| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hayyla On: May 07, 2010 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please!!! Update more and more and more and more!!!! It's just addictive! Keep on doing it that well!
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! More things are coming to the surface! Youkais in Kagome's world? And who is the one after her? A reincarnation of Naraku maybe? This story is grat! Next chapter please!
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Title: sm
Reviewed By: sunnymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I love this fic it took a few days to finish reading it but it has become a favorite for me hope u update soon. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: I bow to King Baka
Reviewed By: YuriYaoiHet_ILoveEmAll [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 05:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I have been reading this story steadily over the last few weeks. I abosolutley LOVE this story!! You have created your own unique spin on the Inuyasha universe that is abosolutley captivating. The realtionships between the characters aren't all perky and happy-go-lucky like they are in some stories. You add in the fights and akward stages that every realtionship has that gives them strength and beleivability. I literally cried when Kagome and Inu lost the baby. I miscarried first baby and it destroyed my relationship, so I could really empathize with Kagome. I barely found the strength to move on from that. You really wrote that well. Anyway, on to lighter sujects. I like the 'Kagome is a hanyou' thing and I've always imagined her as a cat too. Lol. I like Kiku and a sincerley hope this isn't her last apearance. I have a teeny, tiny suggestion though. Since Kagome is a hanyou, it would be kind've neat if you added in a 'Kagome is in heat' chapter. Think about it please. I can see it now. Kagome goes into heat unexpetedly while she is in the present and her scent driving Inuyasha crazy. Her feelings are similar, but she can't pin-point why she feels this sudden overwhelming desire for him, ecspecially in this akward stage in their relationship. Then, when they go back to the fuedal era, kagome would inevitably seek out Sango's advice and Sango tells her about youkai heat periods. I can imagine the looks on their faces now. Lol. Sorry. This isn't my story and I'm trying to take over in a single review. Profuse apologies. I'm still gonna post this though cause I think it's an ok idea. Anyway, as I said before, awsome story and I;m looking forwrd to your next update.
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Reviewed By: pugglegirl242 On: May 03, 2010 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic!!!!! keep posting!!!! STOP KEEPING ME IN SUSPENSE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: beautiful-surreal(too lazy to log in) On: April 24, 2010 21:51 PDT
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OMG! Thats so damn CUTE!!! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will admit, that kind of read like it could have been the ending, but I knew you weren't done with this story yet, so no momentary panic attacks over here. Instead, that was a nice conclusion to that part of the story. Now onto whatever else you have planned to throw our way!
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2010 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awww! So cute! Awsome chapter. I've always wondered about that too, where do their clothes go? Shippo as a balloon, clothes go inside, makes sense. But what about Sesshoumaru *waggles eyebrows* where do his clothes go when he transforms? Or maybe youkai have special enchanted clothing or something? Cause Yasha's haori can repair itself so maybe that's it.
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 07:26 PDT
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I don't think that Kiku is evil. I think that her young mind is still alive in the demon body and that she only wants to play with other childs...Well, we'll see in the next chapter! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 21:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Wonderful update! Something tells me that despite her transformation, Kiku is not evil. Didn't hurt Shippou? Only held the boy by his robes? No bodies found? Also steals rice? Something tells me Kiku had no intention of injuring her little village friends. Still, they can't just leave her like that, and how will they get the jewel shard out of her without hurting her if she ate it? I doubt it'll work its way out on its own in the conventional sense. Glad to know the next chapter is already just about ready to post, I'm really looking forward to seeing part 2 of all this. Loving that Inuyasha and Kagome are repairing themselves. Who knew good communication was the key to a good relationship? Ha!
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Reviewed By: Black~Vixen On: April 21, 2010 20:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've checked daily since your last update eagerly waiting for the next chapter, and I must saay, it was well worth the wait. I love the way you write Inuyasha and kagome. You've become one of my favorite authors on here^^ I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens. keep it up.
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Title: Cliffies
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 13:43 PDT
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Argh! Another cliffy? I'm eagerly awaiting what the sight is that meets their eyes! ~Kiroku~
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Reviewed By: beautiful-surreal(too lazy to log in) On: April 21, 2010 13:23 PDT
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Oh that was GREAT! An absolutely sweet chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 02:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I certainly couldn't turn away from this story. I kept trying to finish it on my free time, and I really want to know what happens next. I love how you took time with the storyline, their relationship, and presenting some problems for suspence, which is how a every good story should be. So keep up the good work, and please update soon, but take your time. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!XD
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Reviewed By: Please please please On: April 06, 2010 05:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG UPTDATE!! I NED A NEW CHAPTER TO READ!! hehe omg i am loving this story its all i have read for the last week now!! please please please update soon
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