| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 20:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely don't have to worry about this story being too short! You're past the half-way mark to 100! You trying to beat my record or what? LOL. Great update, by the way. Loved the bit tossed in with the mouse toy. And you raise a really good point with the whole marriage thing. So many people, myself included, usually focus on the youkai side of things, that even though he's hanyou, he has to obey youkai laws for this and that, and if he marries her, it's usually just for her sake, or her family. But he is half human. 'Bout time he admitted it!
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2010 11:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! The beginning was so sexy and hot!! Loved every moment of it!! I think Inuyasha is becoming more mature and secure in his relationship with Kagome, the fact that he is thinking about giving her a birthday gift is utterly sweet, and now that he is considering marriage, I can hardly wait to see Kagome's reaction!! Great chapter, please update soon again!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2010 16:02 PDT
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FLAWLESS as always ^_^ dont keep us waiting 2 long
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Reviewed By: beautiful-surreal(forgot my log in) On: June 18, 2010 00:37 PDT
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XD Nice! Started hot, ended sweet!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Wonderful update; I especially liked the way it started, LOL. But all in all, you really are tying up loose ends, and I think that's wonderful. Get all of the last minute unresolved issues from before taken care of, so we can all move forward towards the end of this story with a clean slate. I can't wait to find out what Inuyasha's present is! Keep up the good work. :-)
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Reviewed By: slvrdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 20:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I checked my e-mail and saw that you had updated! I must say this fic is one of my all time favorites! (And trust me... I've read a LOT of fanfics!) Keep writing amazing stories like this! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my dear sweet beating heart be still. I haven't written a review on a fanfic in probably a year, but I couldn't help myself. oh gosh. for the past two or three days, I've spent every spare hour reading this. How could I have missed such an amazing fanfiction for the better of two years?! Probably reading all of Sueric back then, haha. but seriously! I love the twists and the plot. It drips with all the good little bits that I love. One thing I'd like to say is if I didn't know your sex, I wouldn't be able to tell if you were a man or a woman from the way you right, which I think is an amazing thing to accomplish :] Plus all the extra villains in the story give it a bite that many other authors don't think of. They normally stick with Naraku plus a few others from the manga or anime. along with the nicely added amount of lemonade that's in it, I don't believe there's any other fanfic that I've read that could rival this one. Add the fact that you weren't scared to make Kagome lose her first child and the countless obstacles Inuyasha & she have together.. I just can't say it enough. You've impressed me so much. When anything can make you feel an emotion, you know it's good. & to be honest, I did indeed tear up once or twice & I found myself smiling often. Amazing job.
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Title: Huzzah!
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 09:39 PDT
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Great chapter! I'm very happy that Inuyasha and Kagome are toghether again. Now, I wonder what this next bad guy wants from Kagome...
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Title: Huzzah!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! The 'future' youkai are explained, the new bad guy is revealed, and Kagome and Inuyasha have done the nasty! Things are progressing! Yay! This chapter is like the season finale of a really good drama show, wrapping up some issues while simultaneously revealing new ones. Now we can move forward with Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship fully restored, and just in time to deal with new problems. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay yay yay!! new chapter!! thank you so much oh great king baka!! that was amazing! and the lemon was awesome sooo long awaited!! man, not another bad guy after kagome and this time not the jewel but kagome herself. im glad that kanna finally got what she wanted though. (=^__^=)
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Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2010 12:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter like always, the only thing is in your footnotes; from what the inuyasha movie tells us, inuyasha is 200 years old according to myouga~~
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Reviewed By: slvrdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 19:04 PDT
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I don't usually don't read stories that are not completed unless I particularly enjoy the author's work. But I must say this story is definitely a must read for anyone who enjoys fanfictions. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece and please don't stop! ^.^ ~slvrdragon
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2010 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! i cant wait for u to update!! at first i was debating with myself if i wanted to read this or not but once i did i was hooked!! its amazing and im learning this too! i love ur stories and would really love it if u read my as well. i havent posted anything on mediaminer yet but they are on fanfiction under the pen name anime-manga loveers. update asap plz!! (=^__^=)
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Reviewed By: beautiful-surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 18:10 PDT
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かわいい ! ! ! I love this chappie!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 11:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update! The plot thickens, indeed. I think the use of 'concealment charms' is a necessary evil, in this instance. There really is no other way to get around the fact that, in the canon, it appears as though there are no more youkai in Kagome's time, at least aside from that 'soul piper' thing. For a story based off the canon, the choices really are limited to: there are no youkai in Kagome's time, or concealment charms. I can't wait to find out who in the modern world is after Kagome! Keep up the great work!
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