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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 21:22 EDT
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TT.TT *sniff sniff* This chapter was among the most tear jerking ones I read. Great chapter like always *i need to find a new phrase; I'm starting to sound like a broken recorder* and seriously this was such a great update.
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 19:43 EDT
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I'm so hooked! I come home every day and have to check if there's another chapter! Today there was....yay!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 04:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this last chapter, its so sweet! Yay, he finally opened up! And you update so fast, thank you so so so so so so so so so much!!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: LustfulBeast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 06:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I read all of your chapters in a day, but I must say, it took me a while. I laughed a lot in some parts, and then I would have a shocked expression on the next. I really love this story already
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 01:06 EDT
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yay! Update :) funny....the mayor is still an idiot for being ignorant. :P Still, the story rocks! Keep up the wonderful work :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Inuyasha's story was sadder than I could have imagined. And you did an excellent job with all of the angst. Beautifully written. And I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 24, 2009 18:34 EDT
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I really loved the raw emotion of Inuyasha in this chapter and I can't wait to read more. A small part of me hopes that this time he won't drink himself into oblivion, but I've trusted your story so far and it hasn't let me down, so however it turns out I'm sure I will love it a lot. Thanks again for the new chap. :0)
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Title: *too lazy to log in*
Reviewed By: Little_Red On: March 24, 2009 16:47 EDT
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That was awesome! The tears were just starting when the chapter ended... My compliments on the cliff-hanger, very nicely done... I'd still be headed to Canada though... or Germany... Whichever...
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 16:23 EDT
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Aww poor Inuyasha. I'm glad the Kagome finally knows why though. Now she can start fixing him. Although I wonder how Inuyasha will be after drinking so much And how he'll deal with Kagome... I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 21:59 EDT
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Holy Crap! Oh poor Inu Yasha, I can just imagine the night he's going to have after this... Screw the one and a half bottles of whisky(sp?), I'd be flying to Canada... It was beautiful and heartbreaking. Now hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 01:01 EDT
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oh shit
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 22:57 EDT
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NO!!!!! YOu idiotic mayor! How dare you DX just when the couple were starting to get cozy T.T *i'm done* Lovely chapter like always. I really loved the walzt :)
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really like the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha...they are starting to open up to each other! I've been struggling through the whole story with thinking Miroku and Sango aren't very good friends to Inuyasha. I know there's lots of extenuating circumstances but they seem more concerned about the Order's image and that Inu can fight than with him. It's awful that they force him to go through that gala every year basically shoving the day he had to kill the woman he loved in his face. Poor Inu with that damn video! Will Kagome be able to stop the blowup?
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 17:05 EDT
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the dance was so cute! But the video was very unexpected....poor Inuyasha is probably going to freak out, huh? I hope Kagome can deal with the backlash. What a cliff hanger! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
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Title: *too lazy to log in*
Reviewed By: Little_Red On: March 18, 2009 18:07 EDT
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I'm curious as to how this is going to work out... and how was the gala changed? Did you say, or are we going to find out in the next chapter? Anywho, I loved the chapter, can't wait for more...
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