| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukaite123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 17:57 PDT
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GREAT UPDATE! I love your story please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 17:32 PDT
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Fantastic! i take perfectly written chapter as an early birthday present. thank you, i will cherish it always an probably read it again... it was that good...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 16:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah...exams suck great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last two chapters were wonderful. Very intense and leading without being over bearing. Fantastic work as always.
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Title: I'm Curious...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 07:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I believe the legal term that you threw in there was "bigot: a person obstinately or intolerantly devoted to his or her own opinions and prejudices ; especially : one who regards or treats the members of a group (as a racial or ethnic group) with hatred and intolerance". And yeah Kouga is boderline idiot right now, I would not be surprised to see Kagome use her short sword on him. Now that I say that, could it possibly turn into a whip maybe? (I saw catwoman too many times! lol) and maybe use it to whip Kouga's sorry ass into oblivion? hey a girl can hope can't she? *smiles*. The ruined moments have been far too many, and you like to make us suffer don't you? I would have gone either crossed-eyed or jumped 'yasha by now, immaculate Kagome is just to understanding...and Shippou just needs reassurance that if they do get together he will not be left out of their circle. Nice chapter 'king, I hope we might get a follow up to this scene soon! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 06:59 PDT
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I've been reading this story since the beginning and I love it. I tend to be a lurker which is why I haven't reviewed until now. As a 1L however, I would be remiss for not answering your challenge. You'd like us to go for sue, which is a legal term but I caught onto "domain." Yay Property class!...not.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you mean sue??? great story!!! great lines too: "To get my bathing supplies! Speaking of which, you stink like a dirty gym sock. You need a bath too." "Believe me, wench, leaving you alone in the middle of the woods would be asking for trouble." It wasn't "unscented" as Kagome had promised, but the odor was benign enough to be compatible with his sensitive nose. It astonished her how quickly Inuyasha became putty in her hands. He had probably never received a massage before, but judging by his reaction this wouldn't be the last time she gave him one. That was fine with her; any physical contact was more than welcome. Inuyasha was anything but fine. Most of his body had been lulled into a blob of spongy goo by Kagome's ever-talented hands, but a certain part of him was far from relaxed. He was hard as stone, for fuck's sake! "Kaede said you were taking a bath, so I thought I'd join you. I didn't know Inuyasha was here, too." Then, Shippo smirked, and Kagome knew what that meant. Mischief. "So, you finally took my advice, eh Inuyasha?" the kit drolled, earning an even harsher glare from the hanyou, if that was possible. "I told you way back when we first met that it's more fun to bathe together." The snapping of Inuyasha's temper was almost audible. "THAT'S IT!!!!" he roared as he leapt out of the river in a single bound. Shippo literally escaped capture by the fur on his tail, scurrying off into the underbrush as fast as his four paws would carry him. "Come back here, you little shit!!! I'm gonna skin you alive!!!" Inuyasha bellowed, vanishing after him. With her arousal receding at an agonizingly slow pace, she was gradually switching back into `virgin mode.' She considered grabbing Inuyasha's clothes, but quickly dismissed that idea. If she did that, he would need to seek her out-stark naked-to reclaim them. That was the last thing she needed; she definitely wouldn't get any sleep if she saw any more of him. She was already expecting a long night as it was. Shippo was certainly happy; he passed out as soon as his head touched her sleeping bag. Getting chased around by a nude hanyou would tire anyone out, unless of course you wanted to be caught… And there was that dirty mind of hers again, the other reason she couldn't fall asleep.
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Title: King of the tease
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 04:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm goin' into full pout mode now (arms crossed and everything) :P~~~~~~! I hope you like that raspberry, it was really juicy. In my head, when Shippo showed up I saw Inuyasha chucking him across the forest like after their little chat about Kagome "liking" Kouga maybe after they first met on the show. He needed a chucking for spying the little jerk. Back to squirming now...
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 02:48 PDT
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so close! ^^ can't wait 'till next time
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 00:51 PDT
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hehehe I loved the tooth scene. And poor frustrated Inuyasha and Kagome, so many missed chances. I can't wait to see how this encounter with Kouga works out. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 00:32 PDT
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Wow dude just wow~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter, getting a kick out of the sexual tention and the almost kisses. Although I am not getting a kick out of the cliff hangers -sigh- they suuuuuck. Ack, and I had to go back and look for a legal type word... I'm just that wierd. Assertion, conviction, interrogate... Any of those? Pfft... do I atleast get a cookie if I get it? Cookie? Two cookies?
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 00:12 PDT
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Beautiful chapter, truly! Hee hee... Ball sweat. I must say that vaginal sweat stings like a bitch, and ass sweat does indeed suck! xD And thanks for fulfilling my wish for another ear-rub! (I know you probably didn't do it for me, but still =P) Grrr, Shippo, that little shit! He needs to be taught his place, he's getting as invasive as Miroku in their intimate relationship. Hooray for this Kouga encounter, it makes me so happy to see that prick about to get humbled! Maybe Kagome will use that new training to kick his ass a bit? =) Literally can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 23:26 PDT
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great chapter, i dont have anything specific to say about it other then, great chapter. so keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 23:26 PDT
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Wow! Hey, thanks for mentioning my Japanese Cultural Guide in your story. When I read the section about Miroku walking before Sango I knew that you had some understanding of the social hierarchy in Japan. But I was so happy to hear that you had learned about it from reading my piece. :-) OK You made my day. Oh and I had lots of fun reading about my favorite hanyou being frustrated. Hee hee. There's just something funny about that guy not being able to get what he wants. Well, hopefully he'll find some 'satisfaction' pretty soon. Keep writing...
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