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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 22:02 PDT
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Awesome!! Keep up the fantastic work and update soon please! ^_^
| Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 16:37 PDT
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Luv Evan! Diet is my type of guy. Lol
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 15:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeal!!!!!! I want Evan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is so cute!!!!! he is one of my top favourite purity Characters!!!
| Title: Chapter 9: Yay! Evan and V are back! Whoo hoo hoo hoooooooo!!!! **throws panties on the stage** Urk! My slight hentaism is acting up today.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are times in a story where I read a line an suddenly I have to close my eyes, hold in my rather loud bubbling laughter and breathe slowly through my nose. That phenomenon occured when I read these lines: "Are you listening to me at all?" Zel glanced up from strumming the guitar. "Of course, V," he insisted as he resumed his playing. She crossed her arms over her chest and stifled another sigh. "Somehow, I just don't believe you." Zel shot her a completely innocent sort of look-one that was wholly out of place on the man's features since Valerie was relatively sure that he didn't know what that word even meant. "I totally am," he argued. "You know, though, men tend to listen better to shirtless women." And THIS one:"Hey, V, you really should get naked. Don't wanna constipate your chi any more than it already is, right? I swear, I'll be good." And let's NOT forget THIS one: "Blah, blah, blah," Zel pouted, waving the document in the air. "Bare the boobs, V, or forget it." **shakes head a giggles helplessly** Oh, Evan, I missed you SO!
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 10:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was very suprised to see a new chapter of nine. I thought you might have forgotten about it. J/K! So, V's decided to admit to herself that she's attracted to Evan. I just can't wait until she meets Mama, and sees how he acts around her. Any woman would melt into a puddle of goo after they got a load of that.
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 10:51 PDT
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Val's going to be there for a long, long time then, huh? Good thing she doesn't have any other clients at the time. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 22:34 PDT
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i love this story and i really really love evan!!!!!!!! great work, can't wait to read more!
| Title: I'M NEW
Reviewed By: p3rv3-f3ct-o [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i must say that Evan is definitely my favorite character out of all of the purities and that he has been since the first time he was mentioned, although I'm not sure if it's because of his good nature or because of his...special kind of humor and hobbies. well anyways I'm a little puzzled as to who exactly was in the restaurant watching V and i also would like to know a little more on V's background because so far we have yet to read anything based on her personal life other than her boyfriend, Marvin, who is really pathetic. I'm a bit curious as to why she has yet to mentioned anyone in her family. but then again it may just be a little early for that. also, i don't know if it is just me but whats up with V's attitude towards things being dirty. well anyway i must say that reading through this has certainly made me laugh out loud more times than i can count and so far my favorite part must be either the part where Evan asks V whether or not she swallows or V's meeting with bitches, chi chi, and cha cha....uh just thinking bout it makes me wish that the next chapter would just come out already. well NEways sue i hope your mother in law gets better really...and happy(late)4th of july.....8D
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 12:44 PDT
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You're having fun writing about Bitches, aren't you? If Val had her way, Evan wouldn't hang out with anyone except for his family... then again, she probibly wouldn't approve of his family also... Keep up the good work, dark
| Title: They looked at me funny...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*trying to get my breathe back* Oh My God! "Zel!" Bugs grouched, waving the letter under his nose once more. "I'm having a crisis, and you're eyeballing some woman's cookies!" "But I like cookies!" That Bugs I like him, so cute the way he comes on to Evan. And: "So your name is Bitches" "These are the bitches, you see, so the name kind of stuck. This one's Chi-chi," she said, wiggling her right breast. "And this one is Cha-cha," she added, wiggling the left one. "And you are?" I bet Valerie questioned Bitches I.Q. right there, haha, great, I love Evans friends, there are so out of the ordinary it really makes you want to read them, with unbridled Chi's and all. I was reading the chapter after I got of from work and I just laughed out loud all of a sudden when I read Bugs telling Evan not to stare at Val's cookies, everybody in the office looked at me funny! Thanks for the chapter! It completely brightened my day!
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 20:30 PDT
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The way Bugs hisses at V, or any other woman is just hilarious. And the fact that Evan has all these eccentric types of friends just makes him who he is. It seperates him from the rest of the crowd. The meeting between Bitches and Va;erie was priceless. I laughed my ass off! Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next chapter to come out! cutechick18
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 16:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
breathe... breathe... that is fantastic!!! It's very hard to pick my favourite parts out of all of it.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 14:00 PDT
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OMG, that chapter was hilariuos!!! Keep up the spectacular work and update soon please!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 13:49 PDT
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Bitches huh?! LOL what a great way to end the week! Cleanse her aura well to bad Evan has dibs wait he'd like it if the worked on her chi right infront him! LOL great chap
| Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:34 PDT
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I absolutely love these characters Evan surrounds himself with. Bugs and his Publisher's Clearinghouse letter and Bitches with her Bitches. With a youkai voice like Evan's got, it's no wonder he's the way he is. Thanks for the chapter, I laughed through the entire thing.
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