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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 › » ] | Title: Love It
Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 11:54 PDT
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I know I'm late, but it's not a problem, I've been reading the Purity Series, since Purity, lol, and I've fallen in love with how you give each and every character such depth and dimension. Evan is, by far, my favorite of Inuyasha's family! Such a complete and utter pervert! Thank YOU for continuing to give us such wonderful stories!
| Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, thank you, thank you! So glad to see you updating again! Boy is Evan going to get it! I hope Valerie realizes her feelings, and "Zel" quits trying to hide his - I hope h's not too hooked on her - hate for him to go through what his mom did. Looking forward to more as always! Sometimes, you make my day!
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 23:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NOES! Evan needs to get back in here and make things right again! I hate seeing them fighting. AWW!! It makes me tear up! Poor Evan and V... and Marvin. I hope things get better between them soon. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!! -MSMND
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 20:56 PDT
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Great, Jillie asked her brother to escort her, and Valerie's about to pop a vessel at him for courting 'jailbait'. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 19:48 PDT
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Your right the last chapter was the same as the others, The difference was I skipped half of it, lemonade will tase better when i'm older :P. I also read your stories all in one go I've never had to stop in between chapters so it was a little different for me, sorry if I sounded rude.
| Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 13:32 PDT
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So I know its hard to admit when you generally care for someone, especially when you don't want to. But goodness she way past denial and moving straight to oblivious! Lol! Then Marvin and V spend a few days of boredom together, being bored and having incredibly bored sex! Well ewww. Lol she knows Evan is the one for her hopefully this girl will help stir up some of that lovely emotion known to man as jealousy! Great chap Sue glad to see things are working out, the seem to always find a way don't they.
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 06:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor V she's all confused and Evan's being a big idiot. I hope she yells at him for it!
| Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 01:53 PDT
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Augh...Marvin and V havin sex....auuuuuuugh. Lol. Girl you are on a ROLL! Keep the chapters comin! Seriously, I cant wait to get to the end of this story, not because I want it to be over, but just cause I wanna know how the heck this is gonna work out! xDD Another wonderful update Sue. Ill be checking back everyday for the next one! =D
| Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew it! valerie has fallen hard for the zel roka. i mean who wouldn't? love your story! thanks for the updates. you are the best!
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 16:04 PDT
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so I think that my roomie is getting annoyed with me. I scream and squeal like a pathetic fangirl every time I see another update on this story. To be quite honest...without the hope of seeing an update, I was getting really bored...I think I might live for these stories way too much hehe anywho as always great chapter...though I do admit I want Marvin to do something not kosher so I can find a reason to dislike him other than him being a little wimp. So bring on the Evan LOVIN!!! :)
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 15:29 PDT
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So the chick is still unknowable lol. Well at least Valerie came clean; however, I'm still wondering who the girl is.
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Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 12:44 PDT
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aw Val... don't know why but those were the first words i had to type. lots of Val angst in the past couple chapters. lol Marvin's kinda cute... but as far as relationships go for the guy i can't imagine a woman who'd fit with him. Val's a lot like some prized doll Marvin takes off the shelf once in awhile to make himself feel better, where he pulls the string and hears her automated pep-talk words. at least, that's how i see it... and i'm starting to think it's gypsy girl. i almost forgot about her until i read another person's review. she obviously has some kind of significance... slow progression, but we're getting towards Val and Roka's next meeting. nice chapter! patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 20:29 PDT
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Umm... that 'thing' sounds like a ghost from his reckless past. A fling during a foreign tour that has now turned stalker, huh? Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: Ch-chapter 56: Good Googa Mooga...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 12:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit, Sue! You just started me smoking again! Shame one you! LOL! Good GAWD, that wet dream was intense. Only, Evan... Anywho, HAD to comment on that dream sequence after I went to the bathroom to, um...use it. "You've got some in your hair"-HAH! Pricelessssssss! Moving right along... I'm not just a hentai; I'm a detailed, if not random-as-hell, commenter--lemme prove it: First of all, I have a new outlook on Bitches-homegirl's hilarious! I though she was eccentric before but her teasing of Evan had me emitting helpless barks of laughter…couple her with Madison and…well, I choked on a grapeskin in mid-chuckle/giggle/snort/howl/guffaw. Okay, there's not gonna be much deep probing to this comment, I guess, Sue. This entire chapter had me in fits of laughter. Only thing to squelch the bubbles of humor was "The Mystery guest". Yeah, I'm intrigued. Is she a stalker, a past lover, a mother of one of the kids he tutors in music at the rec center, a Psychic? Whoever she is, I'm curious…okay, then I laughed some more. Couldn't help it. You do comedy justice, woman! Love, love, LOVEd this chappie! Wh00t!
| Title: Chapter 55: Oh, Val...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I read snippets of her past, her attatchment to Marvin rings so true. In her own way, she does love him. How could she not? He's calm, unassuming, doesn't smother ('cause he's 92% of the time at an out-of-town-health seminar or some such...)...yeah, even with the distance, the connection is there. Something for her to honestly say, no matter how lightwieght the relationship may be in intensity, passion or reverence, "He's mine and he's good and he's not gonna leave me". Sometimes, Sue, I just wanna cuddle your characters, V, prickly pear though she may try to be, is one of them. Very in-depth chapter. Learned a lot about V and loved it! Off the chapter 56! (My bad about the slip in the forum--won't happen again)
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