| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: LP On: June 17, 2016 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it all on my day off. It was just wonderful! I really felt
like you stayed true to the characters and the story was
believable! I've been looking through archives and have scrolled
past this one a few times because I thought it would be too dark. I
was very pleasantly surprised. Bravo!
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Title: Amazingly Written
Reviewed By: JP On: December 31, 2014 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot was great and Vegeta's character was extremely well
written. One of my favorite fanfics. A fic you might enjoy is
"Empty House." Thank you for writing this and I hope you write more
long V/B stories like this one in the future.
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Reviewed By: jimmy_123 On: September 30, 2013 18:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
loved it, read it entirelly in 2 days, loved it from start to end. You have created an amazing story and for that i have to thank you. You should write more fanfics! I read you have a baby so congratulations too on that!! Fan.fucking.tastic... |
Reviewed By: Rachael/froglady15 On: March 25, 2013 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Just read it from beginning to end on my day off today. It was recommended to me by a friend. Glad I took the time to check it out. Extremely well witten and congrats on your baby girl. :) |
Reviewed By: Molpadia On: September 03, 2012 06:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! This fic was fantastic. I've never read a B/V fic like this before, so the idea is original to me. I like the fact you didn't try to cram all the DBZ characters into your fic. Your writing skill is amazing! Excuse me now while I go read your other fics ;) Thankyou for writing! |
Title: Top Work
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 10:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, now THIS is an ending that fits and completes its story. An incredibly intelligent and emotionally compelling story you've weaved which will not be forgotten in time. The character developement, not to mention amazing character depth is one of a kind, and has a bit more substance to it than your average fanfic, trust me to know.:P The way you tackled moral issues and tramau of the psych is what makes your story so special I believe, among other things. I love how you made VB's relationship run deeper than simply physical lust, because THAT is much more important and of course, makes for a better story.^^ Sorry for rambling on, just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the story. It has definitely made an impression on me. P.S. Congrats on your baby! Eugh, I've shared a room with a new born baby and his mother to know how tough it is so GOOD LUCK! Happy parenting. ;) |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2012 12:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please tell me there's going to be a sequel to this!!! |
Reviewed By: okieday17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2012 23:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
First off- congratulations on the new(-ish) baby! Mazel Tov my dear! Second--I love the ending to this (already amazing) story. I love that you don't have the overtly happy ending, with Vegeta going to Bulma and confessing his love- you leave it to us, as the reader, to understand their personalities and to know that Vegeta will find his way back to her when he is ready. Seriously- that is amazing that I can read it and not crave to know more. You set it up so well, I don't need the whack-you-over-the-head ending (if that makes sense??) Love the story, love your writing, and hope you bring us a new story when you can!! |
Title: Bravo!!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2012 13:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent!! Totally worth the wait. The end was very touching and yet still in character. Love the little tag of what the future holds, AKA baby. Very enjoyable story, thanks so much for writing and sharing it!! |
Reviewed By: kisskusje [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2012 10:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! |
Reviewed By: surmise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2012 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This recent chapter, even though I'm VERY late in reading it... it had me wanting to cry, actually. Dear goodness you write beautifully. Please do continue to do so! |
Reviewed By: surmise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2012 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This recent chapter, even though I'm VERY late in reading it... it had me wanting to cry, actually. Dear goodness you write beautifully. Please do continue to do so! |
Reviewed By: su On: January 15, 2012 18:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
congrats on your new baby. i hope you'll continue with this fic. it is really amazing. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2011 21:23 PST
Comment/Review:
The fatso, the pig, the pervert, the banshee, the brat, the weakling and the third class ... lol!!! |
Title: YAY
Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2011 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww it was a super sweet n emotional chapter it was great...i hope u continue the fic through way we know will happen next but obviously with ur creative touch! and maybe consider a sequel!! and congratulations on the baby!! Didn't know u were expecting! best of luck or congratulations if u already gave birth! :) and as a selfish reader puh leeeese don't stop writing! theres not that many DBZ (v/b) that are actually good left!!! ur going extinct!! thanks for the chapter! :) |
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