| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"And conquer" is my guess. I suppose it could have been worse if Naraku had caught them in the middle of something, it might have made him very jealous though that she would go willingly off with Inuyasha and not give him a look. It was a bit short but if that means the next chapter will come quicker I am all for short. This should be an interesting battle. I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 18:47 PDT
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And Conquer? lol,just my guess.great chapter,but it seemed a little short :(
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 04:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the best line in this one is "Hakudoshi! Go summon Inu- Never mind; he's already here."
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like Kagome was caught with her pants down but hey it could have been worse. Both her and Inuyasha could have been caught literally with their pants down. Thanks for updating with another great chapter and I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Divide.. And Conquer? (is that the next chapter name?).. Well, now for the review. This chapter was short compared to the nice long ones we're used to, but I forgive you. Your work is far to good to stay mad at you for very long. I really can't wait for the sting/bite? to come back into play! All in all, I'm still sitting here on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 09:29 PDT
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Pardon the late review - health and work and a whole lot of other crap have intruded upon my time (stupid, stupid real life)... but I've been waiting for a free moment to gush about this chapter! *snickers* Mrs. Higurashi's teasing was really well-done... she's a great momma and it's nice to see her as more than the ridiculously crazy woman so many people portray her as. Your portrayal has her walking the line between "caring mother" and "acknowledging her child's strange future" without going overboard. LOL And their banter is great, too. You deserve all the kudos in the world for continuing to keep these two in-character after coming together... so many authors have them turn into pale imitations of themselves, saying nothing but cutesy, fucked-up loving things and never ever ever arguing again. *facepalms* Oooohhh that bite or sting, I'm betting is coming back? I also like your acknowledgment that Kagome does, in fact, require regular human contact. So many writers ignore it... Aw hell, you know what? Your fic is just a fabulous demonstration on how to avoid most of fanon's worst moments. You deserve a box full of delicious cookies ^_^ Hope you enjoy(ed) your vacation!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So that sting was something putting poisen or goodness knows what in her blood? Wonderfull story by the way! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic Chapter!!!!! good luck! have a nice holiday!
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 21:13 PDT
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so excited to see a ch posted. Can't wait to read what trouble that "sinister" taste is. My mind has a few possibilities floating in it. Good Luck at the tables. Please don't make your readers wait too long.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 12:47 PDT
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Another great chapter! Even if it takes you until September, you won't disappoint us!
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Reviewed By: JennyLynn On: July 26, 2009 22:02 PDT
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I've enjoyed your plot development and personal spin on the Kagome-as-a-hanyou angle. I've also enjoyed finding the recommendations you've listed that I'd not yet read. If I may recommend one for that is complete except for a missing epilogue, "Sloppy Seconds" by Cutie Pie Hentai.
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 20:02 PDT
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Now to get Inuyasha into football (which rules over baseball hehe) and he'll be set in the future. I really liked this chapter, even with the lack of lemony goodness.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! Lol, Inuyasha and Kagome babies. I can just imagine.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: July 14, 2009 20:45 PDT
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I really wanna see an Inu/Hojo showdown. I know Hojo doesn't stand a chance but I still love it when Inu gets to knock some sense into the idiot. Anyway this was a really cute chapter and I enjoyed reading it. Update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Jinxie On: July 14, 2009 13:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say that while I very rarely review (don't have much to say other than "MORE!!!" or in some authors cases "you're not texting you're WRITING learn the difference!") I thought I should let you know that I enjoy your writing and am a fan of several of your fics. Thanks for sharing your stories and please keep it up. J.
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