| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
| Pages (29): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 22:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geeezzz...koga needs to wake up! He's such a bigot. I just hope he never finds out about that knife. He could kill her. I gotta say kikyo took It better than koga.
|
Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: angelbear On: April 14, 2009 09:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
KEEP IT UP KEEP IT UP KEEP IT UP KEEP IT UP
|
Title: ohh I can't stand it
Reviewed By: ileana On: April 13, 2009 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why why are they always interrupted? poor kagome is going to go crossed eyed if this keeps up. I love the story, this is the most believable "kagome turns hanyou" i have read in my vast years as inufanfiction reader. I wonder when Sessh will make his glorious appearance? I've read the chapters you have written in maybe two days since I needed sleep. I like they way you write, don't let anybody tell you otherwise. An update soon maybe... :-3 *offers cookies in exchange for more chapters*
|
Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 17:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
the dialog was a bit more... "free." a bit more OOC, not that im complaining, this chapter certainly made me giggle... and i dont know, maybe you did it on purpose, a small change in their behavoir would totally be exspected after something like that. i still dont think it was so much kagomes fault, but you're right, it never had been before, so an enphasis (sp?) needed to be made... anywho, great chapter, can't wait for the next, so hurry and update soon!
|
Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 12, 2009 06:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey just because we are masters of the art of saying one thing but meaning something else entirely does not mean we are insane. We are just very good with the whole keeping your friends close but your enemies closer thing. Honeslty women should be the brains behind most schemes. Anyway of the topic of gender, I was hoping this would be more along the lines of sexual frustration. *shrug* it was still a good chapter though. I am really glad that you aren't making this easy for Kagome; I've read a lot of fanfics that make her learn super fast and have become way stronger than Inu. Now while I can appreciate a strong female simply for the sake of female comradery, I'm not gay, I am also a realist. A female cat would NEVER win against a large male dog. And since the youkai seem to take on the strengths and weaknesses of their animal counterparts. I also could not see a female neko hanyou being stronger than a male canine hanyou. Faster and more agile yes but definitely not physically stronger. Plus dogs are built more for stamina and long distance running while cats are more for speed and are sprinters by nature. Anyway I'll leave it at that. My bf gives me shit about ranting all the time. Update soon ok ja!!!
|
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 22:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hooray for Kagome's landed punch! ^^ And then Inuyasha's reaction had me wondering if his youkai side was just really "proud" of her LOL. But what it turned out to be probably makes more sense to his character. Here's hoping for more training encounters with Kagome's sexy body sweaty and jumping around! xD Hell, I'm a girl, but I don't envy him having to endure that. The 'teenage virgins' part got me laughing. That was so priceless cuz it's true! =D Anyways, I'm glad you already have some of the next chapter done, I can't wait to read it! With the SessxKag epidemic spreading, I'm really starving for good fanfiction!
|
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 21:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! Sesshoumaru with boobs doing laundry...well he does look like a women. I'm not a sessh fan Great chapter! I hope you get the next one out soon. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 12:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
hehe, the training part was cute, and so was the sleeping together. I can't wait to see what makes the second day so weird. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 08:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea... Most of us would be threatening or have kicked him in the balls by now... great chapter
|
Reviewed By: reader00 On: April 11, 2009 06:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! I was wondering what happened to you, it took so long for you to update. But I am happy you did! Update soon!
|
Title: please just one little kiss
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 03:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think maybe, just a little bit, you find pleasure in teasing us. But the chapter was very satisfying (enhanced by the teasing I'm sure). I hope you don't get to comfortable in the folding chair you sitting in as you watch us all dangle on this cliff. I know it must be hard though we probably make a pretty picture schwermin around in anticipation the way we are.
|
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 00:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
god i loved inu being all dominate just so sexi. oh and women are never insane. we're all crazy. there's a difference. insanity is not knowing your insane. craziness is knowing but having to much fun to care. so ha! and to most women nothing is sexier than the man we love thinking he's in charge(cuz he never is). to quote my big fat greek wedding "the man might be the head of the family but the women is the neck and she can turn the head anyway she wants."oh and dont hide behind the desk you should just run your more likely to live. ks? *huggles*~Cricket42
|
Reviewed By: Light-Eco-Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 00:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, please get out the second part soon! Pretty please?
|
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 13:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2009 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2009art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction_March09/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
|
Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 19:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
omg awww great chapter=d and i loved the kagome revelation too! you have such great talent with wordsXP great jobXP
|
| Pages (29): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] |
