually like sess/kag stories but I love this one. I like the songs that you use for Kagome. They fit the story so well. I have a question for you though. Have you heard the song "leave out all the rest" by Linkin PARK.I think the words fit Sesshy's life as it is. If you can use this song cool if not that's cool too. I will read this story till the end. I hope life treats you and you family better. God bless. :)
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Reviewed By: braindrain806 On: April 19, 2009 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is sooo good. It's funny,romantic and well thought out. it keeps you interested and I can't wait for the next chapters. Favorite part as of chapter 29. Is the "Kagome had a big ass dog". lol. had me rolling. lol
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Reviewed By: braindrain806 On: April 19, 2009 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is sooo good. It's funny,romantic and well thought out. it keeps you interested and I can't wait for the next chapters. Favorite part as of chapter 29. Is the "Kagome had a big ass dog". lol. had me rolling. lol
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Reviewed By: BT Wings On: April 08, 2009 21:08 EDT
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Glad to hear that everything is starting to get back on track for you. Hopefully it keeps going that way. Great chapter, like always, you amazing writer you. Can't wait for the next one, but take all the time you need.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 14:15 EDT
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oops! LOL. They'll get past it though. Its nto in Kagome's nature to stay angry with those she cares about and its not in Sesshoumaru's nature to give up once given a goal to chase. Both might retreat a little to recover their cool or to prevent hurt to others, but the honesty and respect I think will still be there. I'm glad that you're doing better and that life is starting to slowly repair itself around your family. *hugs* DD
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back ^_^ yay for new chapter!! I'm off to bed, g'night (brr! It's cold up here in Canada, I want spring!!!)
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