| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 01:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvin.... poor lad.. he should go by his middle name or something...
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 22:12 PDT
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Finally, someone that can eventually tame that wild beast. Evan needs someone to hold his reins when he gets out of hand, and who knows when to loosen them when the time's appropriate. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:09 PDT
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Poor Valerie!! lol Update soon please and keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 12:53 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 02:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so he was "human that night?" (thats why the hair and the eye colour(Or color for all you Americans) is different????)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 02:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Magnificent.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 22:29 PDT
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You have made another first...never have I laughed during the lemon and now I have! Lol. Poor V, she was mortified and not all at the same time. I love how Evan just gets under her skin like that!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 06:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan's in for a world of trouble LOL I can't wait. Great chapter i love it!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 21:32 PDT
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Twins, eh?... I'm vaguely curious on how that works, but then again, I absolutely shouldn't ask about that. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drool.... this is so good!!! So funny!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 15:31 PDT
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Awesome!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:39 PDT
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This was freaking AWESOME!!!!!!!!! GREAT CHAPTER! I was laughing the whole time. Madison is very devious, but in a good way. LOL. Valerie seems way more open then I first thought she was. And Evan, I don't think there's a guy in the family just like him. LOL. He's one unique person!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 11:35 PDT
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Holy Hell in a hand basket. I'm breaking a sweat over here! Yep. It's offical. You are only, what, five chapters in, and this is my favorite so far. What can I say, give me citrus, and I'm your best friend forever!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 10:23 PDT
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Oh, wow... I'm actually amazed that Val didn't freak otu more... unless she already has a crush on Evan? (She totally does, in my opinion.)
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:17 PDT
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AAAGGGHHH I LOVE YOU!! I was wondering if you where gunna write Evans story lol. I was curious about Gunnars story too lol.
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