| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 13:25 PDT
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Wow Val really is scared of realizing her feelings for Evan. My guess is because of whatever relationship she had with a previous boyfriend discouraged her from trusting someone else? Am I getting the gist of it? Lol I feel for her but I feel worse for Evan because he really cares and how can you fight a ghost that you can't not only see but don't know?
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 09:20 PDT
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*SIGH*. I totally wish I had Evan in my life...That is all.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 09:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again you exceeded my expectations! i'm loving the evan valerie interactions. hoping for more mutual interactions in the future! and i loved valerie's final thought. it was hilarious. thanks so much and keep up the amazing work!!!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 07:41 PDT
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If Valerie is the most like you then she must have depth and I kno that by the end of this tale I'll probably love her. Lol. I hope Violca doesn't try to crawl into bed with Gin and Cain and try to 'appease' them. Dear lordyy that would be hilarious tho. And Merlin..Mervin...aah yes Marvin!....she had sex with it?! Lol gross.. poor Evvie!
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Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 06:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, Valerie defending her evan-given nickname V from violca...i laughed so hard! I am glad to see you are back to writing which must mean that things must have gotten more manageable for you. I missed reading from you every few days...thank you for sharing your stories with us. :-)
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chappie. I'm glad they got Violca sorted though I wonder if she'll try that with Cain LOL. I see an angry phone call later on :) I loved Evan at the end I really do hope they get together somehow :)
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 22:39 PDT
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:D ooo angst very nice angst i needed that right before i went to bed... evan and his angst... gotta love it. ;D ok word has lost all meaning. well the contract thing was pretty much on the side for me since all i could think of was evan and how cute it was that he was all happy he got to see valerie again. :3 aw. and the person he's gonna "ring-a-ding" (i think is what you said)... sesshy? maybe? or cain? loving this as always. patiently waiting, your faithful Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 18:22 PDT
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Aw, my heart wanted to break for Evan at the end of this chapter. Wow, that's gotta be so tough to know that your mate is sleeping with someone else because she doesn't understand everything yet.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 16:40 PDT
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another one so fast your awsome, wanna know what else is awsome? seeing my name at the bottom of the chapter it makes me feel so loved :D
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 15:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! The plot thickens...AND Evan can speak German! You can never go wrong with a multilingual one XD. AHHH!!! I can't wait for them to realize!!! I'm soooo excited! I love the way the act with each other; How V tries to deny but fails and how Evan tries to be good for V but fails. It's adorable! haha Well, Sue Keep up the fantastic work! I love this story almost more than Kich and Belle's. -MSMND
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 12:00 PDT
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I love Evan's story. I've said it many times he is my favorite character. I can't help but dislike valerie though. She seems very controlling and judgemental. I can't wait to read more though to see if there's more to her and if my mind changes about her. I want Evan to have the best happy ending becuz his character is so dear to me. Well happy writings! I reffered a younger writer to ur stories and ur website as a guide for good writing. She asked me for some advice on her stories and writing techniques. I told her to read ur stories and notice the universe you've created and how engaging it is. I hope u can be as much of an influence on her creativity as you've been for my own.
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 09:52 PDT
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so when are they going to learn that they met in college and that they were always destined to love each other? When is he going to sing the song he wrote for her on that night so she can have her revelation? :( poor evan
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Title: OOPSIE--meant chapter 57
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 07:56 PDT
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my bad, Sue...
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Title: Chapter 56 (Dude, I'm behind...): Decisions, decisions...and doubts...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 07:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V, V, V...indecision sucks, huh? With a past like hers, I can see why she so resists finding trying to find anything appealing about Evan--anything with staying power; but even she has to see, has to be starting to see, how uneven the relationship with Marvin and herself is. She doesn't like her job, she's lonely (but doesn't want to admit it--hell, the biggest jolts to her system, outside of hanging out with Maddie when she can, is "babysitting" Evan and observing his "way out there" associates), and her life's being balanced out with a, well, let's face it, rather hit-or-miss relationship with a pretty insecure-therefore-guaranteed-to-stay boyfriend. Oh, wait...FIANCE. Damn, no wonder you wanna cry...repressed feelings about Evan notwithstanding...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2009 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they can both realise that there doing nothing but hurting each other the way there going. IT's really sad to see them both so un happy.
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