| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 23:06 PDT
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"Mighty Morphin Midget Merrywether" *heart* I see development! LOVE DEVELOPMENT! NOW JUST CLUE IN ON IT V DAMNIT DX
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 21:43 PDT
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so, i dunno if i've told you this before, but this is one of my favorite stories...actually, pretty much all of you stories are favorites of mine. lol. but aww! poor evan! i just wanted to hurt V! and oh my gosh..."Mighty Morphin Midget Merrywhether"...that KILLED me! i laughed so hard! and i can't wait until they get together! if V would just stop being stupid and give in! lol. great writing sue, you're a real talent(: can't wait until the next update!
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Title: Wonderment
Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Valerie is going to turn out to be the girl from the beginning, isn't she? I just know it. OOO, I can't wait for them to get busy so that they can figure it out, and also, for Evan to reveal what he really is, I wonder how V's logical lawyer's mind is going to process that? I am SOOOO excited.
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 20:57 PDT
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"he'd very nearly lost his temper since he did want her to wear something but he didn't appreciate that he was starting to sound like some uptight old bastard . . . or like Cain . . ." Ahahaaaaaa that part made me laugh xDD. Evan, telling a naked girl to put a damn bathing suit on like an uptight old guy. That was good. But poor Evan! Suffering a heartache he can hardly do anything about! T___T At that moment I just want to hug him! T____________T But it was a great update, despite making me sad! xDD Cant wait for the next one Sue! You must be butter cause youre on a roll! xD /corny
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 18:16 PDT
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great chapter! i'm so happy! and i guessed right on the whereabouts of the contract, but the content of the contract definitely caught me off guard! great job!!!
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 17:46 PDT
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i really, really wanna know where the contract is!! good chapter hope you update soon
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2009 16:56 PDT
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um... where it was? @-@ unsure of how to take that. oh well, yays, they finally got to see each other again! marvin's a sweet guy, but for girls like valerie, long-distant relationships don't work too well. actually, they don't really work for anyone. loved the chapter! patiently waiting, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What did evan do now? Haha He's always getting himself into SERIOUS trouble. But this takes the cake. A gypsy girl?! and now I'm wondering...where exactly is this.... "contract". *shudders* My mind goes a number of different places. anyway, Great chapter! Can't wait for them to get together and be a big happy family! (Maybe without the gyspy girl XD ) -MSMND
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 16:15 PDT
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Ha! I knew it! Man, the kinda messes Evan gets himself into, really *shakes head*. Poor V xD. Heres hopin she can get him outta this one! Excellent update Sue!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 16:02 PDT
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Why does Evan always dig himself in a bigger whole. I feel bad for him lol.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 14:26 PDT
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lol the contract is going to be like, tattooed on the girls boobs or something along those lines XD what an interesting way of fortune telling... XD totally Evan
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't decide if I want to know or not where he put that contract! What a great chappie and as always these two dance so well when they argue!
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 14:13 PDT
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I totally agree with Valerie's final thought.. what did he agree to exactly?? Lemme guess - the contact is buried with the mom? Even if V works this out for Evan, how th heck are they ever going to reconcile? Urgh!! Thanks for the speedy updates Sue! You make me smile!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 13:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now i'm definitely curious. i hope the contract isn't where i'm thinking it is. thanks for the wonderful update!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 13:02 PDT
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Okay so I thought the girl being there would help but now I'm not so sure! I can't be totally sure V won't kill him. And I'm sooo scared to find out where the contract is! Lol
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