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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 22:54 EDT
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O.O I can't wait for the next part! I seriously love your story :) keep up the wonderful work
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good again. I can't wait for part 2!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 14:34 EDT
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aww poor Kagome getting so much stage fright! At least it gives Inuyasha something else to focus on besides depression. I can't wait to read how the rest of the evening goes...and after... Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 00:53 EDT
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I loved it, though the "battle scene" (if thats what you want to call it) was kinda, I dont know, it didnt really, "flow" ya know? Like it was jaunty and broken. But eh, practice makes perfect so... Anywho, I absolutly addored Inu Yasha in the last two chapters, and the way you ended that last one gave me one of those warm fuzzy feelings on the inside. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 21:44 EDT
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Good chapter. I really do love your characterization of Inuyasha!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 18:40 EDT
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aw inuyasha's behavior round Kagome is so cute
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 16:06 EDT
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hahaha Inuyasha is so cute when he's trying to make Kagome happy. I'm really curious how the gala will turn out... something tells me the Kagome might have to get hurt for Inuyasha to change his behavior around... but I dunno, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 15:44 EDT
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Updates :) Yay for updates! This is getting really interesting :) The increasing intimate relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is awesome :) Thank you for posting the story here *huggles*
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story. Inuyasha is such a complex character anyway, and you do such a good job with that in this AU. On one hand, he is an obnoxious and mean drunk.....but something about him makes people see that he has a sweet side that he tries desperately to hide. That's why Sango and Miroku have been so committed to trying to save him in spite of seven YEARS of failure and disappointment. And that's why Kagome came back the next day to try to help him even after he scared her so badly the night before. They don't want to give up on him because they KNOW that he is more than worth saving. I LOVE this story.
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: March 13, 2009 17:22 EDT
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Wow, I am really impressed with this story. It has a great gripping effect and it makes you want to find out what happens next. Also, I really do want to commend you on your ability to update daily. Thank you so much for doing that. I hope to see other chapters of your story soon. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 16:48 EDT
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awwww Inuyasha was so cool going to defend Kagome like that! And staying off a drink for her too. Now he just has to give it up completely... I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Once Inuyasha came out of his drunken stuper he remembered what he did....I'm just glad kagome didn't just up and leave.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 00:08 EDT
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awesome chapter. I liked how he was all innocently confused and wanted to know why she was so unKagome-like
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 12, 2009 23:38 EDT
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Loved this chapter soo much. I loved the vulnerability and the hug and how they seem to fit soo well. Thanks for all the great updates!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 22:31 EDT
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oh i love it... it made me cry and everything... and i love your promptness with updates...
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