| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: ellisande [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2010 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story, can't wait to read the next chapter. May your muse be ever present. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2010 04:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you have not given up on this story because the story line is truly unique and intriguing. I not only want to find out who tortured and killed Bulma, but also I want to read about Vegeta protecting her and slowly turning her back into her old self. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: nicknicky On: January 11, 2010 13:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story going on here. can't wait for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Fixy On: December 17, 2009 09:09 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a fixation on this story!!! Please update soon, I'm enjoying it sooooo much :)
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Reviewed By: LazyA On: December 16, 2009 11:36 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree totally with everything Kinky Typo said!! This is trully original and I wonder where will you take the story! Can't wait for an update :)
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Reviewed By: anica On: November 25, 2009 16:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on, update on my birthday and make my day ;))
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Title: Chapter Four: Two Thumbs up!
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 18:57 PST
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I'm sorry I didn't get to comment earlier but I just wanted to say I'm very excited about this fic of yours. You always have very original stories but this is by far my favorite plot of them all. The dark theme is thick throughout this story but there is a beautiful light that shines through the characters and it seems to get brighter as the chapters continue. Bulma, afraid, paranoid, and all together terrified finds solace and strength in Vegeta, even if it's just his presence that fulfills her need for reassurance and peace. This is interesting because it's a sign of dependency and I'm sure Vegeta has never had someone depend on him for anything. Already he has shown that he is a man that has lived alone and has survived only thinking of himself. I'm thrilled to see how he will cope with Bulma's need for him and how much this dependency will escalate. Will Bulma become so addicted to the security Vegeta gives her that if he's not close will she have panic attacks or worse? And will he allow such things to happen? Will he allow her to live with such terror or will he save her from fear itself? I'm looking forward to see what you have planned for the two. I know you have two fics going at once but I really hope this one will updated soon because you have me on the edge of my seat. Will Vegeta help Bulma the pieces of her old self or will she conform to someone else? Someone that he will love when no one else will? Because who would love a crazy, paranoid woman? I can't imagine Yamcha will. Undoubtedly he will just compare her to her old self. Only the broken can love the broken. Gah! I'm just reeling with ideas of how this will turn out! I can't wait until more of the plot is unveiled. I will keep my fingers crossed in hopes of another update soon. Congrats to you and another awe-inspiring chapter my friend. I look forward to more chapters and hopefully I'll be able to make some fan art for this amazing story.
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Reviewed By: Chewy Booey On: October 29, 2009 01:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get so excited after reading each new chapter you post. They're so well written and keep you on the edge of your seat. I can always count on your stories to make my day! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Too lazy to sign in On: October 27, 2009 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is crazy. But I love it.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 01:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg that is so heartbreaking and pitiful at the same time. I can't say what I would do if I wa in her shoes but I could definately understand the level of paranoia. I have a friend who was raped a few years back and even to this day she is still a very jittery and nervous woman. Its a long road to recovery from something like that, but to actually die and be brought back to life I couldn't imagine. As with all your stories, excellent writing style, excellent characterization, deliciously unique story. Well done, can't wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: one31 On: October 26, 2009 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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when a woman destroys her silk underwear you know something is wrong! and when that woman is bulma something is very very wrong!! ;) can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: luckyme On: October 26, 2009 16:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yes!another chapter is up!a bit short but I understand you are busy...wow bulma is really deeply disturbed.. this is getting really interesting. you're idea is original and refreshing, I can't wait to read what will happen next. this is going to be your best work, if you play it good and I know you will ;) keep them coming :)
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Reviewed By: xaverri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 15:50 PDT
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:O Is Bulma gonna be ok ever? :( Poor girl! What a waste of all that sexy underwear, what is she gonna wear now I wonder ^.^ Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: surmise [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapters. The story grabbed me, hook, line and sinker! :D
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Reviewed By: ellisande [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 02:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see were this story leads and how their relationship develops. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. ^_^
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