"Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amerise [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 07:57 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A steel sofa? painful "I'll tell Bitches that you're my bitches, and then she won't try to grab your bitches again." hahahaha
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 06:38 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: HAhahahahahahhaha LOVED IT!! Bitches was great! hahhaha poor V, surrounded by craziness.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 05:54 PDT Comment/Review: Bitches... why am I not surprised? Val's gonna have permanent selective sunburn the more of Evan's friends she meets...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 05:30 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay, the nickname Bitches is just too good. How does Evan collect all these people? He's got his very own freak show following. V got hit on by a lesbian! Ha! I can't wait for more. This is so wonderful and outlandish. I love weird!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 04:50 PDT Comment/Review: I see myself in evan. This is y he is my favorite. Bitches?! That is hilarious. I have friends like that. The gays and lesbians and the sex fiends. The stuck up 1 that u can't help but luv and the one willing to bone me jus to make me feel better. Ah I luv it. Lmao maybe TMI. But ur an open gal. Lolll neways update soon.
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 01:00 PDT Comment/Review: OMGa! XD Poor V, totally violated by "Bitches". Evan has the most interesting friends... One of them hits on Valerie and the other totally hates her because Evan was oogling the cookies. It's completely hillarious and I can't wait to read the trial. That should be beyond amusing. I hope the fiance shows up soon.
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Reviewed By: NicoleeRebels [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 19:33 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i sooo looove zeel rooka!! he's sooo hooot xD you have to update this one too!! anyway i love purity 8 too :D update faster pleaseeeeeee!!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 05:58 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter!! I swear everyone when I get into work, as soon as I pull my computer up I look for your updated, because if there is one, I just know that I'm going to have a splendid day. Of course this was a chapter that I already read, but hey, it's something isn't it? Now I'll just sit idly and whay for Kurt and Sam to come into play. Don't worry, I'm a patient girl...
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 00:43 PDT Comment/Review: Wow...that Marvin guy really is a jerk. A fiance should never be like that. >.< V's just tricking herself. Plus, it was nice seeing the softer side of Evan. He was so sweet to his fans and I liked the way he didn't like V's fiance. Can't wait to see more since they seem to suit each other. Thanks for the update. Didn't even realize another wonderful chapter came out. Thanks, Sue! A nice change compared to P8. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 22:23 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Thats so cute that he is so nice to all of his fans.
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Title: Okay, one more question...my bad, I'm senile... Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 08:00 PDT Comment/Review: Will you be creating more Evan fanarts to go with this story?
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Title: Quick question, Sue... Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 07:50 PDT Comment/Review: Since the beginning of this fic, has Marvin called Valerie ONCE?
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Title: Geez...Evan's got one hell of a bold tongue... Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 07:48 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What I've always noticed about Evan is, debauchery, crudeness, and Bad Boyisms aside, he's amazingly hoonest. I can see why V is so defensive about her Marvin on the research tip and I guess trying to be mature and patient about the lack of tiem spent together as he's always gone isn't exactly an unheard of concept, but...well, Marvin SUCKS, Sue. Evan just has some rather blunt ways of discussing it. He's a real sweetie, I've noticed in previous Purity stories (though he's not prone to showing it openly) and he really gives a damn. I can't wait for the fluff...okay, for Evan, most likely risque fluff but...well, yeah...this is EVAN here, folks! LOL! Still LMFAO at the wall scaling chappie! I'm still kind of in the dark a bit about the guy that was watching her in the resturant though a random theory is that he's somehow involved in the research from Marvin and pursuit of it. But, that's just me extrapolationg as usual. Anywho, great chaps! Funny as Hell!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 14:48 PDT Comment/Review: Evan's not as much of a 'bad boy' as he can seem sometimes. Valerie is just refusing to look at the times when he's his mother's boy, knowing how to treat people properly. And he's right, 1/8th of a carat is... nothing. Isn't that just a shiny speck imbedded in the band? I bet the band isn't even real gold, either. She picked out the cheapest one there, at least, that's what it seems like to me. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 12:05 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love this story but I just want to yell at V, he's a good guy. (sighs) Well Please update soon!
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