| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kinky-Typo On: October 30, 2010 18:41 PDT
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Wow it was smoking at the start of the chapter! Love the sexual tension. :)
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: October 13, 2010 23:09 PDT
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Now things are really starting to pick up. Can't wait to see how you weave the serial killer more into this piece.
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Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...that was amazing!!! omg! ur fantastic! i have to know what happens!! anyway u could update more frequently? please? for me? and the hundreds of people reading...and im sure more are constantly joining...PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: chewy booey On: October 08, 2010 01:29 PDT
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Dude, I got chills throughout this chapter. In a good way in the beginning, and in a freaked out way towards the end. Absolutely amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 02:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter started off hot and then left us longing. ARGH! So mean!! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Seidesilk On: October 06, 2010 23:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Another satisfying entry!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are truly talented. Thank you for sharing the your writing with someone who is "creatively challenged" such as I. I can literally feel every emotion that you are trying to convey in the characters. From sadness, terror, anger, and love. Thank you, this is truly an amazing fic. P.S I am also hoping that you will write a sequel Free My Soul. Please please write it! I am patiently waiting.
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Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 09:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, great chapter! i really do think this is the most creative/original piece i have ever read.. and i have read a lot over the years!! your among my favorite authors...ur up there with vegeta goddess, lisalu, and many others i cant even think of right now! please update more frequently..its my only complain lol
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Reviewed By: chewy booey On: September 16, 2010 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!! Can't wait for the next chapter! I swear, I check back here every day waiting for the next chapter and I get so PUMPED when I see it posted!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2010 17:05 PDT
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I really really like this story and hope that I dont have to wait for another month to pass in order to read a new chapter. Thanks for this chapter and hope to see one real soon. Keep up the wonderful work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Title: ooooohhhh
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2010 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is the serial killer going to make a come back? I hope so. Veggie will then have to wrestle with his pride and choose. OH GOD I cannot wait for the next update. Loved to see that Bulma is slowly coming right again, and not so crazy anymore. :D
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Title: UPDATE PRONTO
Reviewed By: Girness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to read more!!! -venus
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 09:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always...I hope you unpdate your other fics soon, too!
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Title: the evolution
Reviewed By: Nassau On: August 26, 2010 22:44 PDT
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Initially, this story really chaffed, probably because it seemed like it wasn't going to be resolved. I think I'm fundamentally opposed to getting someone into an awful situation and not seeing the towards the light. Imagine my delight when you took it up again. Now that we have some character progression going, I can breath a sigh of relief and start to engage with the two. You successfully wrote a bizarre and terrifying world that was almost too uncomfortable to handle. I know your style and I know this won't be easy for the two of them. Luckily, you have a knack for making the struggle worth it. With your stories, I always feel their suffering is what makes their accomplishments and their attraction so great. I continue to read and re-read everything you write. Thank you for the amazing yarn and I look forward to the next twist. It'll be epic.
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Title: AWESOME~!
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 06:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am looking forward to the next chapter; this is my kinda fic! I love thriller and mystery, and I love Bulma and Vegeta! This fic is progressing very nicely. I love the tension, I love how Bulma is so deeply affected by the experience, and how Vegeta is still Vegeta. I hope to see how the killer is caught, and I'm hoping that Bulma will overcome her fear, with Vegeta's help of course! Looking forward to this! I also hope for a twist about the killer's identity or something along those lines. :D
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