| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 10:03 PDT
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Awww Evan is soooooo bad! LOL But he is right wat kind os relationship is it when u have to pick out your own engagement ring thats supposed to be his job, it tells how well he knows you. Its funny that Zel pointed that out lol
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 09:38 PDT
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Awesome chapter!!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 05:22 PDT
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I forgot to had that Its a gift not just a habit he's developed from being a famous rockstar! And hell its genetic, she would kno that if she knew his real name and who his family is
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 05:19 PDT
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i'll admit Evan is nasty...completely so...However, I don't like her attitude! She doesn't know a damn thing about him. Evan is the sweetest thing. She can assume all she wants but we kno he's a mama's boy from maine who loves his family, he's just different. 2nd Madison is Nasty as well however nice she is. Its not using if the person complies. So she can shove her self righteous indignant nature. Evan is my favorite purity character hands down. Since he was introduced the man can't help it if he's had a way with women since birth!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 05:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually feel quite sorry for Evan.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 04:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V is just a little too...defensive about Marvin. Evan is picking up on that too, I think. And Evan is so tired of being someone he's not in front of everyone. He wants to show her who he really is so badly, even if he's not fully aware of that desire. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 02:16 PDT
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Awww... outrageous Zel and serious Evan! Awesome combo.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 22:34 PDT
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Wow! We should have seen that Candy girl coming lol. Poor V, Evan's driving her insane! Lol.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 15:53 PDT
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Bad, naughty little evan lol. He just knows what to do I guess to get under V's skin. He's so bad but in such a good way lol
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 14:51 PDT
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LMAO!!! Oh gosh, Evan. You just had to talk to her boss didn't ya?! Lol. Poor Val, she's just never going to get a break is she? Lol.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 14:49 PDT
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If it wasn't for the Lawyer/client relationship, I swear that she would have strangled him already. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG I almost forgot to review here, sorry. I love Evan he makes me laugh. I really can't wait to see what happens next, how is Evan going to get her to see the light that he really is a good guy.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 12:22 PDT
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Omg I absolutely LOVE this story! Zel and Valerie together is absolutely hilarious and so adorable at the same time. It's going to be interesting with V and her fiancee though... Whatever, I look forward to the next update and most definetely the rest of this story :)
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 09:07 PDT
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Ahhh, Valerie's stuck with Evan now... maybe she'll get to knwo the real him. And dump Marvin the Martian. (yes, Warner Brothers atill runs in the future! :) )
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 07:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:sigh: Oh Evan, what ever will we do wih you? I can think of quite a few things I'd like to do... Well, a girl can dream, can't she? I love this story. It is a nice break from all the angst going on in 8. It was a very good decision to write them both at the same time. Great work!
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