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Title: Previously know as Little_Red
Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 01:37 EDT
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I never understood why they just didn't have Inu Yasha make a public announcement saying he didn't support or oppose Muso... Muso still might have won but it would have helped... Oh well, whatever keeps the story going I guess... Anywho, I'm still waiting for Kagome to literally kick Sango's ass... It's building and building and something has got to happen between those two sooner or later... Great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha didn't take well to the news obviously. But what disturbs me more is that his so-called friends Miroku and Sango STILL don't seem to get Inuyasha at all. Sango's attitude in particular gets on my nerves. How could they not know that laying the weight of the city's well-being on one person's shoulders (particularly one who has sacrificed and been hurt as much as Inuyasha has) would do untold damage? That type of manipulation is reprehensible. I'm glad that Kagome let Miroku have it. I'd be even happier if she read Sango the riot act; Sango is entirely too self-righteous and judgemental towards Inuyasha. Yes, he's screwed up....but he deserves better from Miroku and Sango than he's getting. I guess they've gotten jaded since he's been messed up for so long. But...they really need to cut him some slack, particularly since they can see some real positive changes in his behavior.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 21:33 EDT
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And so the game begins....*sigh* How cruel can Sango and Miroku be to suddenly bring up a taboo topic?....Honestly this is such a good chapter. It makes a great turning point! Thank you for the update :D
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 12:30 EDT
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And so the plt thickens! Very good chapter! I am greatly enjoying this fic. Keep up the good writing. Hope to see an update soon, I'll keep my eyes on my inbox!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 12:26 EDT
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aww and Inuyasha was doing so well too! Everything seems to be taking a turn for the worst. And why do I feel like something is going to happen to Kagome to force Inuyasha to participate in the war? Well I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Were they, Miroku and Sango, really expecting Inuyasha to pull the citys collective ass out of the frying pan if another war broke out? That was the extent of their plan to handle another war if one should arise?! After seeing what the first one did to him I can't believe they would be so naive. At the very least they should have consulted with Kagome before talking with Inuyasha about the coming war. Naraku is still spying on Inu so I wonder if his setback will affect his plans? Not asking you to give anything away...just curious, is Tetsusaiga going to make an appearance?
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Reviewed By: ms.shay On: May 04, 2009 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very very good i love how you've writen it and the way the charcators particully inuyasha and kagome i hpoe you don't stop writting till THE END thank you so much for an excellent excellent fanfic ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 11:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT chapter. The "therapy" session in the department store with Inuyasha and Kagome was really illuminating. Inuyasha's self-hatred runs really deep. And Kagome truly is perfect for him. I LOVE reading their interactions. As for what Miroku and Sango found out...it doesn't look good. I truly hope that Kagome is able to help Inuyasha find himself again soon...because they are definitely going to need his help. And he is going to need all the strength mentally and physically that he can get.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 19:39 EDT
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Ha ha ha ha! Therapy session?! that's pure torture! There's nothing worse than shopping in the clothes deparment with a SHOPPER (person who looks, admires, and never shuts up). Inu-Yasha is really brave. Great chappie! Thanks for the very quick upload.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Inu really needs to forgive himself, to decide he wants to live again and that he deserves to be happy. Kagome has a plan to get him there! Unfortunately that's also playing into Naraku's hand. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 21:37 EDT
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Very good chapter. Kagome is slowly yet surely getting through to poor Inuyasha. Can't wait to see what else you have in store. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 21:14 EDT
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hehe yay Kagome is starting to get through to him. The department store theme was so cute, and so was Inuyasha's reaction to the blankets and pillows. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 20:55 EDT
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i love the way you make the major part of the chapter about inu yasha and kagome and then add a little at the end about miroku and sango, (as long as they didnt have any interaction previously) because most people try to keep it half and half, and i hate that... i want to read a story about inu yasha and kagome... not inu yasha kagome sango and miroku... they are important characters, but side characters none the less... great chapter update soon!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 18:53 EDT
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*nyaa!* *jumps up and down* SHOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, the ending is so cute :D Quite interesting chappie. Just one question. Doesn't Inu-Yasha have a heater?
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 15:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha waking up for the first time in years the way he did has got to niggle in his brain about what it might be like to wake up like that from now on...just a little incentive to get better. His physical addiction is so bad couldn't Kagome start to help him lessen that even tho he may not have discovered a good enough reason, as she puts it, to stop drinking and remain sober? I think she may underestimate her effect on him and her growing importance in his life. She really is the first person in years to show support, kindness, faith and friendship to him. Miroku and Sango treated him as more of a lost cause, I think...just hoping he'd keep together to help out in battles and caring more about his public face. Not that I'm totally blaming them...it's got to be incredibly difficult to continue watching a friend drink themselves into oblivion but I have to wonder if they ever really put themselves in his shoes? How would Sango feel if she had to kill her brother that day? Anyway, great story! Love the interaction between Inu and Kagome...hope he can find his reason soon! (or maybe Kags realizes that she IS his right reason...lol)
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