| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 02:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT chapter.... Kouga is a great character... because you can twist him slightly and making him a "bad guy" or twist him in the other direction and have him as a "good guy" VERY versatile...
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Reviewed By: Light-Eco-Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 08:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's nothing wrong with trying things a little differently. It's what keeps us from getting bored with our own work. Believe me, it's happened to me. Update soon, please?
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 18:21 PST
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this chapter was very upbeat. it made me smile, and it made me laugh. i love your characterizations. i love the fluff in this chapter. the timing and natural progression are well done. but i'm still waiting for more angst!
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Title: Off to read your recommendation
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 05:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty relaxing chapter at four in the morning. a lot o bit of romance, some fun in the water, what more could you ask for.
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Title: GOOD
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 04:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it keep up the good work and write again soon k
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was laughing out loud at the retelling of InuYasha's encounter with the schoolgirls - too bad Kagome had to go and ruin it! and I'm so glad Kagome finally took the initiative to talk to him, and is finally interpreting his responses for what they are instead of what they're not. they've been keeping things bottled up for so long and they're bursting to be set free. Great update and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
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Title: GOOD JOB
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 06:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea your going with, its true in all other stories when she turns hanyou, they dont go all into the factor of her haveing to learn how to devlope here new sences ect... I cant wait till you write more, so do it soon please
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I loved the new chapter! Especially when his ego boosted and was like do you like my butt as much as your friends do? lol. I wish I couldn't seen Inuyasha in that clothing lol sorry I know too much information. But anyways I loved the new chapter awesome job keep up all the great work and I cant wait to read the next chapter! :D
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it when Mama decides to help out! I felt sorry for poor InuYasha between being mobbed by the girls at school, and then ending up slicing the number off of his hand before Kagome rubbed his skin off anyway. "Do you like my butt as much as your friends do?" And I just laughed out loud at that - along with a few other places in the chapter. It was very enjoyable and I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 04:14 PST
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i loved this chapter, and i think mama h. was a big reason why. you captured her easy grace so well. she is a great character to add, if the story lends itself to her. the writing in this chapter had such a natural flow. it was a joy to read.
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been seeing this story pop up on the eternal destiny site for a while now, but I waited to read until now. I do that alot jumping on the band wagon late just so I can spend more time reading. And man has it been fun reading so far. I'm scared about those two "siblings" and I can't wait for them to "find peace" so to speak
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Title: reader00
Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! I need more!!! Thank you for updating quickly!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 09:23 PST
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yes, i have a problem even in summer of sleeping without at least a sheet. very astute of him to deduce her problem. ♣ one hopes she could do something to help their foes see how they had changed for the worse and how their deceased friend would have wanted them to straighten up their acts. alas we cannot change another's obstinacy. ♥ great chapter! ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 01:50 PST
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i love the reflectivity of inuyasha being human while kagome is hanyou. sometime you'll have to have her physically protect him in that scenario. you did well with bringing out inuyasha's insecurities over the possibility of losing his place in the group. with kagome's enhanced abilities he has to be wondering if he's still really needed. you captured his reasoning and thought process so well in this chapter that it brought the pictures to crystal clarity in my mind.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the new chapter! so funny I wish I saw his face when she grabbed him and started running lol. And I also loved the bed scene :D soo cute and im looking forward to the fight I seriously thought it was gonna happen to lol but keep up the great awesomeness work!! :D
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