| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 17:07 PST
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i was so glad to read your author's note on the last chapter. i hate stories where kagome is mysteriously turned into a hanyou and they go about using super-human powers to fight hapily ever after. i love stories that are dripping with angst. i love inuyasha's protective nature regarding kagome being treated as less than a person. i love her confusion over his reactions. both have been introduced with a subtlety that will help the reader without having it seem too blatant or leading. i love your writing stlye. it's very comfortable to read. the pretentiousness that so many writers fall into is not present in your stories. i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 22:12 PST
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so surprised that her friends would give up on their matchmaking so quickly. ♣ cute scene when he comforts her like his mother did him, i like the idea of a purring kagome. so kawaii!! >=P ♦ one guesses that occasionally the japanese might divert from their traditional breakfast to indulge in the more fat and protein laden american fare... ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 19:08 PST
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interesting. And am looking forward to the whole angst thing ^^ And I think Inuyasha is very much in character.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 05:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agrees totally with your logic... lol today in class we were talking about how some people (note Star Trek fans) can be the most pickiest people ever... great story!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 01:59 PST
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funny chapter! too bad that he can't explain his fears to her for why he wants her changed back. i was thinking that there probably be less prejudice for two hanyou together than if a hanyou and human miko get together? ♠ i guess totosai can take one of her fangs... ♦ then there's the reactions from people like kouga, sesshoumaru, naraku? what kinds of special attacks she has and if she can combine her reiki with any of them. ♣ thinking of loud noises, one can get used to the noise being in a club or a concert after a while so it should normalize for her quickly, and since she has youkai healing she won't go deaf! ♥ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 00:12 PST
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so she frees the cat purifies the evil intentions and retains his youki. i must be freaking nuts too because i had no problem understanding that. ♣ as far as not affecting yasha when she blasted the evil-- remember when they were fighting the thunder bros and shippo became kagome's bow? the arrow was touching him as she charged it with reiki and shot it with his body. he wasn't affected either. apparently she shouldn't be able to indiscriminately purify anyone who she or her reiki accepts as friend/family, even if it radiates from her. ♦ now how is everyone going to react if she starts having feline attributes? i'm thinking a neko-hanyou? please, no tail. ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 11:09 PDT
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OOOOOoooh! Can't wait to see what happens with the neko!!!
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Title: Hangin on cliff by pinkies! :P
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*it makes for one hell of a cliffie!* Yea, it does, as we be hangin here by pinkie-tips! :D Must say good, and fast, update tho. ;)Kagome is basically stuck in hell, ya might as well say, with no way out in sight. Yet! *ponders cliff thing here* Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 14:49 PDT
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one wonders if kikyo could return the favor and assist kagome in her recovery. then again, that would be too easy. ♣ great start. i'll be eagerly anticipating more! ♥ thank you, ginny
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Title: Kewl!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, good start. I like it thus far. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like it will be pretty good! I hope kagome will be okay.
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