| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: JKD1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 03:09 PDT
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I found my account (its LadyDragonTamer)! I gotta say, Valerie frustrates me! xD I mean, shes sees all these other sides of Evan that hardly anyone else ever gets to see, and with one little kiss, that all goes up in smoke! Silly human (and poor Evan, so misunderstood T_T)! And theres another thing. Whens she gonna learn hes a youkai? I cant wait for that all to come around, cause its around then that Im hoping she starts figuring out she LIKES him! xDD Great update! I cant wait for the next one!
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Title: Appreciation!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you've updated! I hope things are going well for you! I have been reading the Purity series since part 2 was still in the works! I am a HUGE fan! I LOVE your writing style, it is so descriptive, its like im watching an alternate universe Inuyasha anime... i can picture everything in my head! I also love the characters! It amazes me how you created Inuyasha's family... its totally believable too! The chemistry between the characters is so natural, and you did an excellent job with the original characters. I love how you took their traits and distributed them so well in their kids! This is my FAVE purity yet since 5 (that one is my most favorite)! Its witty, entertaining, it has humor, and its tasteful - you managed to make Evan a "lovable pervert" (i would so date him) and Val is a perfect example of "miss independent". I was sad that Dieter died... but authors do things for a reason, and i trust your judgment without a doubt... All in all, I love your work; this is one of the few fics ive followed for so long... I hope you continue to update when you can! Ill be waiting!! THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO PUT UP YOUR FICS SO THAT I CAN ENJOY THEM!! BEST WISHES, KITTY BOBO
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 20:39 PDT
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Ah, so Valery has had a bit of experience with rockstars who treat people like crap, I take it.
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Title: ♥ ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 16:33 PDT
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much love. :) like all of the people happily gazing at their computer screen, i'm glad that you updated. lots of thinking for Valerie... can't wait until we get back to Evan. gotta love the two... and as i like to excitingly point out, Marvin and Valerie don't say "I love you" at the end of their phone calls. one might say "not everyone does that", but Valeria strikes me as the end-of-phone-call-love-declaration type. i dunno what i'm talking about... homework time, tho. again, much love and many hugs for updating, am waiting patiently for more. no rush! Purity♥er, ~FF7I
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 12:59 PDT
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wow! that was great! and welcome back sueric, i've missed ya! that was a great chapter. poor valerie and evan. i love those two. best of luck!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 11:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another emotionally fraught chappie. I hope V can see past Evan's facade and Evan needs to help her do that! Silly man :) I loved your one shot tooo!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 11:38 PDT
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1st off: "Those were the girls who ended up living in their run-down trailers and income-controlled tenements in the slums of the cities like New York or LA with a string of babies from rock star wannabes who didn't pay child support and didn't give a great goddamn"....HARSH!!! Lmao tho bcuz I definitely blinked twice when I read that like whoaa Sue! 2nd: YAYYYY! I'm so happy u updated. I'm hoping this means that things r getting back on track for u and ur family. 3rd: Val needs to ease up on Evan. He's a puppy really. Aww I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Nozome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovee as always i started reading your stories awile ago it just took a long time for me to catch up to were you are now anyway i hope you update soon time for me to start at the begging again :P
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 14:12 PDT
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AH!!! I love this song and this chapter!! It makes me wanna go out clubbing and find me a hot guys to shake it with! haha! Keep up the ASTOUNDING work! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Oh and I hope everything continues to go well with you and your family! Keep you all in my prayers!! ~MSMND p.s. Evan is one scrumptous morsel of man if i do say so myself ;]
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME KEEP WRITING CONTINUE PLZ!!!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 22:31 PDT
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OMG I think my roommate thought I was in trouble when I started screaming over your update!!! that was amazing su!!! this whole slowly forming relationship is great she really needs to dump that jerk marvin!! well he's not really a jerk so I can't say that...maybe he should cheat on her *evil laugh* ^^ I hope you and your family are doing well you are still in my prayers!!! JA
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Title: Chapter 54: **iloveanimecartoons faints**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 07:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Either from ROFLMAO or the KISS--note, all capitals, here, Sue--this chapter made me light-headed. I'm so psyched to see a new chapter, I've considered it an early bday present--wh00t for all Leos!!!! The kinda gay references had me going "Hmmmm...true." And just IMAGINING Bone and Evan grinding on each other? The EPITOME of priceless!!! I wonder how many more chapters I'll read with Evan's YV fussing at him for his faux pas, smooch-wise. Can't WAIT for the next chapter but will be patient as I know all you've been through and would never want to make a pest of myself. Still, I'm so glad to see your story progress! This chapter rocked, Sue! **GLOMPAGE NO JITSU**
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 10:57 PDT
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First it's good to hear from you. Second, I think this chapter was definitely worth the wait!! I never cease to be amazed by what an extraordinary author you are. Update soon-ish.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 07:15 PDT
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Sue! I've missed your gut wrenching stories, your heart felt romances. I'm SOOO glad that you were able to update. I understand your situation more then your could know and I hope that things get better soon. Of course not just for my own purely selfish reasons lol but for your family's sake as well as your own. Great chapter as always. I will be waiting in the wings for the next... (leans heavily against the desk clutching painfully at heart).
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: x siesie x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even after a long break from this story I can't help but be pulled in by it. I can't wait for the next chapter.I've been going through a rough patch right now and that really helped cheer me up. Thank you!
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