| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: ;3
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo! Isa LOVED the last chapter. I jus finished reading it and it was awsome! I CAN'T WAIT for the next one!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 03:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
think happy thoughts!!! your story is really good!!! and if you are the Baka King then just think of it this way... all the people who write cruel and bad reviews are bakas and thus your underlings... and thus MUST ALL bow to thier KING!!! lol... I hope that made you smile!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 20:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the new chapter :D I loved how close Inuyasha and Kagome got its like they broke a barrier between themselves. And I hate it when they get sooo close to kissing and dont! so thank you for sharing that feeling with me lol but anyways keep up the great work love it soo far!
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 15:02 PST
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:: twitches :: Cliff...hanger...EVIL. I'm going to kill something if I don't read the next part! I've read some really bad "Kagome becomes demon" Stories, but this one I actually like.
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Reviewed By: Light-Eco-Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 07:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to that flamer! They have no idea what they are talking about. The funniest flames that I've ever gotten are ones where the grammar and spelling is so bad that I can hardly read it. This is a really great story, and I can't wait for it to be finished to see where it goes!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 22:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a great story! Although I hope kagome stays a hanyou. Kagome with cat ears...sooo cute! I love inuyashas ears! The ears get me every time. The flamers are usually people who hate kagome/inuyasha stories. Or people who can't even write good stories.They are sad,sad people. So don't worry about it.
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying the story quite a lot, which is saying something since I usually can't get into the "Kagome turns hanyou" story lines at all. It was an unusual way to have her end up that way, though in the end it was because of her heart, which is the source of her strength. And thanks so much for the recommendation of my LaLD series, I do appreciate it. As far as flamers, I've come to the conclusion that most of them have no imagination and are incapable of writing themselves, so in order to make themselves feel better they trash those they're jealous of. They also never learned that if you can't say something nice, keep your mouth shut. They'll flame and call it Con Crit, but offer nothing useful. In any case, continue writing your story because it's quite entertaining - I did have to laugh out loud at Kagome at the water though Sango is lucky she lived to tell about it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: reader00
Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Good chapter! Thank you for updating quickly!! Hope you do it again!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2008 04:00 PST
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i loved the hot springs scene. your descriptive powers were great enough that anyone reading it had a crystal clear picture of what inuyasha saw. and the line at the end brought it all back, full force. the interaction between kagome and her grandfather kept them both in character very well, but being the angst lover that i am, i would have liked to read more of the feelings of rejection. it would have been nice to read the exchange between them. i loved the way that inuyasha stood at kagome's defense when confronted with both of them. that's a choice that even takahashi never had him make. i bet it will foster vindictive feelings in kikyou. great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 17:12 PST
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Love this story so far :D keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 11:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love it. The Hot Springs scene... Wet Kitty Kagome. I'll admit, I giggled. Well I more than giggled, but that isn't the point. I'm delighted by the way Kagome proved Kikyou wrong also, kind of like shoving it in her face... Now don't get me wrong, I am not a Kikyou hater, but sometimes she just needs a little... would 'humbling' be the word? Please please keep writing! Don't leave us hanging for long!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 02:09 PST
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note: one hanyou, many hanyou. one miko, many miko. one youkai. many youkai. ~japanese do not pluralize by adding 's'. ♣ that was the funniest 'hot springs' scene i've ever read! ♠ one wonders if kirara could give insights on kagome's instincts, she is technically nekomata and not neko but there are more similarities than not... ♦ i figure that since miko of that era were taught to destroy all youkai, their powers react the same way unless in tsubake's case, she already had an evil taint and her use of youkai put her in league with them. whether she had purifying power wasn't addressed. kagome, ignorant of youkai didn't have the prejudice to condemn a whole race. she sees good and bad without being swayed by the outer shell. her powers act accordingly, she could never accidentally purify any of her youkai friends nor could she purify the 'good' youkai she 'saved'. at least IMO. ♥ beguiled ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: Laur On: November 24, 2008 19:22 PST
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I love your stories, and this one has my hopes up. Humor goes a long way, and it is rare to read it in fanfics these days. But I can find it in yours! Yay! (Subnote: How about those Pats? Great game the other night.)
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Inu story that didn't dissapoint! I love the thought of Kagome being a cat Hanyou yet still having her spiritual powers! I'm very interested in the next chapters, I look forward to reading them!!
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 14:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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A Kagome turned Hanyou story that doesn't annoy me!! The reasons for her turning hanyou are what drive me crazy mostly. They are so.. well.. annoying!! For example she was one in hiding the whole time, or it just magically happened after her and Inuyasha do the dirty. And the whole... "OMG Inuyasha/Kagome and I can so totally be together now!!!#@$@#$" attitude drives me insane. I'm so glad that your doing this differently. Keep it up. Thanks a bunch.
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