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| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 23:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know maybe the problem that they are having stems from kagome losing their child. Having a miscarriage can put a lot of strain on a relationship even more so if they don't talk about it.
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 20:06 PST
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Havent read the chapter yet but it looks like sadness is coming... boo =[
| Title: 1st Place Winner!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 08:35 PST
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://jaimed1968.deviantart.com/journal/29840759/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Dec09/ First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: beautiful-surreal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 03:02 PST
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Heya, reviewing again. I got an account this time, so you can reply. I've already got so much junk mail coming into my mail I don't really even care any more- not that this site is going to send me any of course. Anyways, BRILLIANT chapter! I had to dig through so much stuff on ff.net just to find the link to this story again- and I'm glad I did. Even if it is 3 in the morning now. I loved it. It's so real. Sorry if I don't make much sense, I'm dead tired. Well, ttyl.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 15:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man...Inuyasha, couldn't you have said Kikyou "took" the jewel? Make it sound a little less like you just gave it to her...even though you did. Then again, any mention of her name was bound to upset Kagome, regardless. Still, after everything they've just been through, and that powerful display that clearly demonstrated how thoroughly bonded the two of them actually are, I doubt Kagome will let it go too long before allowing him to explain himself. They really need to have that heart-to-heart, though.
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 14:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy they all made it out alright. -Sigh of relief- Their bond is so darn beautifully written, it's ridiculous. That whole miko power resonating within tetsusaiga bit was flawless, you have awe'd me once again. But damn, just when things were finally starting to come together, BAM Kikyou enters the situation and we are sadly left with a cliffy. PLease, for the love of all that is gracious and holy in the world, come back quickly because I simply cannot stand the wait. I know this new development is minor ocmpared to what they've all been through, but I just want them to get their happily ever after already, loll. Update soon please
| Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 06:41 PST
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wow! this chapter was great! loved the action and the fact that Inuyasha and Kagome are back toghether. But...Inuyasha is really in trouble for giving the jewel to kikyou.
| Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 04:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was AWSOME!!! So exciting, I felt like I needed popcorn and candy. I can hardly wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: Sakura-shi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 04:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hole-lee shit. *shakes her head*
| Reviewed By: InuJennKai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2009 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say you are the first male fanfic writer I've read that doesn't suck. Your lemons are very well written which I have to say was surprising. As you said a lot of fanfic writers are female and prior to this the only fanfic written by a male I had read belonged in the badfic hall of shame. So thank you for changing my opinion. I'm really enjoying this story and now have to add it to the "in progress" fics I'm following. I have enjoyed the fics you rec'd too.
| Reviewed By: Akikoyono On: December 13, 2009 23:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly let me congratuate you on writting 40 chapters. That by it's self is amazing. Now thats out of my system. . .Your story is insanely addicting. I'm sure my boss would love to cheerfully strangle you for all the times I've come to work barely awake from staying up all night reading. I'm very pleased with how the plot and characters are developing through out the story. The characters have strengths and weaknesses which makes them very believable. I've read many different Inuyasha fanfiction and this has to be by far my most favorite one. A lot of fanfictions are just Inuyasha and Kagome jumping each other like bunnies, but you build up their relationship. I literally was squiring in my seat with the tension that was built up, rooting for Kagome and Inuyasha to get together. Another thing I really enjoyed is that you've mentioned things/people/events that have happened in the manga/anime. You added the small details into your story making it even more believable. I've read to chapter 40 and I can tell you really enjoy writting this. It really shows in your writting. I was a little surprised when I at first realized you were a guy. I'm sure you might get that a lot, but really. . .that's a complement. I suspected a while back in some of the earlier chapters. . . but really it's great that you, as a guy, can nail female emotions pretty well. (Hell, I am a girl and sometimes I'm clueless on what other girls are thinking or feeling) So now I come down to this latest chapter and how it ends. A cliff hanger. An excellent way to slowly kill your readers with anticipation. I'm a writter myself and I know the advantage of using a cliff hanger but it's very different when your writting the story and you know what's going to happen. Really, it's a love/hate relationship here on cliff hangers. Regardless, just know that you have me waiting on the edge on my seat for the next chapter. Thank you so much for your time and effort writting this wonderful fanfic. Keep up the good work!
| Title: ... you're evil... *eye twitches*
Reviewed By: beautiful-surreal On: December 12, 2009 01:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. Um, I really want to go on a rant right now, but I'll try to talk about my ratings right now. Your 'Style of Writing': Wicked awesome, but to be honest, my eyes did slip over a line once or twice, and it led me to confusion, but I dunno if that's something you can fix. I think I need to pay more attention. ;) I so totally didn't know you were a guy until you wrote about your girlfriend massaging your shoulders in one chapter and about how 'other guys' must get the same treatment. Then I was like: 'Oooh... now that makes sense...' Some guys DO know an awful lot about women's bodies, though I have to say that I don't think a girl would know about 'ball sweat'- as you wrote in that training chapter. Eh, so it all clicked into place. You remind me of my friend, actually. Nice guy. Spelling & Grammar: Nearly perfect, just a few tiny mistakes about- on an average- every four chapters where there would be like, two mistakes that only an overly sensitive eye like mine could possibly pick out. I don't mind. Just pointing it out, even if I am annoying. :/ Originality/Creativity: BONZANGA!!!! (random word I just made up)!! YOU GOT IT!!!!! You got it!!! This is a really good, gripping story, and it is really fulfilling my random crave for 'Kagome-with-cat-or-dog-ears-like-Inuyasha' fanfiction at the mo. Enjoyment Factor: Is that even a question? Seriously man, you would've had me lying on my belly on my bed reading 'till early hours of the morning if it weren't for my dad trying to rearrange my sleep schedule. Overall Rating: I already gave my ratings, and I gave a reason for the other ratings, so basicly I just summed up everything I just said and gave you the best mark I could on a fair point scheme. Onto the rant. HOW YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS!!!!! WAHHH!!!! You're just evil!!!! PLEASE update SOOOON!!!! I LOVE this story for all the above reasons! ... ok... I suddenly just ran out of rant, 'cause I think I got my point across. Anyways, I love how you write! If you want to contact me, I have an account on fanfiction.com under the same name I'm using here, so please do contact me. I'd like to hear what you think about this crazy review. :D ;) Love ta hear from you. Later.
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 15:43 PST
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*gasps* I am utterly stumped as to how this will play out, and extremely anxious. How will Kagome get Inuyasha out without detection from the villagers? Will she save all the other youkai as well, even though that will draw so much more attention than they need? If that happens then they will have a full out battle on their hands. Also, there is that dream that Kagome had a couple chapters back. What in the Sam heck is awaiting them with that one? That, my friend is a WHOLE different story that will hopefully be written after all this madness is resolved. I especially cant wait for the OFFICIAL reunion chapter when Kagome and Inuyasha are finally alone together to sort out all of this messiness and not to mention the inevitable steamy lemon! OOOHH Your story is making me giddy! UPDATE ASAYC =]]
| Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 04:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!! Another killer cliffy, *whine, whine, moan, and complain*, ok ok, the fit throwin is over. I'll deffinetly back next time.
| Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 00:02 PST
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Finally, Kagome found Inuyasha...Too bad that i have to wait until the next chapter too se what happen. Oh well...I can't wait!
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