| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: tomorrowperfume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2011 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost couldn't believe it when I saw the e-mail last night that you had updated this fic! The way it ended last, I had almost thought it was complete. The way this one ended was sweet, tender, and now I have no clue what's going to come next, but I'm hungry for more. Please update soon! |
Title: beautifully written
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2011 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your new bundle of joy! This chapter was bittersweet. I teared up at the end of the chapter. Anyway, best wishes to u and your family. I'll be anxiously waiting for your next update. I know how busy it can get with a new baby, but I hope u continue to write your wonderful stories. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2011 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an intense chapter! I'm so happy that bulma got her revenge. I'm sad, cause I know the end is near for this fic. I love your b/v fics. I'm sure I've said that a thousand times, but truly do. |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2011 09:15 PDT
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Oh, yay! Hope Vegeta and Bulma get there first. LOL. |
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: May 11, 2011 17:43 PDT
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Awwww shit! Fooled all of us! I absolutely love how you threw that twist in there. Totally didn't see that coming. Can't wait for the next chapter! You're amazing! |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: May 11, 2011 13:59 PDT
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This just keeps getting better and better! I hope Vegeta and Bulma get to him before the cops do. It would be nice for Bulma and Vegeta to mess him up really badly before they kill him. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Pretty please try really hard to get the next chapter up soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Creatlach On: May 08, 2011 03:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems the majority of the B/V angst fics are focused on healing Vegeta's tortured mind. It was a novel change to see him playing caretaker to Bulma's demons, with an intriguing story line and highly readable prose. Well done. |
Reviewed By: Feuria On: April 13, 2011 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAY I'm so giddy now that this story isnt finished and i dont have to post a comment at a dead end |
Title: o___O
Reviewed By: Boonie On: April 08, 2011 04:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Ummmm I've officially ran out of words that can describe how incredible is your work! |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: April 03, 2011 09:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like how V&B are progressing, and I liked Vegeta's internal struggle. Very fun to read! Like I said before, this keeps getting more and more exciting. :D |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2011 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how u depict vegeta's internal battle between the individual he once was against the person he is becoming. It is a very realistic portrayal of his character. The interaction between b/v seems so real and passionate. I love this fic. |
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: March 31, 2011 09:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was awesome! So much attention to detail, I could picture everything happening. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Coralista On: March 31, 2011 08:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes! Your V/B at their best :)I hope you don't finish it too soon, I'm enjoying this too much :D |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: March 28, 2011 14:12 PDT
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This keeps getting more exciting! I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2011 13:25 PDT
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Wow, interesting development! Wonder if he's the guy? I have a feeling Bulma's going to have to face her fear. I like seeing the police investigation too; it's hard to be away from my two favorite characters (lol) but you've made that part interesting enough, I've come to like the cops too, especially the younger one. Poor kid. Great update, looking forward to the next one! |
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