| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2015 17:29 PDT
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Yay to a new chapter! Yay to them finally gettin' hitched! Can't
wait to read a lot more from my fav author.
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Title: Welcome back
Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2015 17:09 PDT
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Just wanted to say hello an glad your back. I haven't got to read
the chapter yet although I'm sure it's wonderful. I just wanted to
review cud im so happy you are back. I'm sorry it's been a rough
year but glad your feeling better now. Keep up the great work an
welcome back!!
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Title: Maddy musings
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2013 12:48 PST
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Lost track of this story for a while, but thankfully noticed about a year's worth of updates during one of my re-re-readings of all the Purity stories. So now I'm all caught up and have a question. Would it have been a security issue for Madison to drop her concealment around Valerie? I didn't think Valerie would reject Maddy, based on their friendship and her reaction to Evan's big reveal, so I wondered if there was another reason why Maddy didn't show her true self. I figured seeing Maddy without concealment would have more of an impact than seeing Gin, since Valerie has known Maddy longer and is closer to her. I also wanted to add how happy I am that Madison is featured in the next Purity volume. I actually wondered if Gunnar might end up as her mate, or if the events of Potentate might come back to haunt them, or at least prove reasonably awkward, at some point. So finding Mikio there was something of a surprise, and I'm very curious to see where that goes. |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2013 13:06 PST
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Evan and Cain...Oil and Water, somewhere I've missed something. I'm still not sure why Evan is so mad at his dad, gimme a clue where to look? I read your blog update. Wonderful news, and I am so HAPPY you and your family weren't in the Tornados path. Hopefully the peanut butter is Jiff, it will be a feast if it is with family. God Bless all of you and may good things continue to come your way. |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2013 10:49 PDT
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Oh it's been so long since I've reviewed. I haven't forgotten about you or this story, I promise. I'm really upset that I can't really do much to help, but I'll definitely keep you in my prayers. I'm glad all the characters are getting along, especially Kaci Lea and Valerie. For a while there I was worried. But they're talking so that's good. |
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2013 20:33 PDT
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YAY! Another chapter! I hope everything's going well with you, because I read your note before the last two chapters and things didn't sound too good. I hope all your affairs go well. By the way, I don't check this site often, like once every few months or so, so I'm sorry I didn't' review the last few chapters. Anyway, great chapter as always! I'm glad to see more scenes with Valerie and her mom. I'm a momma's girl so those kinds of scenes make me smile. It's nice that Valerie appreciates her mother's input so much that she'll know she has THE dress when she sees how proud her mom is. That scene you described was so touching and so simple. I'm also glad Kaci Lea is enjoying herself, but I'm just hoping that she doesn't do anything stupid, like put the moves on Evan and get between him and Valerie. I don't know, I'm not a fan of silly drama like that. I can't wait to see the wedding. Also I have a question: is Bugsy a bridesmade? Because it would be hilarious, and typical of Evan, to make him one just to annoy Valerie. I hope things go well for you and hope to read more from you soon. |
Title: dannygirl9999
Reviewed By: dannygirl9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2013 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. I getting excited about the wedding I can't wait till Evan and V are married. Evan is a twisted little monkey. LOL |
Reviewed By: holly101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2013 15:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your storys are great keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2013 13:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job of showing the process V goes through to realize the danger Evan was in and why Maddie was so scared. I think you really showed how much V loves Evan in this chapter |
Reviewed By: slsonic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2013 08:48 PDT
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Another great chapter! Wow, did not see that talk coming, although I should have. I thought seeing some grand display of their power would get V to take everything seriously, but this somber note did the trick, and it's the last thing I would've expected to do it. You're always full of surprises. |
Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2013 21:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad this is updating again! I haven't been following InuYasha fiction for a while, but I began rereading the Purity series recently, and I'm glad I did! You are hands down one of the best writers that I've read. I just finished with Phantasm... I hope Evan lets V have Maddie as her MOH since he did tell Bas he'd ask him to be Best Man (even if only to prove a point!). ;-) |
Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2013 21:17 PDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. I hope all is well I. Your world. I am so happy to be reading about my fav rocker again. I'm so glad he an v are getting together finally. I just hope she believes the youkai thing soon. I laughed hard when gin came up with the big dog idea anyhow keep up the great chapters I love every one an early await the next |
Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2013 10:09 PDT
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LOL what on Earth? Did everyone take a dip in the perverted lake or something... I knew what Gin meant by the Big Dog. But then I have always loved how innocent Gin is she can make things seem perverted... anyways hope the Big Dog shows up... I am sure they don't get much chance to change forms do they? |
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2013 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gin will never get how what she says can sound so wrong to others... too cute! What a way to throw in back story... wonder if there are really any readers who didn't know that! Thanks for the update! |
Title: Evan!
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2013 07:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO NOT TELL YOUR FAMILY HOW YOU PROPOSED!! Omg. haha Poor V!!! I guess she better get used to it though ne? I love when the whole gang is together! Great chapter Sue! |
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