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| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 04:31 PDT
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awww, how cute!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 03:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mawwh!!! cute!!!Finally on the right foot!!
| Title: fall out of the tree fall out of the tree
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 02:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK here is what I'm thinkin, their going to fall out of the tree, he he I watch to much violent cartoon shananagains. but honestly after last chapter I'm all like wooo, that was a close one. until next time, we pitiful masses are a waiting. (pss hey, no kinky dreams Inuyasha)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 02:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I second Cricket42's "Awwwwwwwwww". I thought the way you had Kagome discover the bag of clothing was perfect, and the way they finally made up at the end even more perfect. Things are slowly but surely coming to a close. The siblings are gone, Kikyou's no longer an issue, things are probably going to be tranquil in the next chapter with comical and/or romantic 'fighting lesson' moments...and then some new craziness is going to fly at us out of left field! Am I right? After all, there is still the pesky matter of completing the jewel and defeating Naraku, so I know this story is far from over, plus you just mentioned getting a new idea regarding Kouga. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 00:32 PDT
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Awwwwwwwwww how kawaii! I mell a lemon comeing on after about three days of training. have fun. :D ~Cricket42
| Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 00:32 PDT
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aww I'm so glad they made up and Inuyasha let Kagome sleep next to him. However, one minor problem I had with this chapter was that you made Kagome's "I think you stayed with Kikyo for three days" on the same caliber as Inuyasha verbally thrashing her (even if he did have a reason for it) Although what Kagome and gang did was wrong, I felt Inuyasha was way too mad, especially so soon after basically breaking Kagome's trust with him. However, please don't take this to mean I didn't like the chapter because I really love your writing and this story. You have a wonderfully way of weaving angst, drama, humor, and romance together. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 23:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Glad Inuyasha didn't strike out on his own! I'm still trying to picture what there going to do with koga when he shows up!
| Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 23:26 PDT
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It was... it was awkward... it was just awkward, I don't know, that's the only way I can think to describe it... the dialog was just awkward in certain places, I feel like I'm used to a higher quality of writing from you, and maybe you struggled with this chapter, maybe you were having an off week, whatever the reason, it was awkward… and I honestly, just didn't like this chapter... you're, apparently very good at seeing things from Inu Yasha's side. and that's cool, I'm glad you are, because frankly I never have before... so if you hadn't written this chapter, if I hadn't read it, then I never would have, so thank you. But, I think you're too good at sympathy, you made it seem like Inu Yasha had done no wrong, and that everything was Kagome's fault... see I'm not like you, I'm good at hate, so I hate Inu Yasha, I love him, I love to read about him, but I hate him. yes Kagome did need to apologize, yes she did need to forgive him, truly forgive him, not just the paltry "it's ok I'll live" but I still feel his anger, though very true to the character, was unjustified... oh and the advise, sometimes you'll have to make the right decision or lose the one you love... (Paraphrasing of course) you weren't really clear, I know what you meant, but the way you wrote it could have been interpreted to mean, if you do the wrong thing you'll lose the one you love, or, you have to do the right thing and sacrifice the one you love... but yeah, worth reading, defiantly moves the story along… I still think Inu Yasha was in the wrong on this one. Oh, and one more thing (geez this review is getting long) what happened to him not accepting her? I feel like it kind of got put on hold for this chapter, I mean, you mentioned it, in passing, once, but it was never really was acknowledged... this too is a major factor behind who should apologize to whom and all that jazz... but like I said, Inu Yasha usually is in the wrong, in my mind… can't wait for the next update!
| Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 22:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...all i can say is wow...i think this was one of the best chapters youve ever written! youve really outdone yourself...and inuyashas revelatiojn was well worth all the time you spent writing...lol great job! youre up there as one of my fav authors nowXP lol=D thanks for such a great chapter and all your hard workXD i cant wait for the next chapter=D
| Reviewed By: 0o0mangamad0o0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are such a talented writer and this story has had me hooked from the start. I love your style of writting and even though it makes me scream at the computer,I love the way you can change the mood of the story with ease. One moment i'm full of happiness with the thought of a love sick Inuyasha running off to confess to Kagome, the next second i'm all depressed because everyone thinks that he ran off to Kikyo again. Please update soon and make it a happy chapter ^__^
| Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 10:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was a lot of thinking on Inuyasha's part! I think you did very well with the revelation. I thought he was going to Totosai, but Daichi works as well! I see that now it's Inuyasha's turn to be offended and leave the group. Although I'm a sucker for emotional turmoil, I hope you won't torture us for more than one chapter. Pretty please?
| Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 00:24 PDT
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Oh and my cat likes the story too. Cuz I get comfy to read it and she lays on and goes to sleep on me
| Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 00:18 PDT
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Loved it. Of course i'll email the answer. I think it was too nice too soon with Kikyo. I think its time for a flashback to the conversation Mama has with Kagome that causes her to run after Inuyasha and save his life in more than one way. Maybe time for another New Moon? Anyway great work, oh and I caught the whitewavereborn reference. Courtship was the first fanfic I ever read. If you need/want a beta hit me up, mmkay? Laters~Cricket42
| Reviewed By: sango_gurlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 16:22 PDT
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oops forgot the link for demon kids*sweatdrops* http://img.mypicgallery.com/silvsanime/kagomeninu_large.jpg
| Reviewed By: sango_gurlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i actually found a picture of what kagome would look like hanyou and i thought it was cute. so here she is hanyou-->http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view?back=http%3A%2F%2Fim ages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dkagome%2Bhalf%2Bdemon%26fr%3D slv8-msgr%26ei%3Dutf-8%26x%3Dwrt&w=200&h=200&imgurl=static.flic kr.com%2F3007%2F2967481467_aff1161932.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.flickr. com%2Fphotos%2Fhbkishot%2F2967481467%2F&size=18.3kB&name=kagome+hal f&p=kagome+half+demon&type=JPG&oid=108c636678b7b6d6&fusr=hb k11&tit=kagome+half&hurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.flickr.com%2Fphotos%2Fhbk ishot%2F&no=1&tt=133&sigr=11h8pj1ir&sigi=11gh35iib&sigb =12s6pta8c&sigh=1166bg6in and here is her with our favorite inu and kids=DD check out my story the diaries of a mad half demon=] i think you would like=]
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