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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 › » ] | Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 15:37 PDT
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Oh wow, that was a pretty funny chapter, aside from the sad beginning! Looks like Valerie will have to try on all the outfits from designers that she doesn't want Evan to have huh?
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 15:09 PDT
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AW! Whenever Diet is brought up I feel bad too! He was an amazing character in his hayday. Poor Evan. It must hurt him more since he has to choose someone to replace him. I hope he feels better about that. Now about that codpiece though... XD that had me dying! I was laughing so hard when I pictured V is it with scarves. Oh dear. That was too funny. Love it!! I wonder how this tour's going to go. Will Evan show V that he's still upset about Diet? Will she find out things about him that she didn't know? Will V finally disclose more information about her past life? Will Evan and V finally acknowledge their connection to each other? Ooh... so many questions. Well, We'll just have to stay tuned for the next installment of: Purity 9- Subterfuge. -MSMND
| Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 14:28 PDT
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Haha, codpiece xD. That little stuffing scene was good, totally made me think of a little girl stuffing her panties or something xDD. Im glad were getting closer to that tour, and I do hope it actually happens! Thatll be interesting, no doubt. Sweet update Sue! You give me something to look forward to every other day! ^^
| Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 14:03 PDT
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So finally I'm reviewing to your fic! I absolutely love it! I love Evan and V together and how you make me feel like they're real. I would tell you about the steamy dream I had about your two characters, but I'd rather read what you come up with. That teaser dream that Evan had made me re-read that chapter like a dozen times. SO HOT!!! Thanks so much for a great fic to read when real life is sucky! Can't wait for more and I'm so excited that you've been able to update more!! Thanks ;)
| Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 05:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wondeer when Evan will be able to let go of what happened to Dieter. It's making him really sad. He should talk to V about it maybe she could help :)
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 16:32 PDT
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I'm honestly amazed that Evan got away with nary a bruise during this entire incident. Though, I have to wonder how they're going to deal with the judge that most likely saw the red carpet thing that showed him and the girl together. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 21:32 PDT
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oh noes... i reviewed the last chapter right as you were uploading the next. :( no warm fuzzy feelings for me. oh well. lol funny chapter violca makes me laugh... poor girl. no clue what she's doing wrong. :) and it was ben, so i was kinda close... i guessed cain. well, cain did end up being the one to help in the end, so, i kind of win. :D reading their back and forth banter is so fun... can't wait until the fluffyness. slow but getting there! waiting patiently, your Purity♥er, ~FF7I
| Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 12:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow I missed the alert for last chapter - oh well I got to read 2 at once! So Glad Evan was able to make suitable arrangements for Violca. Might have gotten ugly otherwise. Now back to the problem of V being engaged to the wrong man and keeping Evan out of jail... Maybe the mini-tour will straighten everything out! Great chapter as always Sue! Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 60: I laughed, I cried (literally)...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for the dedication and prayers! Really boosted my morale to read it and took some of the bite out of the reality of the situation. It is what it is (or will be revealed to be), but it's nice to feel cared about in the process)--hugs Sue!!! Onto the chapter... Poor violated V--oh, Violca, honey...you really smooched her, didn't you? Oh, I couldn't repress the snorts and whimpers of held-in laughter escaping my throat. Good Lord, I laughed so hard with this chapter! OMG--STAY! Goodness, that tickled me! But it looks like Evan's getting things strainghtened out with Violca and that's good because she needs mental retraining and I think she'll be in good hands. Her innocence keeps me from wanting to pluck her when she keeps, urm, "cuddling" folks. And, awwwah, with the kinda warm squishy moment at the end. And, let's give it up to Evan and his new-found self control! You go, boy! Way to tuck V in a nd not cop a feel! No, I kid. He's a deviant, but a more honorable one than he lets on. Old commercial jingle to end this comment... "Get a little closer..." Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 59: Oh, the words we don't say...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...all I can say is I see both V and Evan and a crossroads were, for obvious reasons and circusmstances, neither is moving to a resolution. Because, yeah, business and pleasure don't lways mix and, hell, V IS engaged (no matter how lightweight the bond, as she has yet to see the reality of her relationship with Marvin and it's reasons for being), Evan knows the rules of mates and outside of the kiss, even he's not deviant enough to press his luck again (for now, but, who know's with the HEvan, hmmm?)...and I'm rambling. Basically, there's a thin line between love and hate and the line is blurring, kiddies! **indulges in a fangirl squee and optimistic sigh** I just LOVE how perceptve youkai and hanyou (and technically hanyous) are. Another song, just poepped into my mind, came to me as I thought of the last few paragraphs in this chapter. It would be a real hoot to have Evan sing it to her. 'Written All Over Your Face' by Rude Boys. (ooh, off to the forum with this one!)
| Title: Chapter 58: Wow...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan, Evan, Evan...wow. The rap 'Becuase I Got High' comes to mind when thinking of this chapter. The aftermath was just...**ahem**...well, it can't be legal, regardless and still, Violca took the terms pretty literally (hence his "rude" awakening). Wow, when he went over the terms with V, then said he didn't want to break the contract, I felt like I was seeing another aspect of his character but knew that V wouldn't see it that way. Not just for her anger/jealousy/incredulity, but as her role as attorney/babysitter, she was quite understandably outraged that such a contract existed and had such stipulations and carried it's own voodoo hoodoo that Evan seems to believe in. I think she's also stressed about her job and looking good for her boss. Evan's flustered, V's bewildered, Violca's...well...a product of a deal gone WAY awry. Made for a VERY interesting read, Sue! And, of COURSE, I LMAO!
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SWEAR... It's like I know what's going on in your mind sometimes, Sue. Creepiest thing happened. I was logging onto my computer when out of nowhere 'Broken' By Lifehouse popped into my head. I started humming it, waiting for my browser to load when I was like "I wonder if there's a new chapter up?" So I go to MM.org and what do I find? I find a new chapter! So, of course I'm stoked. When I go to the chapter, there are the lyrics to 'Broken'. It was crazy. But I digress, This was a cute chapter! I like Violca. She's just doing what she was taught to, and I am UBERLY glad that Evan and V are getting back to normal. *Sigh* He's such a charming devil. This makes me really want to find a real life Evan. That would be AMAZING. haha Well, keep up the FANSTATIC work. Love your stories, ALL of them. They give me the inspiration to write and I thank you for that. I'm not too great of a writer but I feel that with your unbeknownest help I can be better! I can't wait for the next chapter! - MSMND
| Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 20:53 PDT
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Didnt V already find out about the water bed back in the pretend girlfriend chapter? Im pretty sure she did...When will we be seeing more of the family? So far weve only seen Gin, Cain, Bas, Sydnie, Gunnar, Bailey and Olivia (sounds like alot more when I actually type it out >> xD). Needs more family! I really wish this review system allowed for separate paragraphs, it annoys me how it clumps it all together like this. Awesome update! Im still lookin forward to the ending! PS: Lifehouse rocks.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 15:31 PDT
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SMEXY!!!! Oh, that was awesome that you used that! Just freaking awesome! So Violca will be going to Cain and Gin's eh? I wonder what'll happen when Evan comes for a visit to old Mom and Dad's place lol.
| Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 15:22 PDT
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loved it can't wait for the next one
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